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yay, you've got a Finnish reader. and I love the way Suvitar is gently pointing out the small native details only she would notice.
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Prompt 433 Where did all of that come from?
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 433 Where did all of that come from?
LOL, I'm sure there were clothes and stuff lying around, but like me the first thing Nelson looks at are the books. And I'm glad you thought them suitable to Rob's character which I'm trying to develop in case I ever get to do the Rob at College sequel. I loved that you've noticed that Nelson is an observer and a thinker - just like Eric in fact. But now they need to switch to acting and talking in order to deal with Nelson's fears and Eric's worry. Thanks for reviewing and posting in the story forum. -
Prompt 433 Where did all of that come from?
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 433 Where did all of that come from?
Thank you Gary, I'm delighted you thought I achieved a good balance, and that you consider them all as friends. Yes, Rob's parents have expectations, but I think they are will be supportive rather than demanding, and the aim is for the boys to lead happy and useful lives. The insecurities of being young and in love - not always easy to deal with. And Eric and Nelson are still a very new couple, something which is easy to forget. Let's see how they deal with this. -
Prompt 433 Where did all of that come from?
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 433 Where did all of that come from?
You're welcome Drew and thanks for a great review in return. Yay, you spotted the hints from the books. I'm not quite sure yet what Rob has in mind (here is where my lack of knowledge of the US education and career systems is a problem, but I shall have to rely on my beta). But he certainly wants to achieve and have success one way or another. Eric has been keeping a low profile for a long time (easy to hide behind Rob), so the idea of being in the spotlight can be scary. But with Nelson at his side I think Eric can do anything. Glad you liked Sir Rob, and you just made your own catchy phrase: 'evil clutches of bigotry' - I may have to use that in a future chapter. -
Prompt 433 Where did all of that come from?
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 433 Where did all of that come from?
Awww dugh you made me laugh, putting that picture in my head. Thanks and let's hope they avoid the knights who say Ni! I think you're right, also because there are still several weeks till the prom, and surely Nelson and Eric will be old news by then. We shall see - if I ever get that far. Best wishes for your poor head and thanks for reading. Hope it cheered you up. -
Prompt 433 Where did all of that come from?
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 433 Where did all of that come from?
Thanks, LL, I'm glad Rob the Knight struck a chord with you. And your observations are very clever. Stay tuned. -
Prompt 433 Where did all of that come from?
Timothy M. posted new chapter in Timothy’s Terrible Prompt Stories
“Where did all of that come from?” Rob looked at Eric, who shrugged. Jasper and I exchanged glances, but neither of us said anything. This time we congregated in Rob’s room, and I was interested to see the similarities and differences to Eric’s room. The furniture and color scheme were the same, but that could be the influence of Mrs. Perry. They both had a few posters of baseball players, but I suspected Eric’s had been chosen for their looks rather than their fame. Rob’s shelves held more sp- 24 comments
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Weekly Update Weekly Wrap Up!
Timothy M. commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
I guess I wasn't around when it wasn't good-natured, so I hadn't realized my posts could lead to anything unpleasant. Sorry. But at least there was some posting on this topic, which doesn't always happen. -
Stephen was quite clever, helping Brat in his own way, even if he did annoy him with all the talking and not always considerate questions. I hope he and Brat become friends, and that Stephen's parents will be glad they listened to their son's request.
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CSR Book Club C S R Discussion Day: The Rainy Day By Graeme
Timothy M. commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
so now I'm trying to work out what time that would be in GMT+1 Anyway, I'll just ask my question: Even if you're not writing a sequel to The Rainy Day, did you think about what would be the future for Brat? Would he be able to get some sort of more normal teenage life? I realize he'll always look out for his brother and sister, but my hope was he'd find some happiness and trust in his foster family. -
Weekly Update Weekly Wrap Up!
Timothy M. commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
I think we need a Moderator to solve this, unless you can show a GA link which says the above (I haven't been able to find such a statement). Not that it's super important. Cia? -
Chapter 1 Michael and Me
Timothy M. commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Chapter 1 Michael and Me
Kære Tim Life is a miracle. Love is a miracle. This story is a miracle. Not just because of Michael who is bright enough to see the beauty and strength in you and to cherish and protect the miracle he has found in you. Because never doubt it, you are a miracle too, a small stubborn star who has come into our lives to remind us to appreciate love and loyalty, and the strangers who become family and friends through acceptance and recognition of the worth in each other and of kindred spirits. Please give Michael lots of and from us and thank him for taking care of the new Tim in our lives, so that you could tell us one of the best love stories I've ever read. Kærlig hilsen Tim (the elder) -
I guess you can teach an old dog new tricks, sometimes. If you're kind and patient enough, lol.
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Weekly Update Weekly Wrap Up!
Timothy M. commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
No, Rob is a Signature Author, not a Classic Author. I checked, and that's why I counted him, even if his story was listed as Premium and not under the Sig A. So you're even with the Prom A not ahead. Regards from the AR stickler for numbers and details. -
Chapter 42 You Can't Turn a Heart into a Diamond
Timothy M. commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 42 You Can't Turn a Heart into a Diamond
You Can't Turn a Heart into a Diamond. Somehow the chapter title makes me hope (together with dugh) that Nate's dad is redeemable. Because someone and something tried to make his heart as hard as diamond on the matter of having a gay son. I mean, Mark wasn't born a bigot, this was instilled into him by parents, peers, the community he grew up in, the church he attended, the slurs and lies repeated by friends, school mates, work mates and the media, or wherever he got his bigoted views created and bolstered. Obviously he's been clever enough to keep his unacceptable opinions under wraps when visiting the in-laws, and probably there hasn't been any occasions for the matter to come up, not as long as Kendall was in the closet and Michael oblivious. Indeed the Aceto Family members might have avoided the subject during Christmas etc, so as not to put pressure on their son and adopted son. So Mark never had his attitude questioned or challenged, and therefore no chance or incentive to change. I might even say that Nate's problem was a little bit due to K&M being too scared to acknowledge how they felt about each other, before now. I know that's unfair, but I agree with Eagle-eyes that Mark may well make that connection and 'blame' M&K - and I bet he probably already secretly disliked Michael, because he was in awe and jealous of him, and hated feeling inferior. so he sort of enjoys being able to look down on him (in secret) as a 'fag' - and that could easily slide into hate for 'corrupting' Nate, even from afar and by association. Illogical, I know, and perhaps far off the direction Gary will take the story, but it was how this chapter made me feel. Anyway to get back to the title, I hope Mark's heart beats harder for his wife and his children than for all those who want him to turn it into stone against a gay son. Of course, he still has to make amends (including apologizing to Josh !!), and he will have deal with his issues (therapy or whatever), before Nate can go home. Oh and I agree Nate cannot go back to his old school, unless it is willing to tackle the matter and ban / punish the bullying and namecalling. But in the long run, Nate is better off being with his close family, even if I'd enjoy a story development with M&K fostering him. So I'll keep my fingers crossed and my hopes up for Mark to do a fast Carson conversion. But while Megan gets Mark onto line, I'm delighted to see Kendall exercise his worrying / caring side with Nate, and for Michael to go all protective and supportive. It's what they do best - apart from what they do in bed. -
Weekly Update Weekly Wrap Up!
Timothy M. commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Well done, Promising Authors ! Even if we count Rob Colton's story amongst the Signature Authors, the Prom A posted as many as the Sig A. -
Black Widow (Story Discussion)
Timothy M. replied to Mark Arbour's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Topics
are we still talking about Mark and the CAP rollercoaster? Oh, and I can still remember when Mark got my CAP review cherry. He likes those, too. -
that's OK - but I recommend reading the story, it's great ! Snowflake and Brian, oh my
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Ohh how did I miss out on this chapter last night ?! Yum, and I'm glad he finally came to the right conclusion about their relationship. But now I want to know how Levi reacts, I'm hoping his happy surprise is not too obvious to Jack, lol. Oh and I have the feeling they are going to have an extra intense night. Well done on using the prompt twice - or at least very nearly the same question. You're getting very good at this - and if your prompt responses get any hotter, my laptop may burst into flames. good thing I had my Danish Drool Diverter ready.
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Auburn Ski Camp: A Melting Snowflake
Timothy M. commented on MrM's story chapter in Auburn Ski Camp: A Melting Snowflake
Oh man, the lovemaking was out of this world, in spite of the sadness of knowing what happened in Snowflake's past. Brian is brave to admit his feelings, and I want to him for doing so. I hope Snowflake stays melted, but I'm sure Brian will hug him and fuck him and kiss him and bliss him until he finnally believes with all his heart that the love is real and the forever kind. I shall now go to bed and dream sweet dreams of fire and ice and the hottest sex on a mountain. -
Auburn Ski Camp: Brian's Embers
Timothy M. commented on MrM's story chapter in Auburn Ski Camp: Brian's Embers
I'm so happy you started this chapter with the declaration of Brian understanding how he has found love, and it has changed him profoundly. I can now enjoy the lengthy flash back knowing all will end well. Once more we have to applaud Sabrina for doing all she can to ensure Snowflake's happiness and I'm glad she can read Brian's sincerity. Telling him Snowflake cried and about his issues is a good move, because Brian needs to think and not simply cruise along and react as he's done before. Snowflake is so special and irresistible and good for Brian - and the best is Brian knows it too. I hope Snowflake feels the same. A great chapter - and reading it again feels like I got a present on your birthday. Kiitos ! -
Auburn Ski Camp: Fire and Ice
Timothy M. commented on MrM's story chapter in Auburn Ski Camp: Fire and Ice
One of my favorite romantic chapters of all GA. The way they both feel drawn together and Brian loves Snowflakes smile and thinks he is beautiful, while Snowflakes realizes Brian makes him laugh and is the Fire to complement his Ice. Loved the Norn idea, I feel all Nordic and satisfied and I know he's right. Their fates are entwined forever. -
Auburn Ski Camp: Snowflake and the Lion
Timothy M. commented on MrM's story chapter in Auburn Ski Camp: Snowflake and the Lion
Sabrina is the key stone of this chapter, or at least most of it. Through her we know that Snowflake's breakdown is unusual and scary, she gives him the knowledge of Brian's injury which leads to the dramatic skiing machine situation, and she lets us experience the aftermath of Jimmy's heartbreak - oh and of course we also feel very strongly for her own loss when she realizes Snowflake has been caught up in the vortex of Brian. And I loved the final part about Brian being warm. -
I've been to Finland several times, so I've picked up a word or two. And those are two of the important ones, right ? From SATW I've learned Perkele... http://satwcomic.com/computer-technician
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out of likes so I understand Kiitos. and I'm guessing Kippis might be the equivalent of Skål! (Cheers).
