Timothy M.

Very clever use of his suggestive abilities to make the suspicious government agent do one small change without noticing. Very subtle, and hopefully successful.

Abel is certainly developing his psychic muscles together with his body. No wonder he's hungry all the time. I sometimes worry he'll overload and burn out.

I'm not surprised the Council was worthless, and I'm glad Abel wiped their memory of him. But what's really worrying is the risk of the hidden families being exposed due to the Council being lax and incompetent. Not something the Abel family needed to deal with on top of their refitting problems.

Uh oh a whole posse of spurned and ex-lovers. How embarrassing for Abel's dad. and potentially dangerous too, especially the government interest. They're lucky Abel came into his powers before this.

You can now go back and correct it. A telepathic scan of a whole planet ! wow, Abel certainly goes all out.

At least Chris got a small sliver of happiness and acceptance.

Such a beautiful and heartwarming tale, min ven. At first I wondered why Guy's parents hadn't told him of his heritage and about the secrets of dragons, but then I realized the reason. If he had know he would have mourned his lack of ability to shift into a dragon. This way he learned of his destiny as he embraced it. I can see the boy dragons entwined and happy, just the way I wish for SD wherever he is, and I'm sure he loves this story like we do. A wonderful tribute to our beloved friend.

No first line prompt ? pouts Oh well, maybe that's a good thing, so I'm not distracted from my CC stories and maybe an extra anthology story. for the feature, Renee.

I hope they do have the cruise of a life time no matter what happens next.

How did he know that? Please point us to a place in the story where Cory admits he's gay or tell Brett he loves him as more than a friend.. And I agree completely with @Graeme

I'm glad they talked about the elephant in the room. And I think the most important sentence here was We make the rules here and we decide what is OK for us.

It sure did, now we just need to keep nagging him occasionally.

You might as well say that Corey used Brett to get off. He pressured Brett for intimacy every change he got, even when Brett was trying to avoid it. We're only seeing the past from Corey's point of view, yet it's pretty clear he's never told Brett about being in love with him or being gay. They are both willfully ignoring the signs in order to preserve the semblance of being best friends. Maybe Brett felt unable to repudiate Corey's advances because he didn't want to hurt Corey by saying no to fooling around, since that was all it was to him. Ever heard the expression 'friends with benefits' ? I'm not saying Brett doesn't share the blame, and I'm have no objection to Corey ignoring him or even hitting him, but I object to him being accused of consciously deciding to use Corey. Should he have said yes to being seduced? Absolutely. But he's a horny teen. Should Corey have been honest with Brett about being gay? Absolutely. But he's a stupid, scared teen. They are both paying the price for their mistakes, and I'm fine with that.

YES !! well done, tim

The CCTV footage may show who was behind him when it happened, but if they don't suspect he was pushed on purpose, why check it out? Even though Nicola shouted Robbie was pushed, they might not take any notice. But it will be interesting to find out.

It seems to me Brett was giving off plenty of signals about not being gay and Corey has only himself to blame for ignoring the truth for years. He's also an idiot for lying to Brian. Why didn't he say he had a huge fight with Brett, and they are no longer friends, so he's given up football? That way the team wouldn't only blame Corey. I'm beginning to wonder if Corey has a touch of Aspergers, since he's smart book-wise, but utterly inept about interacting with people and understanding them.

I think Liam needs this reconnecting to his roots in order to get his priorities right about his life. Allie and his other friends will be good sounding boards for his doubts about Alek. They can't tell him what ecision to make, but their reactions will show him when he is being rational and which of his inner conflicts are blown out of proportion. I'm also wondering why he hasn't made it back to the east coast for three years. Was he too wrapped up in his secret relationship with Alek and the break-up?

“Most heroes don’t know that they are heroes. But everyone else does.” One of my favorite sentences from this story.

now I feel much better.

Yes, but I don't get to see the title and the chapter note until Monday, and you often make small additions after my edit. Also I like to see the reaction of your readers. So Morningstar Mondays are the real thing.

I'm sure you can sneak in a cowboy chapter or two without anyone noticing.

Yep me too. Mondays are great days, because we get a Morningstar chapter.

Write, write, write... Cheep, cheep, cheep... More, more, more... Cheep, cheep, cheep... go the hungry birds

Sigh, I miss these two guys. Could we please have more chapters? Cheep, cheep, says the hungry bird.

Last time I wanted to focus only on their love, and not on the evil of the priest. But I have to acknowledge how brilliantly you exposed the hypocrisy of the church and the emotional pit of such black-hearted men. I loved the moment he sent that nasty voice to Hell. I can't help wishing he would go back to the seminary and tell them why he left. But the important thing is he has moved beyond this hurt.