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Confrontation and control
avidreadr commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Confrontation and control
A wonderful chapter. I hope the twins marry soon and their father - no, let's just say sperm donor - is gone from their lives. I look forward to more of the twins, their mates and the whole family. -
Chapter 34 Queen of Spades
avidreadr commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 34 Queen of Spades
I knew Candy couldn't be trusted. What a bitch. I think Kendall is handling it right and they need to contact their lawyer PDQ. -
Great ending for a great story. Thank you for giving us this story and these people.
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I so hope the gun was fired in shock and didn't hit anyone, except maybe the officer. What a lousy trick to play on your faithful readers!!
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Great chapter. It's wonderful how everything is coming together but there's a pessimist inside of me that worries. It will be great for Kendall to have his parents close and their child will be truly loved - and spoiled.
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I thought their little plan played out quite well. Now I look forward to seeing Silas settle down even more and reuniting with the band.
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Chapter 32 Four of a Kind
avidreadr commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 32 Four of a Kind
I like where both couples are right now. I'll keep my fingers crossed that everything goes as planned. -
When you write someone as a bitch, you don't fool around! I just hope that there are no more major hurdles to come. I can see Candy trying to bleed them for more money as her pregnancy commences. I hope she realizes, after she signs the contracts, that she has given M & K written proof of her lack of morals.
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I love the way this story is coming along. It's good to see the old Chelsea is returning and even better to see Silas settling in with his family and friends. I look forward to more.
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Interesting. I wish you had mentioned it was an alternative universe.
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This was a beautiful story that made me cry. Thank you.
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I really feel badly for Jason. As a mother, I just want to hug him and try to heal him. His past has caused him to throw up these walls to protect himself and he's unable to really tell when people are trying to help him. I look forward to watching him learning to trust.
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The Sparkling World of Zonesee
avidreadr commented on jvaughn's story chapter in The Sparkling World of Zonesee
Loved this chapter. It was enjoyable to see them just being a bonded couple with no threats, although I believe, from Kim's apprehension something might be coming. -
Chapter I: Am I alone?
avidreadr commented on Jorgen Jackson's story chapter in Chapter I: Am I alone?
Good beginning. You have me curious about the watcher. I look forward to more. -
Definitely interested in more. I like all three of the shifter groups we've met - the wolves, dolphins and the dragons. Great story.
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Like it so far and look forward to more. I enjoy the way they all work together smoothly. It reminds me a bit of the original Mission Impossible on TV (not the Tom Cruise travesty) - and I guess I'm showing my age.
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Prompt 397 - The Accident
avidreadr commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in Prompt 397 - The Accident
I agree with the others. I want to know all about these two men. I want to learn their past and ride along with their future. Thank you, -
Prompt #394--A Stubborn Neko
avidreadr commented on craftingmom's story chapter in Prompt #394--A Stubborn Neko
I've know kids like that. So cute and sweet, you could eat them up but little brats. You got to love them. -
Loved it. A perfect ending. I am in total favor of more about Damien. The point of the story could be about his dealing with the grief of losing his uncle and dealing with his new duties and how Kayden helps him. Polanthia could try to cause problems again, thinking that there might be some confusion during the transfer of power. There could also be challenges by people thinking Damien's connection to Kayden makes him weak and unsuitable to be king. Hey, for me, you could just write about them having a picnic in the woods and I'd be happy to visit them again. Thank you for these interesting and uique characters and story.
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It's wonderful to see how everything is falling into place. Damien is proving himself to be a great leader and will be an excellent king when the time comes. Kayden's growth from scared kit to the person he is now was great to see. It's sweet to see the couples coming together. I hope we find out where Laos' money went; I'm curious,
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Kayden is great. Only bad thing is there's only three more chapters.
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Seriously Now! - An Epilogue, Sort Of…
avidreadr commented on Aditus's story chapter in Seriously Now! - An Epilogue, Sort Of…
This was the perfect ending for this story. They both made mistakes but learned from them and grew up during their time apart. Thank you for the story. -
I love country music and have enjoyed reading the American Songbook stories.. This song is one of my current favorites so thank you for using it.
