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Everything posted by drsawzall
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As studies for all involved will be coming to an end shortly, I am curious as to what the immediate future will look like...
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Like others have said, we would love to see more of these two...and Sophie!!! Well done and thanks!!
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Ghil seems to be stuck in a situation of his own devising, finding comfort in the self-imposed pity party he has created for himself... While he has thoughts of something better, he conveniently creates blocks that obstruct that path. I had to be doing something that sent them running but I couldn’t for the life in me work out what it was. I’d been accused of being clingy to then accused of being too distant. It was like I had no middle ground and was always juggling the two extremes. I just always felt like something was off. Like there was a great wall of glass that was always separating me from other people. I couldn’t connect. Could never really get my feelings across and eventually grew cold to theirs. Getting to know someone just to have them leave was far worse than never getting to know them at all, so I just stopped. He's inured to wallowing in his misery...One has to wonder just what will it take to break his shell??
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Chapter 3 - The Queens
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 3 - The Queens
I'd have to agree that the Demifae/Hunters were ignorant of the peril they faced, did they not realize they were outclassed, outnumbered, and unaware of the danger they faced??? “Peggy, why did these soldiers come here?” Auntie Peg took a closer look at the crumpled bodies of the two men who were not in pieces. “Oh, they’re Demifae. So then, they were after the kids.” Dotty Marbles gasped. “Hunters?! I thought this city was cleaned up and safer now. The Messiahs are gone, but I haven’t thought much about the Demifae. What is wrong with some people?!” “As far as I’m concerned,” Auntie Peg stated, “these idiots were on a suicide mission. The children in our care are some of the most powerful beings on the planet.” What's to stop them from trying again here or elsewhere?? -
I'm not so sure Bryan has lost the plot here, given his and Calebs testimony, which can't be ignored speaks volumes. Up to date, with the testimony given, there isn't a snowballs chance in hell that the, "used ass wipe" has any sorta chance in winning this case, in the real world that is...Come on folks...the testimony of the 20 or so "girlfriends "sunk the scum suckers case. Any other way of trying to explain or portray this. is an exercise in furious self-flagellation...something I have ever rarely ever been accused of... What remains to be seen is just how low the author is gonna take us.. And I for one, can't wait!!!. Bring it on!!! Logic and reason be damned!!! Not that I have any strong opinions....
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Chapter 2 - Ninyani
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Ninyani
I often wonder why we focus on the least of the issues that we face to the detriment to those issues that impact us the most.,..,. -
Well, there were enough clues along the way, what are the odds he has the baby on the mothership...and Connor is still an unrepentant ass...The only character worth rooting for got left behind in Florida, I miss Jack....
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Oh my f'ing word....WTF and a few other choice phrases....in what universe do they think they have a chance at getting Caleb after everything that has happened??? Thomas Walker has finally cooked his goose...what is to stop someone in the courtroom from letting him know the Judge's order.... Bryan, you dolt...we understand your anger but...there are times discretion is the better part of valor..... Why is the human chimney still with the fuctard???
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Chapter 2 - Ninyani
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Ninyani
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And here in glorious Massachusetts, it's gonna be 80 degrees today with no humidity!!
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Well, that was one heck of a chapter and a cliffhanger, it's time for me to make sure I can settle my nerves...seeing as how they are fraught with anticipation for the next chapter...Thank everloving goodness there is a delivery being made...Phew!!!
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Chapter 1 - Missing Ilya
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Missing Ilya
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Prologue - Tygo & Filiou
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Prologue - Tygo & Filiou
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Sad news indeed but as @akascrubber pointed out, we've come a long way in treatment for these types of injuries... Why do I get the feeling that once things sorta settle down, Rocky just may prove to be the little engine that could when it comes to Manny's recovery.... And @weinerdog may be on to something as Bass is one of my favorite beers, now where can I meet a like-minded Bass??? And no, you boy's and gentlefolk...not at all what you are thinking, however my Bass should have a large....
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I think you've been struck by the curse of a fantastic chapter, a story that needs at least another chapter or a dozen, sorta like those potato chips but waaay cuter....
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This and short while ago we've had inklings as to Oscar's mother and their relationship, in a previous chapter he was very derogatory in a comment that referenced her and now the death staredown below...I am curious as to why there isn't a warm relationship between the two.... Christmas Day celebrations with the whole family were spent at Yanchep for a change, and it appeared to be going smoothly, although I was getting the stare down by my mother, which I was not quite sure what it was about, and I made a mental note to ask my grandparents about it, once they were on their way home to Moore. mm
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Chapter 69 - Epilogue - Golvinte
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 69 - Epilogue - Golvinte
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Chapter 69 - Epilogue - Golvinte
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 69 - Epilogue - Golvinte
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All the comments above are spot on, could not agree more with them!! Keith needs to remember he owes Maria nothing as she certainly wasn't pure as the driven snow...so to speak...I've worked with and for the Delia types...I generally found those sort to be like a meandering late summer river, so much wider than deep....
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Trouble has a way of following our hero's...what sort of adventure will they encounter? It is a shame that Theodrik could not transport them...
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Congrats quokka!!!!! It is a remarkable achievement!!!
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Chapter 68 - The Ulaa-Lah
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 68 - The Ulaa-Lah
And just think, with the inordinate amount of distance to cross, just how many difficulties our intrepid hero's will encounter...Just remember... -
It looks as if the Shadow cross arrived well ahead of the boys...will they be stationed all over the city???
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Wee...what can one expect when everyone won't talk to each other...but at each other...
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Chapter 67 - The Computer
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 67 - The Computer
Oh my!!!! Will they be able to retake the Ulaa-La with a minimum of trouble and make the bastards responsible for the deaths of hundreds of billions sentient species pay for their misdeeds??? It's past time to open a can of...
