I’m sorry it took me such a long time to reply to this review. I liked it tremendously and wanted to do it justice in return.
Thank you for praising the technical sex talk. It’s something of a pet peeve for me how much it’s glossed over in most gay fiction I’ve read – well, to be honest also in straight porn involving anal sex. I know we don’t want graphic details, but I prefer if there’s at least a plausible interlude, such as a shower or other hints of preparations made. Just enough to make inexperienced readers think ‘OK, I need to find out what all-out sex entails apart from buying lube and condoms.’ And I simply love your conclusion about ‘knowledge = confidence = comfort = enjoyment.’ Oh, and you’re right about the impatience, of course.
It’s wonderful when reviews make you see the story in a new light, isn’t it? I had the same feeling you did about AC’s review for this chapter, but yours also had me discover new details. You’re right about Russ staying himself, but at the same time getting new insights which will unfold further growth into the man he’s meant to be. He’s noticing things and relating to them, rather than shutting the world out. And of course, most of his thoughts revolve around Jacob and their love.
Not surprisingly, most of Jacob’s thoughts and wants revolve around Russ too, and I don’t know where he gets the will power to wait. He wants to make love to (= fuck) Russ so badly.