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Kind of like Abbot and Costello's "Who's on First" comedy sketch....

Oh, my goodness, looks like kingdoms are being lost/given away everywhere...

Talk about an open and shut case...the evil twin was so careful in plotting and planning, but very neglectful as to matters in the home....

They were guests in company of others, there are times and places to fight your battles, this wasn't one of them. It was as I said inconsiderate and rude...

Could this be true love???

An interesting chapter and yes, the boys were reckless...Devin especially so...the boys need to learn that sometimes discretion is the better part of valor. That sometimes taking into consideration that other people's feelings and concerns need to be respected...talk about rude and immature... “And Devin and I are going to do this,” I stated firmly while looking directly at my mom.

But does Marc know about the last conversation between Janek and his scumbag brother???? And....No fair leaving us with coitus interruptus......grrrrrr!!!!

Another chapter that had me totally delighted...and the bonus was even though I was laughing so hard, I was able to keep dry!!! No trip to Mr. Washing Machine for me!!!

And I thought 'hot/goat yoga was weird....

I have to think that rather than a serial monogamist, Donald Mitchel was an exploiter, not only for his art but his peccadillos... It was not a remarkable story; two men, one experienced, the other naïve and inexperienced. For one it was a pleasant diversion and a means to an end; Donald Mitchell seems to have been what Mother calls a serial monogamist. True to the current person, but liable to change. Greg, however, was the focus of Mitchell’s intense artistic scrutiny as well. This created expectations that Mitchell had neither ability nor intention to fulfil. The result was some fine art and one fucked-up kid.

Another classic from our very talented author, in this tale we get to visit a new world full of possibilities. A richly described story of love, one can only hope to revisit sometime in the near future!!!

Truly delightful and such a sweet story about love!!! And the understanding that deep feelings need room to grow and not forced like a hothouse flower.... I want better for Derek, he decided then and there. I want him to be happy. And then he was filled with surprise at his very own thoughts. Happiness was not something one could command. It could be given, yes. Or, the basis for it could be given. But the feeling itself? It must come from within, not without. So the question became, how to have Derek make his own happiness, while also allowing Kieron to share in it?

A very imaginative tale and as noted above, it seems like another chapter(s) should follow. Thoroughly enjoyable!!!

So looking forward to the continuation of this story, take your time, get in to a healthy routine, we'll be waiting for the next !!!

Yea...patience is a virtue...or so I'm told, so happy to see you back!!!

Oh Riley, prenup and work on sex or not, with a financial kiss at the end.... Of course your brother is a royal twat, it may be a way to deal with him as well, like as in afar...only home for family occasions....

An eye for an eye and soon the whole world will be blind....

Time for a Motel 6 perhaps, that or a match or an exorcism...and the pictures must hold a clue as to who the red-headed lady really is and the bad man, could it possibly be the grands???

Not my scene at all but enjoyed the dynamics of this story and as @Mancunian and others pointed out, love is love for all of us who comprise a world of many flavors...well done and I do have a thought as to who the author is by a clue that described a location...

This is the proverbial calm before the storm...so many loose ends to decipher...

Much to pack in with this chapter but the best line was...“--Allegedly"

Proof that Ga is possibly the best story site out there....Ditto...ditto...ditto!!!!!!!!

from Ch 12... Mikiesboy 139,727 Posted July 20 Popular Comment On 7/20/2024 at 3:36 PM, drsawzall said Thank you, drsawzall. Human mothers aren't much different from mother tigers or other animals in terms of protecting their young. Don't piss them off, and don't get in their way. Human feeling lasts a lifetime however... And we can empathize with others who have lost their child. Ransom is an interesting option I hadn't thought of. I suppose you might be able to spin that. It's a good idea. Regarding your other thought, yes, there's a good chance of them talking and dreaming together. I have to hazard the visit to Turkey may not pan out, in fact may be a sad disappointment

All the comments above are spot on, and loved this...thank you secret author!!! BTW...the following neatly sums this story up...

Falling down a rabbit hole are we?