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  1. Timothy M.
    Uhm, Dayne, if not already the case, it will soon be the other way round: We'll be the ones having Sempai moments if you notice us or our stories. I also moved from LitE to here, and I found friends rather than trolls, and my stories got noticed rather than ignored. I've never looked back.
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    Another of my favorite chapters, and here the importance of semblers is very clear. There was no denying the guilt and the bad deeds.
  3. Timothy M.
    I'm happy for George he finally found a friend to exchange daggers with. He'll never forget Peter or the lessons he learned from him.
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    Heavy metals, radioactivity, and birth defects - like Andy I'm intrigued by the science in your story and the way it's interwoven with magic.
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    Part 2

    Timothy M. commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Part 2

    I don't think much of AJ right now. He should have fired Jon by now. But perhaps he has an apprentice contract for a specific amount of time? Kip needs to be very careful, and he should tell AJ that Jon is touching him in unwanted ways. If only to protect his uncle's master piece.
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    Does he suspect that Seth is King Alexander's son? Or is it something completely different?
  7. Timothy M.
    There are so many fantastic one-liners and short, but amazingly descriptive sentences. I'm not surprised Graeme had difficulties chosing his favorite for each chapter, when he wrote reviews. Some of my favorite parts involve the gifts for the Iceman and Cory giving the football team a dancing lesson.
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    I agree with Andy: lots of important lessons for George and us. I thought the road kill joke funny, even though I knew what Arthur knew. I think George is doing very well in adapting.
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    Elvenhold

    Timothy M. commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Elvenhold

    Arthur is a wonderful teacher and companion for George, he is kind, compassionate and patient.
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    ...Resolved

    Timothy M. commented on David McLeod's story chapter in ...Resolved

    Another part I had forgotten, somehow. The fire on the ship and Marty channeling power to Chandler. But most importantly the Love Forever Oath. They do not know yet what it means, but we do and are glad to hear it.
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    Conflict...

    Timothy M. commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Conflict...

    I'd forgotten about Marty and Chandler having this fight, but at least they talk about it and reaffirm their love.
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    Student Mages

    Timothy M. commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Student Mages

    I love all these explanations which help us understand the World and the purpose of marty and Chandler in it.
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    Name Day

    Timothy M. commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Name Day

    Nice party, and Marty and Chandler seems to have gotten the idea of the boy magic sharing. Our first glimpse of Rudy, I know he's important, but I'd forgotten he liked Marty.
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    Probably my favorite chapter of this story, partly because the boys say they love each other and partly because they finally find someone to explain the world.
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    Imagine, Magic

    Timothy M. commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Imagine, Magic

    I'm not surprised Marty is utterly shocked by what happened, but Chandler is right to focus on the fact his friend saved his life, And he gave Marty his dagger (I know what that means from your other story).
  16. Timothy M.
    It's good that Marty and Chandler are in a safe place where they can explore their talents and learn more of the world. The long life spans were a major surprise, of course.
  17. Timothy M.
    I like this chapter where Marty and Chandler are first exposed to the special magic of this place. Marty is clever at deducing what is going on.
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    It's a good thing Chandler has survival in the wild skills. PS Edible fungi are actually a good source of protein, but you should never pick mushrooms you don't know and especially never in a foreign place. So Chandler is being sensible even if he's wrong about the nutritional value.
  19. Timothy M.
    A good concluding chapter. I agree with Cannd about wanting to see more of Patrick and Alan together. I've read several of your later stories and you're very good at portraying the love and trust between boys. But I wouldn't mind seeing more of the physical side too.
  20. Timothy M.
    It's always nice when they visit old friends.
  21. Timothy M.
    So Thom's staff was indeed effective against trolls, Good rescue indeed, and I liked the Baron's approval of Daniel as Ceti's companion. Nice to see all five members of the group get the rewards they deserve.
  22. Timothy M.
    They are fast becoming a force of Light to be reckoned with, and the Baron and his advisors are clever enough to know it.
  23. Timothy M.
    You might want to fix the Spring Anthology date too.
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    Night Raid

    Timothy M. commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Night Raid

    The brigands were not very clever to attack the farm when they had just taken in armed visitors. But most likely they didn't know about them and were simply unlucky. Good for the farm people, who were rewarded for their guarded hospitality.
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    Kidnapped

    Timothy M. commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Kidnapped

    I liked both the discussion about education and the rescue operation. It was god for Thom to see his companion put priority on this. Patrick took his first direct kill well.
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