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    Chapter 8

    Hmm... Interesting. Diarmad claims Noel to be childish and impossible. Instead, he's acting like an immature ass. Landyn is right. He never took the time to get to know Noel, but seems to have expected everything to simply carry on as usual. No changes in his life, although D has had a very long time to work out the mate thing. Noel didn't but still managed to handle the situation.
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    Shots fired

    @droughtquake Yeah, those bears and wolves are really a nuisance in my apartment in the city...
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    Shots fired

    I love that your campaign for an update is pan-GA!
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    Shots fired

    I'm easily influenced. Not one of those artsy writers who has to have it their way... I'm more of a sellout. Glad you liked this chapter! I'm happy it came across as balanced to you. I have my own, strong personal convictions on the matter, but Joel wouldn't start lecturing. He's more show and tell. He didn't even tell me why it was important to include telling Bri about the hitman, but reading your comment made me realise Joel wanted to show consequences of violence. He is sneaky sometimes... Thank you for commenting! I'm glad you liked the chapter! He, he... You wouldn't be the first to propagate for more kids. The nest will feel empty when Mason leaves. What to do...? What to do...? All inspiration is welcome! I like shooting, but I'm with you on the ownership issue. The consequences of gun violence are devastating. But, as someone here was kind enough to inform me, I'm European and have no understanding of the concept of freedom... SATW is on point as always... But Joel could totally have flashed Bri his derriere and not thought it strange. We're not that bothered. Thank you for commenting and digging out the perfect comic! Yeah, they have that effect, don't they?
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    Shots fired

    “What did you promise this time?” Joel could still hear Lucas’ words, at the same time skeptical and amused. He had to admit it was an unusual suggestion, but it wasn’t until he opened his mouth that he realized today’s activity might not be everyone’s cup of tea. A glance in the rearview mirror brought out of his thoughts. “Hey, hey! You back there! Cut it out!” Joel tried to keep his eyes on the road and the thankfully lazy Saturday traffic while admonishing the teens in the backse
  6. That makes me so sad to hear. I wish a speedy recovery and quick exist from hospital!
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    Lesson #2

    Just like your characters speak through silence, your writing says way more than 900 words should. Each sentence carefully crafted and filled with significance. I had to read this lesson very slowly, just to get it all. Impressive! I look forward to the continuation!
  8. Seems I'm on a prompt roll. Will take a shot at #593! Another Drift blowing together.
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    Chapter 25

    Hmm... Nathan seems to have trouble keeping his interest towards Bryce in check. Maybe he feels weird about moving from Liam to his close friend? He didn't seem this nervous when he got to know Liam. I can understand Bryce being a bit put off by Nathan's remark on casual sex. It's not for everyone, but for those who like it it can be fun. So a slightly more open mind, perhaps?
  10. Happy birthday!
  11. I wrote this little naughty scene inspired by prompt 591 and my readers! The summer office party was in full swing. Partners, associates and significant others were all milling about chatting and sipping champagne in the reception area of Roberts Ander and Tierney, or the RAT nest as the associates used to call it jokingly, much to the dismay of the naming partners. The drinks were flowing and the hors d’oeuvres were of course plentiful but tiny, with all sorts of delicious meats and seafood on toothpicks and cheese with sliced pear or figs on miniscule crackers. Joel snuck one more unidentified cheese on cracker thing into his mouth, almost embarrassed at the number of morsels he had devoured so far. They simply didn’t seem to add up to any substantial food and weren’t nearly enough to satisfy his appetite. More than ever, he felt like “the Swedish giant”, as Mr. Ander had dubbed him in a rare outburst of quick wit. Not that Joel had joined in the laughter. With the amount of champagne being pushed his way by waiters circling like friendly but insistent sharks, he needed all the calories he could get. The bubbly alcohol had worked its dizzying magic, making the room go ever so slightly fuzzy and causing him to giggle in a rather undignified way at nothing in particular. Read more
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    Just watch me

    I'm glad you liked it! Just a little scene they whispered in my ear.
  13. Now that's just mean! What the hell has happened while they were busy going through the facility? I guess Trein and his gang will get to experience feral like never before if they harm either of that trio...
  14. Maybe that's why they irk me? The induction into hypernormality. No room for independent thought. Follow along like a good girl or boy... Or i'm just cynical...
  15. It's like those Sweet 16 parties. Just too bad it's so much about show and not having fun. I feel bad for the kids who can't afford it or whose parents don't care.
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    Just watch me

    In his own naughty way, Lucas is determined to make Joel happy. Joel just takes a little more time to catch on. Or to admit he loves it...
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    Just watch me

    A junior associate learns a lot about the people they work so closely with. Discretion comes naturally and I expect Anton will be the same. I knew all about extramarital affairs and other stuff they got up to... You know, I hadn't thought about it, but it makes total sense! Lucas is a crafty sort when it comes to shenanigans. He didn't tell me, but this could all be his doing. I hope people see the updates, so they can tag along. It's been a while since I posted... I'm glad you had fun with my guys! They pop in from time to time to share their lives with the rest of us. I think Anton was equally happy...
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    Chapter 21

    I'm thinking being with Alannah could be just the thing needed. She's not threatening as the the guys and can perhaps reach through the veil of fear to get to Galen. They're in for a lot of work. Is there no professional who can come visit? They need some help on how to handle the situation.
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    Chapter 7a

    Andy, Andy, Andy... Stephen is right when it comes to not being free to give himself to Marcus. They should talk. But since Andy doesn't know what to do and has been too scared to even peek under the lid of that can of worms... I don't know if he could actually say anything. A choice between his love of the church and his love of Marcus? I doubt he's ready for that.
  20. This hit me kind of hard. Not because I had to distance myself to save myself, but I so know the feeling. My family has always looked at me as the odd one, the one they can't figure out. Luckily, they've supported me nonetheless. But I feel I don't really belong. I have friends who weren't so lucky... The pain they feel is devastating at times.
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    Just watch me

    The summer office party was in full swing. Partners, associates and significant others were all milling about chatting and sipping champagne in the reception area of Roberts Ander and Tierney, or the RAT nest as the associates used to call it jokingly, much to the dismay of the naming partners. The drinks were flowing and the hors d’oeuvres were of course plentiful but tiny, with all sorts of delicious meats and seafood on toothpicks and cheese with sliced pear or figs on miniscule crackers.
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    Chapter 7

    Good to see Noel take a stand. Having to perform like a trained pet to jeep up appearances when everyone already knows the score... Humiliating. Also, who wouldn't have naughty fantasies about lawyers? We're a sexy bunch... And everything gets better with ABBA!
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    Chapter 24

    I like getting to know the guys around Liam more, even if this chapter dealt with the dark side of clubbing. Bryce has more depth and strength than first meets the eye. He'll pull through, a little wiser and perhaps a little warier, but moving on.
  24. You had me reliving the feeling, the sounds, the scent... Precious. But angels? Only intermittently...
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    Non-Binary?

    This process you're going through would be so much easier if the rest of us weren't so hung up on categorising everyone and everything so they fit our own perception of the world. I don't think I cold ever fully grasp what you're going through, but I can consciously decide to support the journey. Sounds to me like you should continue to meander for a while longer. It's your journey and you should be at the healm.
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