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  1. joann414
    Great chapter Thorne. Lot of interesting things going on. So Mel is Dave's cousin. Lot of food for thought. Good job
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    You certainly outdid yourself here. This was an emotional chapter that portrayed your character's feelings perfectly. Great job
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    So, when is the next chapter? lol Well, they are friends now or are they acknowledging more? All I can think of is Dave's father's reaction for some reason. It feels like a dark cloud hanging over all of this. You are doing a great job with the story!
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    Now they need to talk already. HOw can NIck pretend that nothing happened and what about the jacket? Has it been returned? At least Dave is not freaking out over this thoughts. Great writing
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    Nick's instincts about Craig were right on the money. NOt only is he creepy, but he is a mean drunk! Well, something happened between the boys and it scared the shit out of Dave obviously or he would not have left Nick sitting in the cold hurt.
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    So, Mel is a girl? How does Nick know this for certain? Can't say I was surprised about what went down at the party. So, who was Dave jealous of? Hmmmmm YOu certainly write a mind bending tale. NIce work Thorne
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    It's funny that a sand castle started this relationship. I don't think either Nick or Dave know exactly where to go from here. Public enemies and closet friends? Who knows. I agree. Linda is a bitch and seems to use Dave for her popular status also. Can't wait for next chapter. OH:P I don't have to wait. LOL Great job
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    Well, decided to check out this one too. Beginning definitely got my attention. On to next chapter.
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    Chapter 3

    joann414 commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Beautiful chapter. I could feel the love and other emotions!
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    Chapter 2

    joann414 commented on Renee Stevens's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Jake seems great and Jamie a wonderful mom for tolerating the dog for the weekend also. The parent teacher metting next week huh????
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    Mean girls can't hold a candle to mean boys. I can't wait to see what happens.Hurry with next chapter!
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    Chapter 9 Division

    joann414 commented on flawlesss's story chapter in Chapter 9 Division

    Kade always seemed to be attracted to Braylon in my opinion Just glad they finally figured it out. No way in hell would I trust Korbyn at this point. I would have to test him in some way to test his loyalty. Very interesting story. Keep it up!
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    Pretty Boys

    joann414 commented on Thorn Wilde's story chapter in Pretty Boys

    Circle called this disturbing. My words would be profoundly unique. Simply written, and you got the point across. Good job
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    Piperton

    joann414 commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Piperton

    Longer chapter please!!!!!!!!! Yes, it seems that MIchael does have a good side. Why am I thinking that he was wanting Asher's attention all along? Jonesie knows what he wants Looks like Asher may become part of the team. Wonder who wil make the first pass?
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    Well written and entertaining story. It is always so sad for your best friend to leave. Nice anthology!
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    Short Story

    joann414 commented on Jack Scribe's story chapter in Short Story

    What a charming and entertaining tale. It was so dang funny in places. I need a Tink! Love this
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    Epilogue 2

    joann414 commented on rec's story chapter in Epilogue 2

    Poppa M.'s wife got to see MIcah perform! What a lovely add to the group. I appreciate you sharing this wonderful tale of self discovery about these two great young men who made the journey together.
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    Epilogue 1

    joann414 commented on rec's story chapter in Epilogue 1

    Good idea! The boys work well together in their endeavors. lol
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    Chapter 41

    joann414 commented on rec's story chapter in Chapter 41

    Acceptance is wonderful but full acceptance can take awhile and I think David and Micah are smart in letting Betty get used to the idea of them. Contentment always make someone more productive and Micah is proof. Great Chapter!
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    So, from a fairytale to the movie "The Notebook"? Very unique twist
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    Chapter 1

    joann414 commented on Bondwriter's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Very cute twist on Goldilocks and the three bears. Enjoyed it very much
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    This it totally too cute for words. I loved it
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    Very cute story!
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    This is definitely an example of 'don't judge a book by it's cover'. I have looked at this story a thousand times and tried to wrap my mind around the title and what on earth it was about. Now, I know and enjoyed it so much. The androids were so cute and wonderful companions for Cinder. Glad that I finally read this! Quite a twist on the Cinderella story but I think this one is my fav
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    Chapter 40

    joann414 commented on rec's story chapter in Chapter 40

    Betty has quite the temper but David rose to the occasion. Great work!
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