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So here I am on a nice, cold sunny Sunday morning thinking about getting my bike out after breakfast and before the formula one car race starts and has there not been a pormpt story I wanted to read? And the woosh Donnie is in an alternate universe. At least it feels like that. Is this a 'Fringe' show I missed? So intriguing Cole. I just hope you'll find something that triggers your mind next Friday.
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Birthday Party and Jealous Conniption Fits
Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Birthday Party and Jealous Conniption Fits
LOL That's perfectly okay for me. I will put up a warning for you, should I ever write something like this again: Caution! Drama queen~ness!How's that? Hope you'll still visit my bar someday. -
I never watched 'Sex in the City', so I can't tell. But I understand, sometimes characters in stories just aren't our cup of tea. Even if they have so much potential to change...hahaha. Thank's Carlos
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And I'm sorry for the delay. But now there is more room for speculation...Well, at least the next chapter will be much longer, at least for my usual chapter length. Thank's for your comment, Dave.
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And nobody complained about the donuts...Whew! You know I had my problems with this chapter. Thank you Cole! *hug*
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And I feel all warm and fuzzy when I read a comment like this, Irri. Thank you!
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See, that was what I thought. A small comfort.I really tried to avoid this delay, but sometimes things just happen. Tim, what can I say, I love your comments, sometimes your predictions are freakingly correct, at least about who tops how.
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Still slaving away at Rick and Matteo’s All right, I was officially the temp waiter and the chopping boy - you know, the poor guy who has to chop all the vegetables and whatnot in the damn kitchen. It was in my best interest of course, because it ‘prevented me from becoming gloomy’. Thank you very much, Matteo! Then there was the small issue of having to get up at four in the morning. ‘Come on Jonah, get up already, we're going to the central market! You need to learn how to distinguish good f
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No prompt: Date Day part II
Aditus commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in No prompt: Date Day part II
Too cute - and very nice smoothing the way for whatever you're planning for Rob by what you said about Melanie. Can't wait for part III. -
Now he comes up with the boat prompt and I have to figure out how to put the boat in the bar.
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Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (I)
Aditus commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (I)
Part I: Cautious approach. Very nice. I pictured them sitting on the kitchen floor comparing parental notes. Can't wait for part II. -
As everyone else I really love this chapter. You illustrated Roy's fear quite well. And of course I love the Roy personification, aka kitty Timmy. LOL But did you have to scare me this much with Roy almost dumping Chad. Speaking of roy~ally f***ing up. Anyway, I can't say it enough: FINALLY!
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A Turkey in July - Prompt 370
Aditus commented on comicfan's story chapter in A Turkey in July - Prompt 370
Now I know I'm not alone with my cravings for ginger bread in summer and strawberry cake in winter! And as Cole said: 'what we do for the one we love' . Thank you! -
Chapter 16 The All Important Meeting
Aditus commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 16 The All Important Meeting
I have to admit I was a little surprised at how fast Dennis and Abel got serious, although I'm glad they did. And Jesus Christ poor Dennis. I really liked the chapter. I wish I had the time to read the rest in one go. -
Ha! The kept man proposal was the prompt theme. I thought it was funny. And you're right, that's what I hope: to play with the bar location,the people who work there and of course Martin and Roman.'Living up to expectations...James...' Thanks, Carlos.
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You put your finger on one of the key-question here. Do you want him to be the person? BTW Lisa told me that when you’re talking about one person the universally, gender-neutral pronoun is now considered ‘he’ or ‘his’. So technically it could also be a woman.
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LOL. So glad I could help... hahaha. You know, I read this review together with my coffee and I had to put it away as to not spill it all over my lap top. 'why his eyes are sad and his ass is in Sicily' rofl I'm facing Monday with a smile. Thank you, Nlaudenslager!
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I see what I can do. Thanks for the feedback, sacredlove.
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Let's see what the next prompts are. Maybe? LOLThanks Lisa.
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Thank you for reading and encouraging me, Cazpedroso.
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Good, good. I'm really glad this crazy thing worked so well. Thanks, Nlaudenslager! I hope the aspirin is working.
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Okay. Thanks Val, I'm glad you think it is worth to be continued.
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Wouldn't that be cool? Having your very own piano man? The feedback is very encouraging; I think I'll be doing this. Thanks, Cole.
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How is this fair? She's getting something and he's not! Wouldn't the mole find out eventually? I smell something fishy! And now you're on! I want to know more.
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How it began. ‘Martin I’ of ‘The Lonely Heart Club – a prompt story’ (This is a chapter of my prompt collection 'Aditus' prompts and circumstances' Roman I Roman watched the waitress meandering between tables, skillfully balancing the silver tray on one hand. He had given her a generous tip so that she’d made the extra tour, bringing only his request over to the piano player. Martin’s hands danced over the keys. Smiling, he nodded at her when Anna placed the tray on top of his sheet music.
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