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Story Review Featured Story: Thaw
Puppilull commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
OOOHH! Seeing this just about made my day! Such a great review, Tim. Thank you! Almost hard to believe it's about my little story... LOL Everyone's invited to go north and join the fun! -
Chapter 5 - Inquisition
Puppilull commented on Lux Apollo's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Inquisition
It feels a bit like David is seeing things that aren't there. Sure, he's worried about Mike and they need a solution to his work schedule, but to feel the entire relationship is in peril seems too much. He should talk to Mike, but not from the viewpoint that they might have to break up. Vicky isn't helping, when she pours gas on the flames like that, even triggering his anxiety. -
They will have their work cut out for them, fighting this attraction between them. Still, it's probably wise to keep a cool head in these dangerous times... Soon Daddy dearest will butt in again, making things even more complicated. Himura... He knows a good right hand man does what's needed, not necessarily wanted.
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But were they upset about the content matter or the execution of the ad? I hope for the latter as the former would be truly depressing.
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You know, as cringeworthy as the Dyas ad is, I find it kind of endearing. It feels like real employees and customers speaking and in the slightly ridiculous way of dividing people into different slots when all they want is a pot (or a minion...) shows how ridiculous it is to make this difference in other aspects of life. To me, it's much more powerful than the slick and polished bank commercial, which struck me as using the 'gay' as embellishment. And I really like horses...
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Well, this was a nice way to start the weekend! Hezra is such a great couple and I hope they find a way to make this work. Congratulations on your first finished story here!
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This dance between Kye and Ash is very entertaining. Nice for Kye to be able to be a real person, not some toy for another's amusement.
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You paint such vivid pictures with your words and always transport me to the places you describe. Seemingly simple words, but in reality so full of true emotion and meaning. That's not an easy thing to do.
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I was tempted to say "Winter is coming" referring to Adrian, but that would perhaps be mean to him. He seems sensitive enough about his looks as it is... And now they are all going to end up in Nabius by boat? Will be an interesting time at the Di Coteau place. And the summit on top of that...
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Hmm... Can't his dad simply cut off his money? That would make it very hard for Dorian to stay on. He should stay, though, and try to make his own life separate from his dad. Will be hard, with him in the race to be vice president. Although, right now, I'm not sure he should stay if he can't leave that room... It could turn really ugly. I would go nuts if I had to live with someone like that and not be able to choose for myself who I shared a room with. A strange rule, I think, but it has its reasons, I'm sure.
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Aaww, you guys...! This was so sweet. You learning Swedish and all. For little old me. Thank you! (And as soon as I have more likes I'll pull an Arnold.)
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Marcus is a wise man... It pays to know the devil you're with. Ysabel knowing about the marriage could cause interesting 'discussions' at the summit. If they all make it that far. Luca... He's growing up so fast. LOL Will there be a conflict between Adrian and Eamon? Will they both fight for his affections? Who will win...? For a 'simple sex toy' getting proposed to by a prince must be virtually unbelievable.
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So Corey is finally realizing he's been a bit hard on Jason? About time... But he's right about them needing a talk. At least Corey needs one ot lay his own ghosts to rest. He might even realize it's not about Jason, but his father.
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I think Deke needs to realise Kraig is barely able to stand up or even eat. It's no wonder his sexuality is sort of turned off. When in survival mode, I would guess even guys have a hard time accessing those types of feelings. If indeed Kraig doesn't feel the same, then they appear to be in a spot of trouble...
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A tricky thing that, going from a strictly regulated relationship into the chaotic vortex known as an ordinary relationship. They tend to be anything but ordinary... I know one sub roll Carlos would like to fill... Guffaw, guffaw! (Sorry, that's terrible. I know. Maybe I should get help...?)
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So, is Nathan out of their lives now? Sweet and a bit sad at the same time that they could share this brief experience. Maybe they can stay in touch. And I might be weird but I love when you get all graphic! LOL A nice change from much of the sweetness I encounter reading here (my own stories included...).
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OK, Roger has given me the heebeejeebees since day 1, but I could never think he was some sort of serial killer/abductor. I mean he apparently has done this before, if he's so comfortable he even brings his boyfriend up to stay while he has a victim in his bunker. Cold... If indeed Josh is unaware, which I think and for Galen's sake hope. Galen has to be OK. Or there will be pitchforks... Very good pacing to this chapter. You kept the onward momentum and still managed to show the day-to-day, rather unglamorous side to police work. It's not all CSI and magic gadgets...
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Chapter 9 For Better or Worse
Puppilull commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 9 For Better or Worse
I guess now it's time for Toby and Tilly to have a talk... So potentially a new pack all at once. No wonder Kellar is overwhelmed. -
Hmm... You make me want to go on vacation this instant! Nice to see them enjoying themselves!
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That situation with Travis and his friends is getting really disturbing. I worry they will try something to hurt Dorian. They give me the creeps. At least he has another friend now. Even if Seth isn't interested in him that way, he could prove to be a great supporter if things turn ugly.
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Even the seemingly meek are quite resourceful. Marion may not have traditional fighting skills but her mind can prove every bit as dangerous for Alex. It seems some are already plotting to make changes? Will Alex and Carl be able to join them without being attacked by Marion? And a wedding... Sigh... So happy our boys! As the romantic I am, I'll keep my fingers crossed for Ralia. She'll need a partner who can let her be free and fierce. Not so easy to find...
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Wiki Games - The Music Business
Puppilull commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Wiki Games - The Music Business
This is one form of poetry I'd like to try! I love the randomness suddenly taking on a whole new meaning. Very interesting and inspiring! -
Oh my... That was a chilling read. Even with Tom dead, can Tim not be free? Obsession is an ugly creature, never leading to anything good.
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Chapter 10 William Foster
Puppilull commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 10 William Foster
Hmm... I think I disagree with Cory about letting the anger out. Sure, it won't fix anything as such, but to keep it inside can cause even more damage. He's not going to go to the extremes Lawson went to in his rage, so to be too controlled could backfire. At the end, though, it seemed as if he could release his anger anyway.
