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Valkyrie

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  1. Valkyrie

    Escape

    Thanks, Defiance When I wrote this, it was very windy and dark outside, so there were lots of creaks and noises, and the cats were freaking out over every little thing. I'm surprised I didn't have nightmares that night. lol
  2. Valkyrie

    Chapter 1

    O.O You had me so drawn into the story, hoping that he'd stun whatever beast was hunting him and that effing Anslaugh or someone heard the distress beacon and would come and rescue him...then BLAM...he sets his phaser on himself... Like other reviewers, I was hoping that it might be the start of a new antho series. There is always the possibility that he had it set on 'stun'. Right? Great story, Cia.
  3. Valkyrie

    Day and Night

    I enjoyed this story, Drew. Good for Luke for not giving up on his friend. I'd like to think that Adam will eventually accept his friend and not throw away so many years of good friendship. Nice job
  4. Valkyrie

    Chapter 1

    I thought you did a fantastic job with this story. You built a believable world in a very short period of time. The futility and then hope really shone through. I'd love to read more.
  5. Valkyrie

    Burning Bright

    I loved this story. Kevin's love for Bryce shone through clearly, and the surprise proposal was perfect.
  6. Valkyrie

    Chapter 1

    What a powerful story, Addy. My heart broke for both men. The joy of having Romeo survive, only to be crushed by the realization that he lost him anyway. You portrayed Romeo's issues very realistically. With injuries of that extent, memory loss and some kind of impairment is pretty much assured. The body is an amazing thing though, and continues to heal long after we think it's stopped. You gave us hope at the end, when I had thought that Romeo and Julian were lost to each other. I should know better, though. Love will find a way. Very nicely done, my friend.
  7. Valkyrie

    Escape

    Thanks Cole Your input helped me make it an even better story I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review
  8. Valkyrie

    Escape

    *runs and hides* I'm glad you liked it, Carlos. Thanks for the review.
  9. Valkyrie

    Escape

    Thanks for the great review, Gary. Sorry...no chapter 2 on this one. I'll leave their fate up to your imagination.
  10. Valkyrie

    Escape

    I'll have to leave it up to your imagination as to whether or not they were able to escape for real. I probably won't do a sequel, but you never know. Thanks for reading and leaving a review.
  11. Valkyrie

    Escape

    Thanks, Parker. That's pretty much what I was going for. lol Thanks so much for reading and leaving a review. I'm glad you liked it.
  12. :D Thanks for all your hard work putting together the anthology, Renee. I love the banner, Mann. Great job I can't wait to read them all.
  13. Valkyrie

    Escape

    My head hurt like a son-of-a-bitch. I groaned and sat up, only to immediately lie back down due to the shooting daggers of pain exploding through my skull. What the hell did I do last night? And where the hell was I? I was lying on the floor, as my back was very clearly letting me know. I sat up much more slowly this time, and opened one of my eyes, then the other one. It was pitch black, wherever I was. The pain in my head lessened to a dull ache. My body felt like it’d been run over b
  14. A man wakes up in a pitch black room with no memory. He must use elements from his surroundings to escape the room and complete tasks given to him by a mysterious voice.
  15. Valkyrie

    Santa's Visit

    Great story, Carlos Merry Christmas!
  16. Thanks Tim. I really appreciate the review. I'm glad you liked it.
  17. Thanks, AC I'm so glad you liked it.
  18. Valkyrie

    For Andy

    Great poem, Parker, It's perfect for Andy.
  19. This is one of my favorite blog features. Great questions and replies. I absolutely love "Things are Different" and I hope that pmdacey comes back to finish it someday.
  20. I'm wondering if that phone call will come back to bite him...if the police still have it and see the call they're going to investigate who the caller is. This was a great chapter. It's so nice to see Andy in a real home environment instead of the school. I hope he gets to stay there for a while, at least for the week his 'dad is out of town'. I have to say I'm surprised that the assistant principal left him out in the elements like that. I would think he has an obligation to make sure all his students are picked up safe and sound. Not very smart or responsible on his part. Great chapter. Your writing just continues to get stronger. I can't wait for the next chapter.
  21. Valkyrie

    Chapter 7

    Thanks, Parker. Yes, poor Ethan. He's such a sweetheart and it's never fun to get shot down. Thanks for the review. Reading all your reviews has gotten me back into the mood to work on this story.
  22. Valkyrie

    Chapter 7

    Thanks, Parker. Yes, poor Ethan. He's such a sweetheart and it's never fun to get shot down. Thanks for the review. Reading all your reviews has gotten me back into the mood to work on this story.
  23. What a wonderful idea, Carlos. I don't remember if I read this last year, but if I haven't, then you'll get a new 'like' and review from me.
  24. :wizard: Happy Birthday, Wayne! I hope you have an awesome day!!
  25. Valkyrie

    Chapter 6

    It wasn't easy for Galen to confront Josh, but it needed to be done. You'll get to meet Jody again. Jody is pretty awesome. Thanks again for all the reviews.
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