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  1. Rick and his girlfriend seem to be like ships passing in the night...
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    "I'm Awake"

    The vengeful prick in me would somehow leak it to TMZ when all done…however destroying her through the “system “ is more appealing..
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    "I'm Awake"

    Just loved this chapter, can we have the next one now...Liam knows it will be a long legal battle, and he will pay for it!!! We can tell from the interview that it will take time... Mateo, I thought I hated you...Now I know everyone needs a Mateo in their life... Marina...you truly show your true colors, and find out your house of cards, and it is just that... @Summerabbacat, you're missing out on one of the best bitches, witches, C U Next Tuesday femme fatales in quite some time!!! If I had one quibble, Liam should have told Marina..."Fine I will come back...once you sign our new agreement!! Please...tell us this convo was taped...please!!!!
  4. We can't bring his mother back from the dead, nor inject common sense into Hunter's father, who has a choice to make, his son, or the government... We see Hunter thinking Juan Camio is more like his father, thank goodness he can think that, but it is a truly sad commentary.. Thank goodness he is at least taking the step to actually talk to someone...
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    Chapter 9

    Much is being unsaid here. What is Daryan not telling us? What is the source of tension, if not animosity, between the two? What is this Yarima? Could she be the one who gave Ain so much trouble, or something that presents a danger to the Orinovo? And what is stuck up the Bulwark's ass?
  6. A lot, if not all, of Hunter's issues spring from his family... the loss of his mother... the deliberate absence of his father, and now his father asking him to, effectively, become a spy with Miguel. We all know it is a humongous disaster waiting in the wings. If... no, this all goes to shit, will Hunter and Miguel find themselves hiding at the little farm??? I can't at the moment see this ending well...at all...and as to Yelson, it should have ended much sooner...just sayin... As we pulled away in the SUV, I watched Yeison in the rearview mirror, standing in the doorway with his mom’s arm around his shoulder. He waved until we turned the corner. Juan Camilo drove in silence for a few minutes, then said, "You know that lunch? Probably cost her two weeks of her salary."
  7. Rick isn't falling in love...he's already fallen...
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    Chapter 4

    What's for dinner now...he was warned about wandering...
  9. A very lovely chapter amongst friends, truly enjoyable and good on Ian!! Learned a new word today...stumm https://www.collinsdictionary.com/dictionary/english/stumm
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    Chapter 15

    The poor dog...ooops...I mean Axl... “What? No!” Axl cried, then paused. “I mean… I don’t know! He’s a Merrick! They’re all weird! But he wasn’t interested! He looked at me like I was a mannequin! It was the most un-sexy thing that’s ever happened to me, and I once got locked in a walk-in freezer with Mrs. Henderson’s prize schnauzer!”
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    Chapter 14

    When I read this at the kitchen table, I realized that my late breakfast will never be the same, nor my dustbuster, or the toast...and who knew scrambled eggs were aerodynamic? “I have a question,” Orel asked suddenly stepping back and cocking his head like an owl. “You, from what I have been led to understand, prefer a more passive receptacle role, is this correct?” “You’re asking if I prefer to bottom?” Finn blinked as he sipped his coffee. “I tend to, it’s… I enjoy it. So… yes?” Orel looked thoughtful, “Should I not be the one to deliver the sausage?” “We, err… need to work on your terminology,” Finn tried not to smile. “Perhaps you should um, not be watching so much porn for a while?”
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    Chapter 14

    Orel just keeps on amazing me. To date, he has to be my favorite citizen. He knows that Finn prefers the 'passive' position. I suspect that once he figures out all the ways to fire his cannon with Finn, he will be like the Energizer Bunny!!! I'm liking extra all-natural sausage...mmmmm!
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    Assakia.

    Well done, this is a captivating tale, one that begs for more!!!
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    Chapter 8

    A disaster barely avoided, and what have they found...not only in what might be in the document Fenn found...but in each other and an honest conversation about feelings, and just as importantly, how best to work together, so they do not overextend their abilities!!!!
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    Decatur

    Location was just fine, family background as well...I come from a large Swedish family; my father was 1st generation, and it just goes to prove that love of family is what counts. It reminded me of so many family reunions we had over the years.... and my mother was a direct descendant of Resolved White from the Mayflower... This was just so well done and a pleasure to read...
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    Christmas Lunch

    Oh boy...all this meddling...
  17. I can't agree with Kerry... practice makes perfect...I'd be going back for additional 'lessons'...
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    Chapter 3

    Well...that was an auspicious start....
  19. A long-distance relationship, in which Rick is not committed to, and feelings based on "supposed to" is a disaster waiting in the wings, if not handled correctly...
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    Chapter 4

    Where there is one rat, there will be others. I strongly suspect the Bishop has designs on what Sir Kaylen holds from the keep to the surrounding lands of Wynthrope. I believe one of our rats, Brother Matthes, is working at the behest of the Bishop to achieve those very aims...
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    In Fair Verona

    If our boy is lucky, he'll be out of action for some time...
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    Stormy Seas.

    Yes...what now? Ruindolon smiled, “Yes. Thank you. We are.” Tristan turned back and looked up at the giant cliffs behind them. What now? he wondered.
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    The Dome

    Such a tragic loss and waste of potential....
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    Chapter 1

    I'm falling for Gram, what a sweetheart....
  25. drsawzall

    Prologue

    Surprise!!!
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