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This is so disturbing because it is so believable. I note the middle name of the serial killer. Others have noted the statistical anomaly of the connection between serial killers and the middle name 'Wayne'.
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It seems to me that Brandon's parentage needs to be explored. If I recall correctly the Lycan Council has a DNA database. Perhaps there should be some testing done.
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I, too, found the tense drive in Chicago traffic both exasperating and hilarious (at least in retrospect). Someone above made a comment about slow chase scenes. There is a 1977 French film titled "Dear Inspector" that has one of the funniest chase scenes I have ever seen.
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I just noticed the title of the work we are reading applies to much more than the job at the Y.
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Wouldn't it be amusing to find out Lucy is hiding something too?
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Cadet Third Class • VI
Thomas Haworth commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • VI
A thought about Miranda and here complaints: The guys -- even Joel -- can talk about sex and get away with it. Even if it were about sex with a guy, she probably could not. Talking about sex with a woman would put her in line for abuse by fellow cadets. She is right not to risk it. Would not you be jealous?- 44 comments
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I am confident Lee will survive. His leg, however . . .
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Danger to Himself
Thomas Haworth commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Danger to Himself
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Chapter 2 - Trout Fishing in Europe
Thomas Haworth commented on Arch Hunter's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Trout Fishing in Europe
I am also fairly convinced Kevin is probably straight. However, I'm not so sure about James . . . -
As someone who has dealt with dysthymia most of my life, I feel you have adequately captured the problem of depression. Good work!
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The one guess I have is that the reason Renzo is ready to talk is that Rhys is the one asking.
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What did Tristan do this time?
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They should also share some genes from Emily.
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A question in my mind is this: What species is the she-wolf? How about the attackers?
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Well! This chapter's end certainly puts a cat among the pigeons.
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Who the leak to grandma was?
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It seems to me that something happened when Stanley was 13. Given the age, it is probably linked to puberty. He acts as if he is medicated. The Berlin episode took place while he was not in his home town. Was his father with him in Berlin? Did the meds wear off? What is the reason his father keeps him close? His father seems to expect his behavior and is willing to bail him out of all problems. Why?
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This is not a criticism, nor am I making fun of the scene, but the description of TJ and Emily entering the building made me flash back to the opening title sequence of Get Smart.
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Agreed!
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I am not surprised by Aidan's pregnancy. I have been expecting something like this since the scene with the Priest in Chapter 2. The prophecies about Luis mentioned his children. It may be that Aidan is the only person with whom Luis can father children. Aidan has many gifts. Bearing children is clearly one of them.
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Surgeons are not well known for their humility.
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Call me suspicious, but has any one thought of doing a physical inventory to make sure all the pieces are still in the museum? Fernando's actions look like active cover-up rather than incompetence.
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Can Chris use the old form of soul magic to somehow burn out the demonic in Yonthar's energy? If souls can be corrupted, can they be purified?
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DA Ch 53 - Meeting the Family
Thomas Haworth commented on quokka's story chapter in DA Ch 53 - Meeting the Family
Uncle Owen's black eyes are a red flag. She has started to hit him. When will she start taking it out on the children?
