Timothy M.
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Thanks, tim, glad you liked the 'unexpected' development. I think Angel and Imp will share your surprise when they wake up for their Valentine's Day mission. Let's hope they also think it's cool.
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LOL, I guess Imp should have a small pitchfork to go with his And you're right about me needing random prods now and then to get on with writing on my incomplete stories. The sequel for this one will need some major inspiration though, because I have no idea what will happen next.
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I hoped you would like this, Gary, and I expected you would spot the soul mate potential. We shall see what happens when they wake up. At least we know they're still an A.I. team on a mission. It was worried about Angel's POV being boring, so I'm relieved to get positive response - and no pitchforks
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Hi Drew, I'm you enjoyed the story. I'll do my best to write a satisfactory sequel, but you may have to be patient while I wait for inspiration (reading Sasha's new Circle of Hell story may help, lol). Did you notice how the pronouns shifted from ze and hir to he and his at the end of the story? This was deliberate, in case you wondered. My editing team did. You're absolutely right about love and lust being to sides of the same coin, or spiritual and physical intimacy as Angel would say. Thanks for an awesome review, as always.
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Well, I think Irene deserved it for being a pushy bitch, and Omari deserved it for being possessive and acting as if he was entitled to 'claim' Zac in front of Adrian. But most of all for saying 'old lover' like that - that pissed me off so much that I cheered when Zac left both of them on the spot. Well done and good riddance ! Of course, I don't really feel sorry for Adrian either, he broke Zac's heart, so it's only fair that he's faced with the consequences. If he won't own up to his feelings, eventually Zac will find someone else to love. Not Omari the snooty jerk, but someone nice.
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2016 Fall Anthology: Blindsided / The Forgotten ~ Now Live
Timothy M. commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
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I was uncomfortable with the murder too, but for a different reason. It was a much too easy fate for the bad guy. He should have lived, preferably maimed and paralysed for life, and confronted and charged with his crime, and put in prison to be at the mercy of even worse men until he died. But if the mother preferred the rapist to be dead I guess her son chose the right gift.
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Such a heart-breaking tale, and I did not expect him to be literally killed. But somehow when I imagine the alternative horrors inflicted on poor gay boys by ignorant surroundings, they do not seem much better. They kill the spirit, even if the body stays alive. But I guess there's always the hope of escaping and finding love. We'll cling to that hope for his nephew, and that the ghost's brother will not accept the murder of his son as well. But if tragedy is repeated, maybe those two kindred spirits will find some comfort in each other.
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I liked the story, it reminds me of listening to my grandparents' war time stories. I assume Mke told the curator about how the aeroplane got it's name, that would be as important as the letters in my opinion. I feel sad for Mike and his grandfather that they never got to share their secrets. Such a shame, but at least it paved the way for Mike coming out the rest of his family.
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Chapter 51 Two Sides of Nicola
Timothy M. commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 51 Two Sides of Nicola
Because Don never asked what the reason for the fight was. He's a pompous idiot who only cares about outward behavor. That's why Nicola normally has him fooled. I can understand Robbie's confusion about Nicola. He doesn't know that bossy older sisters live to pester you at home, but get completely protective if someone from outside the family tries to hut you. I have to be honest, this chapter doesn't make me like her any more than before, so I wish Robbie would tell Susan about Nicola snooping in his things, including answering his phone. If he did it the right way, she could be in trouble for once. -
Whoa, I did not see that coming, but it made sense in a way, except that Carl seemed like a nice guy unlike Brian's father. It's funny, but I can easily forgive the man for cheating on his wife with the man he loves, but bullying his kids and being a closeted homophobe - not a chance, I'll despise him for that forever. Will Brian stay in his job or go somewhere else? No matter what he has Nate, and I hope he can help Kurt to get his life together. Nate is a great guy and I hope his family 'adopts' Brian as a son, so he finally gets to have a real family,
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Wow that was a heart-breaking story. The one weakness was the police's inability to connect the man with amnesia with the missing person file, but in a huge country I guess it could happen. I feel sorry for Lee, who saw his whole life fall apart, though I guess he has the kids. Richard at least knew about Ben's husband - who by the way is a bigamist, what a mess. But all in all I think the ending was to be expected when they both felt the pull to be together. But knowing how they hurt two other men they cared about must make it bittersweet at times.
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It works well on it's own, because we feel the loneliness and sorrow, as well as the need to find someone to share your life with, such as it is. And no matter what, two people will do better than one in this situation.
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Yeah, I'd take it too. Chase is a good guy and I can understand why he felt betrayed. He did act a little irrationally, but not over-emotionally so. He recognized good advice when Sam gave it to him, and he was honest with Terry about how he felt. They have a good chance of becoming a couple. That should get people to gossip, lol.
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Well, I guess Bradley finally got to the point where he had to make a decision. How much did Ryan matter to him? I don't blame Ryan for taking a stand, but he should have insisted they spent some of their stolen moments on talking as well as kissing.
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That was sad, but also with hope at the end. I'll remember Zaidu, and I look forward to seeing the three of them together. Ithink Oliver will be grateful he made the right choice, and that he was given another chance to exist and help the innocent.
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I've suffered a couple of break-ins too, and you're right about feeling violated and angry and frustrated. The value of what they take is nothing compared to the mental damage, if the things represent fond memories.
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It's a lot easier to hide a tablet than a small spaceship and a blue alien. And they can actually get to know each other now. I have great hopes for a continued romance. They'll work out how to deal with their differences, and hopefully the nasty guys will give up eventually. Although, if they find the crash site and the 'glass' cover which flew off, they might step up the interrogation.
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Sometimes you should never believe what your eyes tell you, and you definitely shouldn't believe someone who has his own axe to grind. I hope he holds on to his decision of never forgiving Carl for three months of hell.
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Sometimes Angel regretted having been chosen for A.I. duty. Sure, it was an honor and a compliment, as well as a wonderful challenge and all the other positive spin words their initial tutor had spouted during the Angel Aptitude Class, but…. And right there was another sign of how much ze had changed. Before becoming an A.I. team member the term ‘spouted’ would never have crossed hir mind in so disrespectful a manner. There had even been a slight urge to roll hir eyes. Angels simply did not at
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An imp from Hell teams up with an angel from Heaven for joint missions in the human world. However, the best-laid plans can go astray, and even otherworldly entities can be blindsided by unexpected developments.
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Hi Eric, thanks for reading, it's always nice to get a surprise review. You're absolutely right about the need to shake up the bad patterns and make people reconsider their attitude and position.
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Yikes, that was something of a cliffie! And he didn't even get the guy he wanted, so he got shot for nothing. But I hope Barry and the others are victorious in the end.
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I have the feeling Samuel is intelligent. He can see Barry is doing well as a farmer, and that experience and knowledge is worth more than gold. He understands the need to protect this family and he is honest about wanting to settle. Surely there must be empty farms around and plenty of land to reclaim for farming. Caution is good, but coopration is better, and trust is best.
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I think the most interesting part was the information about the gang not being a coherent group of men. How do they get the bad ones killed and the redeemable ones saved? Not such an easy task, and of course the fight itself will be dangerous no matter what. Why didn't Jae ask Samuel if he was warned by Jim, too?
