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YAY!! I thought he was going to shoot him. But suing was sooooooooo much better. I'm so glad our ex-waiter was smart enough to back up everything on the cloud. Excellent!!

Such a sweet, sweet story. Thank you anonymous author.

I like this story. Mason and Bastian have a lot to work through. Can't wait for the royal family to get there. Derek is going to be an over the top protective big brother isn't he? Hopefully, you'll get someone to beta this for you. It could use some proof-reading but it hasn't interfered with my enjoyment. I'm able to follow it but you start writing one way, and then repeat a word or change tense mid-way. I know how hard it is to proof-read your own work. But keep going, I have faith you'll get better the further along you go.

You CANNOT imagine how freaking happy I was to see this update!!!! I kept checking and checking . And finally.... happy happy joy joy!!!! That king is seriously creepy and manipulative. I really, really don't want Mitch to give his seed to a bunch of Unseelie females. Do they have artificial insemination in the Hollow? And I like the Hollow...its a She right? And I think she's smitten. Mitch may be able to get her to protect him. She was the one providing the clothes, right? And I'm happy for Riley and I think he should give the Golden Pirate a chance. Maybe the gang can take him back home with them. Excellent update...well worth the wait.

Go ahead and talk to Alek. Who knows you may like what he says. But think long and hard before you do Liam. Cause Alek's dad is NOT going to go quietly into that good night.

I didn't know this was a Circle of Hell story until I finished this chapter. YAY I love this series. Will Su Yin meet the other characters? Or are they on the other side or something. Either way, write more!!! I want to know how Su Yin adjusts to life in Hell.

Awwwwww. I hope Carlos and Oliver are ready for the red-headed trouble about to head their way.

So much happened in this chapter. I hope Yannick finds someone in Royal Valley. Cause if he's hoping on coming between Erik and Seth, well we know that's not happening. And that homecoming....

Poor Toby. He needs his brothers. Really. And he's being way to hard on himself. Good chapter.

Isaac's sadness and melancholy grabbed me and didn't let go. I connected with him immediately. I knew the call he was hearing was for him but he had been alone so long and run into shifter's that weren't for him so many times that he couldn't believe that it was his someone. The call of a loon is haunting and unforgettable. I'm so glad Isaac found his happy and won't be alone anymore. This story will stay with me for a while. Thanks so much for writing this. I'll read it again tomorrow.

That turned out better than I thought. Marcus and the brothers weren't as bad as I first thought. They knew they needed to get him to drink so they found a way and got rid of a pedophile rapist too! Well done.

I knew it! I knew he wasn't human. Can we send him back up there somewhere??? Thanks for the laugh.

As usual, you wrote a really great story that covered alot of issues. Your writing is always superb. I enjoyed this short and would really like to read more.

Very satisfying chapter. Kai needs to be taken down a few pegs. Telling a 10 year old that he's a disgrace and dishonor to the flock is horrendous and then siccing a wolf on him!!! May he be consumed by the storm winds of his sister. And that was a GOOD slap she delivered. I'd like to see more of her. So is the mating next??? hummmm

And an Alliance is formed!!! Excellent. Maybe one day a mirror can be set up in Creid?

That was really good. A day in the life of a teenage duck (not yet) shifter and how he finds calm. Well done.

Oh wow!! You hit a lot of my early hot spots (humm, don't think that came out right ) Interests may be better?? This started off like something that Isaac Asimnov or Ray Bradbury would have written. Robots or AI's arguing about what constitues life and whether they were alive. Then the 'virgin vamp', the company and the donor. Hilarious. This could be a full length story (hint hint). So if it was in Roswell, where were the aliens? Running the whole operation?

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA So Frank is Dory's little brother? Can't remember from one week to the next! I'll never, ever be able to look at a fish tank the same. Thanks so much.

If I get a vote.... the boys should stay with Oliver and Carlos. And discuss with their brother about the chips. Good chapter.

Tears....big fat TEARS!! Arthur is perfect and his wolf magnificant and I can't wait for the reunion. You WILL write it in detail, right? I'm so happy for Ms. Sybil. Arthur went through so much all those years ago. My heart broke for him and then..... you made it right.

Loved this lovely, soothing chapter. Nathan and Liam did need to talk and this cleared the air and now they are on the same page. I just hope Liam doesn't keep Nathan in the friend zone too long. As for Alek....leave him where he is. But I know for the sake of drama he has to re-appear and throw poor Liam in a tizzy again. Well, the story title is Choices, right? If Alex didn't reappear to try to win his ex back, there wouldn't be any choices to be made.

Is Phoenix going to run into his brigand father again? Will he help him get back to Noah? Or are you going to make it months or years later before the boys meet again? Good chapter.

and then.....

I'm going to ditto Columbus Guy's request. A one shot or part 2 would be so nice. I truly enjoyed this story of Emmett finding love. Thank you so much for sharing them with us.

I just spent the last 6 days reading Cinderfella and Cinderfella 2 and now I'm caught up. I am totally hooked on this story. Wait, what am I going to read tomorrow??? If you want to write #3, I'm all in. Or just keep going with this one. I loved the description of the "microscope" and Kind 1 & Kind 2. The advent of modern medicine? Now, didn't Demetrius say only family members were to know about the mirrors? Do we count Gabe as family? Sure why not? I love how D got around the rules to deliver the note but how did Toby call him? Are the godparents watching and he just signed for them? Hummmm??? Why would the steps wait 10 years to exact their revenge? What would they get out of if? Could there be someone else? Ok, I'll be patient....maybe.