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  1. heifel35

    CDMX • XVII

    Cj plays a dangerous game....
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    Combustion

    I keep wondering if anybody ever found J.J.'s father's body? And has it been mentioned if there is a case with the police? I feel sorry for Shaun for loosing his dad and I know he's lashing out, but blaming J.J. is not the answer.
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    Chapter 42

    I hope Adrians mom is still alive. But if the way he behaved is a warning, my guess is she's in the final stage, I'm affraid. Poor Adrian going through it alone 😭
  4. I feel the need to point out the mix-up with their names. It confused me a bit. I hope Jennie makes Cody tell her the truth about what happened between the boys.
  5. Wasn't James Deans uncle? I've noticed that you haven written brother in the last two chapters. So maybe you can clear that up? 🤔 🙂
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    Chapter 32

    I wish both of them would be brave and just be honest for once. Nathans dad doesn't approve of him.. how much more obvious does it get?
  7. Hunter is a very damage boy with a very troubled past. A dad in jail, a psychotic mom and a dead twin. Poor guy!! 😭 I hope he survives and will get some help. Taylor can not loose his whole family.
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    Chapter 5

    Am so happy Ethan is back home.
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    Chapter 3

    Poor kid 😢 Is there something going on with Belle?
  10. It would be best if Marcus and Rodney found the boys camp instead and have them "dissapear in the night" before Christopher and the monsters attack them.
  11. I sure hope the bears get on the road before the grazy wolfs arrives... 🤞🤞
  12. heifel35

    Chapter 25

    I sure hope they all survive. 🤞🤞🤞
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    Chapter 15

    I really hope that Elsie can help Ethan so he can start to heal and relax a bit more. And that everything surrounding Michael will be okay. Ethan needs to find his peace 🙂
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    Chapter 15

    It seems that Connor in his head had allready left for Ireland with Jason. He was so sure he would come with him. But Connor should have realished that for Jason to just up and leave when his dad just came home from hospital, would'nt be a so easy. I hope he's mature enough to at least say goodbye to Jason, but maybe not...
  15. heifel35

    Chapter 12

    I sure hope Dale is out to his dad.. can't remember if it has been mentioned?..
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    Embers 10

    Ethan not being able to turn of his power can't be a good thing. Something is fighting back. I sure hope both Lackie and Brandon will be allright. I like the way the guys tried to bond with Brandon. And absolutely loved the Kardasian line🤣😂
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    Chapter 8

    I still think Syl is a b.... all she does is namedropping and makes Ed feel lousy. Poor kid!
  18. Sounds like Matt is growing up and realise he needs to talk to Seamus about the summer, where he should live and actually ask Seamus what he thinks and wants.
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    Norway

    Like the story. And the fact that the danish you write, has gotten so much better than the early chapters. 🙂 But I just have to point out a few danish mistakes as a dane myself.. I would say Ditley must be Ditlev. Thats the danish/norwegian spelling. And hyalros is hvalros 🙂
  20. I'm from Denmark, and have to ask what is 1893? Tried google but it only came up with a footballclub... 🤔 no matter what..remember it is actually pretty cold here right now.
  21. heifel35

    Chapter 3

    I really don't like Syl. The namecalling has been going on since Edvard was little and it is all he believes of himself. Poor kid!!
  22. heifel35

    Chapter 2

    I don't think we got to know Edvards IQ. He believes it to be 73, but the new tests must have been higher, taken in consideration the comment from E3.. 🤔🤔 Diagnosis confirmed yes, but not his intelligens, I Think..
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    Chapter 26

    I'm really curious about what you do with a dog (Rascal) on a boat when he "needs the toilet"? I have wondered about it for some time, and just have to ask 😂🤔🤦‍♀️
  24. heifel35

    Chapter 3

    I could almost feel Grays pain when he thought Griff was dead in the explosion. Especially since the loss of Gabby is still very raw for him. Riley and Gray needs to talk a lot more before any kind of rekindling can or should happen. But somehow I get a feeling that Jack will become a problem...
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    Chapter 2

    Does Russo know about Gray and Rileys history? And is Russo gay? 🤔 I hope Gray and Riley will sit down and really talk things through. 🤞
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