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This was an emotional ride. I don't know what was sadder - paper being a rarity, opening the door for a few moments could literally cost you your life, or the fact the daisy vanished. Nicely done.
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oooh. Nice twist to this. Really enjoyed but wonder where the story goes from here. Sad to hear this wasn't their first time out and it is probably because they are gay. Hope to see more.
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Well, there was a twist I wasn't expecting. Great story, deceptive, and fun to read.
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Newsletter game - Where am I?
comicfan commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in Newsletter game - Where am I?
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My dear Val, I finally get to say this to you - I want more!!!! It is interesting to find a star, being accused of fatherhood, who takes one look and immediately knows who the father is. Makes me wonder if it a brother or uncle, or maybe a stunt double. Hope for an answer.
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So the poor Champion has been in a few fights and won. Seems his sponsor is responsible for everything. The sponsor dresses him, arms him, and prepares him for a month. Add it that he reminds me of the 80''s song, I like them big and stupid, and it makes you hope that the champ will turn out to be so much more. Interesting world you are building. Hope for more.
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Seems there are certain phrases that resonated. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Always love a tale that starts with bloodshed and deception.
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Don't worry Pup. Going for a rewrite that will be an anthology length.
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Nope, nothing at all to do with Jonas.
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lol. Everyone wants him for laundry. Glad you enjoyed it Adi.
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Glad the ending came as a surprise, but you still enjoyed it.
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Thanks Jeff. Was one of my earlier pieces, but enjoyed it.
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Imagine having the power to change someone and make them totally fit into the world already. To communicate with earlier versions of yourself and it isn't all they can do as a cat. Now that cat is human. Beware. Lol
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Glad you enjoyed it Drew. Valkyrie always wants more.
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Seriously considering going back to flesh this out. Glad you enjoyed, Gary.
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Please, it's just clothing, no ropes or whips. Lol. Besides he is just that boring.
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Always good to be a little ballsy.
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I never like doing the expected. Besides if the fairy can grow to six foot tall, he might as well be acid tongued.
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As you can see I've been getting things out. I'm working on a dragon story, but having learned from past mistakes I am not putting up a single thing til it is complete. That way my beta and editor will see it all and can tell me all my problems and my readers won't be stuck if life sends me off course. So enjoy the shorts and anthologies until I finish my dragon story.
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Yeah. I never do normal.
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Val, why I am not surprised.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Hmm. The fairy tells him he needs a brownie. Not sure where I'll take it. Still working in my dragon story.
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Bradley stood with his front door open and found a park. Bradley stared, shocked, but then he had a bowl of cereal and a large mug of coffee sitting on his kitchen table. There is no way a park could have taken over a busy street that connected the two parts Newport Corners, could it? The only question was who had rung his doorbell at this ungodly hour on a Sunday morning? Bradley yawned and started to close his door, content in knowing this had to be dream, when suddenly a small pink and v
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