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Timothy M.

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  1. Timothy M.

    Chapter 1

    Yikes, that was a lot more drama than I was prepared for, you sure know how to sucker punch both your characters and your readers. Liam needs to contact Corey, I'm sure his mom would love to help, and probably Jason's family too. The other option is to stay in hospital longer, I bet they can't discharge him if he hasn't got anyone at home. If there are any costs involved, the insurance company of the reckless driver will have to pay, along with Liam's car and restitution for damages and any loss of income while he's off work. Or at least that's how it would be here. Alek needs to man up and stop deceiving everyone, including himself. Apparently, Liam breaking up with him wasn't enough of an eye-opener, so I haven't got much hope this accident will be either. Maybe Liam can meet a nice male nurse?
  2. What I liked most about the Rain story was how the characters kept changing from good to bad and back again, as we got to know them and their motives. Of course it was our perception and understanding of them which changed, and we were taught the importance of not judging first or even second impressions and opinions.
  3. Timothy M.

    Part 1

    Well, i like a good fairy tale as well. I can't help wonder if Miss Silver will end up wanting to stay human if (s)he finds a nice boy to love. And as you can see I also wonder if the toad changed her gender just to make the task even more impossible from his point of view.
  4. Well, we won't tire of you. Ever. Or your stories.
  5. Timothy M.

    Prologue

    It's not so much that Alek is still in the closet which annoys me, but he actually forgot the plans Liam had for his birthday. Says it all about the lack of priority for his boyfriend's happiness. Liam made the correct conclusion and decision. Maybe being without his lover will finally prod Alek out of hiding, and if it doesn't Liam is better off finding someone else - or at least not wasting his time on a coward.
  6. Timothy M.

    Chapter 13

    Hmm, I wonder whether Kiorl will be pissed or pleased about his angel getting kissing lessons.
  7. Yeah, I guess the are in the Winter color palette with cold and deep colors, same as me. I often mix up British and American terms. AC tries to catch them all, but sometimes I slip one by him. Good idea about waking Patrick and Peter up. I just need to get a CC twins chapter off to my editors and then I can tackle my third story.
  8. Don't Shout is one of my all time GA favorites.
  9. Timothy M.

    Chapter 3

    You just got offered a great deal, Marty. I suggest you take it and find your courage.
  10. Timothy M.

    Chapter 3

    I'm beginning to like Kian. It's fun to see him play with Daven. and the foreplay instead of foul play had me
  11. I dunno - some of the typos are really cute. Personally I love lion cloth when you describe Sitka in the first story.
  12. Yes ! They're moving in together and they've just made an awesome Halloween tradition for the neighborhood. Can we please see them at Christmas too? Maybe meeting each other's families?
  13. Don't know how I missed this beautiful chapter. I'm so glad they've found love.
  14. Awesome - and Sasha has promised us more Kiorl soon.
  15. Fuck I hate shopping, and right now I'm utterly pissed at Jubilee. What the fuck was she thinking dragging him along. Stupid bitch. I hope he keeps it together and that the hoiidays will cheer him up rather than what he expects.
  16. Why don't they just give David a quick, painless death? He's of no use to anyone and a real menace. Nice use of Alice, but those books were a colossal waste of my time. I've read them in both Danish and English and in both cases I felt like
  17. Timothy M.

    Chapter 40

    As entertaining as it is to have Stef and Will sniping at each other, I agree with JP that they need to bury the hatchet and work together while they're at Dalby ranch. Can't wait to see what the deal is.
  18. Well this chapter certainly challenged your readers' belief in the earth mother. But let me point out she chose Logan as Tilly's earth mate before he became ill. Even if he was a jerk before the tumor appeared I think Tilly would have tamed him easily. She is both a clever and kind young lady, with a very strong will. I also noticed several hints that Logan has changed a lot and probably only reached this level of paranoia and aggressiveness recently. I think he's only temporarily insane from tremendous pain, and if Kellar can reduce the tumor and the pain, Logan will probably improve immediately. Even if he faces a longe recovery phase, Tilly's presence along with the hope of a future without pain should make all the difference. Please have faith in Gary, ladies and gentlemen. Oh, and in case you wonder: I haven't seen the next chapter, so I have no idea what happens next, even if I'm the editor. So I'm allowed to speculate. About the other Challenges and Desperate times of this chapter: Kellar and Tobyn have to tell the Vega pack about the hunters' silver and the use of copper, and make it convincing too. Kellar has to prove his credentials as healer, and they need to be seen as earth mates. All goes well, apart from Logans distrust. Of course, Vega pack are faced with such desperate times including the challenge of having two pack members disappear and no children - they are looking at looming extinction. Desperate times requires desperate measures, and relocating to Morning Star seems a good and perhaps the only possible solution. But that would mean new challenges for both packs: will Clarence expect to be alpha? Will the Morningstar pack accept him? He seems a good guy and a competent and kind leader. Does he have an earth mate at Morningstar? Finally, Logan's attack gave Kellar a whole new challenge with controlling the anger and instincts of his wolf, and Tobyn some anxious moments while he desperately tried to stop his mate from killing Logan. Scary stuff
  19. Must be Prompt 323 Can I talk to you? I've used it three times already in my prompt based story about Rob & Co. The first time was probably the best. I made Irri yell: ROB! That kid needs to grow some tact....
  20. Timothy M.

    August 2014

    Well done CJ, I hope he gets the better of the chemistry teacher too,
  21. Ohh, don't know how I missed this story. Owls are awesome birds. Surely he will be able to visit on the Spring Equinox as well? I liked how he had to realize all those warning, including his mom's about inattention were actually there for a good reason. Poor Brennan must be so confused and perhaps also intrugued.
  22. Timothy M.

    Moving On

    Take care of yourself and enjoy your life outside GA. We'll always be here and happy to see you when you drop in.
  23. Thanks, AC, including your help in developing the Perry brothers. Yeah, Rob's 'evil' act back in chapter 1 has paid off nicely. I think he's happy to gain a closer relationship with Eric before he's off for college in California. And you're absolutely right about Eric getting miffed occasionally.
  24. Thanks, you may be right. Eric had better enjoy nice Rob while it lasts.
  25. Tillykke med fødselsdagen Happy waving of Danish birthday flags
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