Timothy M.

I think your readers are as hotly frustrated as Guy and Mick after this chapter. The whole you smell good and I want to chase you and 'eat' you deal was cute and scary. I'm not surprised Mick felt weird about it and opted out. The funniest part was the Fuck - I'm trying exchange, has me laughing every time. Oh and the shirt issue is so much more poignant the second time around.

This is my second time around reading this story. It was good the first time and even better now I know more of Mick's background. I liked the way you threw us directly into the situation and had us work out what was going on from the things happening. Such as Mick meeting and helping werewolves and being able to sense and untangle emotions. And the sniffing bit was nicely intriguing. I loved the snarky humor too. It made the rage and revelation at the end even more dramatic. Oh and you write well too, the language is vivid and flows smoothly. Hope you keep going for a long time.

You know what. I like your stories and your characters are cute. But sometimes I get so weary reading about these silly emotionally insecure boys who ramble on inside their heads but never open their mouths and talk to the person they love. It's like they have no brains and after a while I lose respect and stop caring about all the angst they go through. Just once it would be nice to read a story of yours where the main character occasionally acted intelligently and actually remembered what their boyfriends told them. Instead of making up all these ridiculous scenarios and hurting themselves and other people. Kevin knows that Rory knows all about how Kyle is fixated on sex. Rory even said he didn't like it. It would be so easy to talk about how envious his socalled friends were and how they were being shallow and just asking about sex and didn't understand about being in love. I'm sure you could make up ten different ways which are even more clever and would lead to Rory simply telling Kevin to stop listening to those two morons. But I guess the main reason I get fed up is that all of your 'heros' are so self centered and blind. They go on and on about their own issues and never seem to think about how other people feel except to worry about how it relates to them. Kevin has gotten so many clues about Rory being insecure, he's even been told directly. But he shows no interest in finding out more or helping by being honest about his own worries. Instead he acts in ways that has Rory feeling even worse. I want to slap him. Sorry, I'm probably being unfair, but these guys exhaust and annoy me till I want to scream. I start reading every one of your stories hoping this one will be just slightly sensible and I get disappointed again and again. Nothing but emo boys driving me nuts. Could you please break this pattern - just once ?

Powerful chapter and I like to think of Brad as a furnace stoking them with energy and making them evaluate their relationships in a good way. Loved the wooing and teasing and the desire Brad had for everything they offered (not just sex). There's a couple of Brad/Mark name mix-ups as well as a few other typos. Send me a PM if you want a list.

Ohh that was sweet and hot. I wonder if Damien will be back to his spiky behavior next morning. Habits like that are hard to ditch. Oh and that goes for Dallas-as-jock as well. He may want to change but the patterns are still there. Their parents will be in for a shock if both boys suddenly declare they are gay AND boyfriends. Hope it turns out OK. But there's plenty of potential for interesting development, so I'm glad to see the story is 'In progress'.

This may be the sweetest chapter so far. The beautiful country boy with a cleaning obsession and endless butt hunger. I had to laugh, when John said he was in love. Good thing Mark's soul is as handsome as his body, so they all adore him.

Anyone would love Sean for a housemate with cooking skills like that. But the interaction between Sean and Tim is fun too, and John seems to relax even more.

I think you did well on the court room stuff, only I'm wondering why Asher was interogated by the defense council first, since I assume he's a witness for the prosecutor. But it's a minor detail and easily forgotten in the nice drama you created. But I hope somebody stops Michael from reaching Asher or punching the slime ball, because he could very well ruin everything. I doubt the case will be called a mistrial when the defense was clearly badgering the witness (enough to make him faint) plus he brought up the receipts. The judge seems clever enough to just say to the jury that they should disregard the last sentense. And Asher swooning may get him some sympathy and thus work against Allen and the slime ball.

Aawww so cute I don't know whether to applaud or roll my eyes. I totally agree with everything Cole said. Oh and such a nice sensible dad, not many of those around. But maybe the fact there's no risk of pregnancy helps

I like the way this is going, John certainly has room in his heart and his apartment for more than one guy. And I like the hints of Tim helping him to relax, he seems to have a playful nature.

Takes a little while to get used to the story telling style, but it works quite well, actually. They were quick to get into bed, but I guess they were two lonely souls coming together at just the right time.

I had exactly the same thought, Mark was described as the 'power bottom', so it makes more sense if the big dick sentence (This brings us to Mark, our most recent addition.) and the reply is about Brad.

I wish Corbin had told Pete he was going out with Mike, serve him right. And I fear the lie will mess things up even more. But I can't blame him for keeping his options open. Even if it also increases the risk of Mike getting heartbroken. But kudos for him for trusting Corbin to deal with his friends and any suspicion of gay stuff. I'm getting more and more annoyed with Dom, he's a prick, but I wonder if we and Corbin will ever find out why Dom hates Corbin. It can't just be his unconventional ways. Is Dom jealous of the attention and fame ? And the Melanie Mystery increases, but I have faith Corbin will pull off another miraculous save.

I liked this story for a lot of things, but two of them stood out: That you didn't fall for the temptation to have the friendship love turn into romantic love. I think you always fall a bit in love with your first - and John was Artie's first because he was the one to make him realize he was gay. But it was much better for them to settle into the bromance category. And that you let the girl be someome who (in spite of being a bitch) loved John - and forgave him for hiding an even worse secret than a one night stand with his best friend: the fact he was sterile. Although this part of the story did seem somewhat contrived. It's something I've never understood about women - that they get so possessive and try to keep their boyfriends / men from being with their buddies or enjoying sport or other harmless pasttimes. After all, lots of women like to be with their female friends and go shopping etc. To me doing things apart helps keep a relationship healthy.

I think what I loved most about this chapter (apart from the fact that there was a next chapter at all ) was the reaction Hutch had to Corbin throwing a fit. Hopefully he and the other frat brothers will now finally wake up to the fact that they have been less than supportive. Corbin has lots of issues and makes mistakes, but he always does his best to increase the social standing of his house. And even though I find the whole social climbing utterly absurd, the loyalty Corbin has to his frat is admirable. Can't wait to read the next bit with Mike, I like that guy. Hope he doesn't end up too heart broken. I'm not sure what's worst: Being a gay guy in love with a guy in the closet or being a guy trapped in the closet made by society being in love with a gay guy (who is out).

I agree with Carrie and I cannot believe Corbin did not see the possibility of David lying about Lee because he's into Corbin and wants to pull him away from Lee. But I guess that's what happens when you kill too many brain cells with alcohol And why Corbin didn't see that Dakota is Pete's Amanda is an even bigger mystery.

Coming back to read this story again, I'm reminded how almost the only thing I don't like is all the drinking which goes on. All the rest is awesome.

I'm sorry I missed this thread in time, but better late than never. Et forsinket tillykke med fødselsdagen, Thorn From your fellow Scandinavian

Tillykke med fødselsdagen I guess you know what the above means And just think - it'll be your birthday for a while in Europe and US so congratulations will keep trickling in while you sleep.

Tillykke med fødseldagen from your Danish fan (or one of them)

I'd never have guessed. I admit I did consider him but only as I was going though all the alternatives after reading the previous chapter. Apart from fitting the criteria of being one of the older established players, which I felt was important, I rejected the idea. So well done Graeme about keeping us in the dark Oh and his poor girlfriend, but kudos to Deon for knowing what to do. Can't wait to see how the sequel develops. Everything certainly ended on a positive note, so it'll be interesting to see what kind of drama you'll get up to next. Abd of course I'm hoping we get to see what happens behind that closed door Ty demanded

HUGE contented sigh. Even if I'll miss them while we wait for the sequel, I'm glad you left Kurt and Tay in a good place about themselves, their pack and their future. It will be interesting to see who gets together with whom as the pack grows. I think Isla and Henry may be a bit too obvious as a couple, and I'd like Henry to get a mate soon. Isla is just too young and she needs to have fun as a teenager before settling down. Think of all the boys coming camping and her twisting them round her little finger - in a kind way of course. Isla could never be mean.

Wow, now I'm even more confused about who it is. Unless Tony is being particularly sneaky and it's Paul after all. But somehow I don't think so. I thought he meant to get Pride Radio to sponsor, but I guess they'll just make the appeal and be the ones to rally the gay community to send in money. An audacious and clever plan. Can't wait to see the outcome. Wonderful chat Deon had with his mom, but I wish he'd be honest with his younger brother. He's starting to ge on my nerves too

Tillykke med fødselsdagen Sasha. If I had a flagpole, I'd run up Dannebrog for you. Hope you have a nice day Tim

Several European countries had legalized gay civil unions 10-15 years before the turn of the century. OK it wasn't marriage (in the strict sense of the word) and you couldn't get it done in a church, but it gave you all the legal rights. I'm fairly sure gay marriage would have been introduced in these countries at the same time as Holland / Belgium, if there wasn't already an option. But I still get those moments you mention