RIDE THE LIGHTNING
The air hung over the sleepy day, heavy and stagnant. The sun was a merciless presence, baking the ground and creating shimmering waves of heat reflecting off pavement and sidewalks. Flowers wilted under the dull drowsy droning of summertime insects.
Oscar didn't mind the heat but he could feel the sweat that gathered on his forehead and scalp to run down his face and neck. He wiped his forearm across his face and continued to push the lawnmower across the green expans
It was clear from the moment that Oscar saw Axel on stage that he wanted him. Both men have secrets, and they both turn out to have deadly consequences.
I've written M/M and I've written M/M/M but not very much of it. I like M/M/M because it requires a little more effort and creativity on my part and I like seeing how other people take it on as well. But I also love a good sexy M/M as well. M/M/M/M+ is a bit much for me to keep up with.
Thank you for commenting. It was a lot of fun writing these guys, and especially seeing how much shy, withdrawn Mikeal has changed and grown. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Interesting. I do notice that I tend to use a lot of the same phrasing in my stories, I'm trying to work on that. It's helpful when someone points things out to me, though. My boss came to me one day and said that I tend to mix up compliant and complaint, but I think that is more of a result of doing documentation at the end of the day, when my brain is already fried. I do pay better attention now though.
I really enjoyed this. You did an excellent job of getting inside the characters head, showing how he thought, how he struggled, it all felt very real and raw. Well done.
Thank you so much. Caleb went through a lot and I think almost everyone hated what I did at the end. (I'm not sorry ). I'm glad you found your "Noah" and that your ending was happier than thiers.
Thank you so much. Caleb went through a lot and I think almost everyone hated what I did at the end. (I'm not sorry ). I'm glad you found your "Noah" and that your ending was happier than thiers.
This is super sweet and adorable, though I think I fall into the "Kristina is weird" camp. But the interactions between Josh and Brennan were adorable, especially with the shoelaces at the end.
Good article. I think it can be hard sometimes to know when to hint and when to show and when to just breeze by something to get to "the good stuff". There was a lot of insight here. Thank you for sharing!
I'm glad you like it. And yeah, Elijah has a bit of a fucked up world view.
And we all know my feelings towards the color yellow.
Thank you for reading and commenting.
How do you have the time to read ASOIAF books three times? I got to book 3 or 4, realized that he wasn't done with the series, and was like...screw this. Those books are crazy long.