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Hmm... I suspect the queen is right. It will be very interesting to see the people give up their hatred and anger simply because Alex and Carl get married. Sure, they might respect the marriage, but who's to stop a few generals to plot against them? I mean an assassination might be frowned upon, but ultimately respected in Nabius. So, they have their work cut out for them. And yay! Luca is OK! And getting awfully chummy with Eamon... LOL

Getting his priorities in order is a good start. I guess casual sex gets a bit dull after a while and suddenly there can be longing. Marco could be a nice guy, just not interested in a relationship. It's for the best they cleared that up right away. We'll see now how they progress in their friendship. Seemed like an eye-opener for Corey too, to realize Jason indeed had changed.

It must be so weird to end up in that very different environment. So many new things and ideas. I kept thinking about 'rumspringa'. I can't shake the thought that it can't be all paradise, though. When will the first few cracks show? Or are things all nice and dandy for our kids now? I would hope so, but life is seldom so neat. Besides, missing home must be very hard when you're that young. Even if home is dangerously close to a raving lunatic.

Ooohhh... You left us right when things were getting very interesting... I hope the prompt gods are favourable soon, so we can get to the next chapter!

Ever so slowly, they are inching closer. I wonder if their arrival at the pack will make it apparent for them and others what is going on...? They seem to need a little push.

So funny they've all tried to tell themselves it's just a bit of fun... LOL! So smitten, so close.

Another great story in the making, I think. I do hope Travis pulls a Curtis in us and turns out to be a little less jock. Could be a long year for Dorian otherwise... At least he's made a friend. Should ease the loneliness a little.

He, he... A boyfriend of a distant lawyer... I seem to recognise this from somewhere. Us lawyers are hard to live with and I feel for David. Will be interesting to see what happens. Could this party be the trigger?

I'm learning to fly, but I ain't got wings Coming down is the hardest thing This chapter had me humming Tom Petty... LOL Dean has wings but it seems it's more difficult to fly than surf. Perhaps more a question of letting go in your mind and believe it's possible. Douglas Adams crossed my mind too. Flying only being a matter of learning to miss the ground...

An interesting chapter. For how long can we blame the people around us, who hold power over us, for our failures? His mother could very well be a complete bitch, but Lawson isn't a young man anymore. He should take responsibility for his own actions.

Oh poor Kye! What a terrible thing to find out! I would be very careful to relay this to Ash. He might not have the same qualms about hurting their father....

A hopeful ending despite his mother's incomprehensible choice. Good to see a man of God actually preaching love. With the whole bathroom controversy going on, it's a reminder that people behind the headlines, whose lives are affected, are just that. People, who only want to live their lives in peace. Great story!

He, he... Hiding from emotion by turning it into a question of logic. Doesn't matter though, since nature or god have made plans for these two. Holding hands... Very sweet!

I'm so happy the Karimov men have resolved their differences and can come together as a family once more. I didn't see Mikhail's affair with a man, let alone Dante's father, as ever happening. What a surprise twist! I suppose Daisuke had to die, but it still was sad to see him pay the price like that. Perhaps I'm forever an optimist and not a very good gangster, but I like to believe people can change. In the Yakuza... Betrayal can't be forgiven. My heart went out to Masahiro. So terrible for him. Such a good story, Cynus! I've looked forward to every chapter.

I really like all the action in this chapter. So many people taking a stand for what is right and fair. They are on their way to change, or so it seems. Must feel good for Tiffany to see so many people out to support her. Of course, the world won't magically be all rainbows and sunshine after this, no matter the outcome but at least she knows she has friends and supporters now.

They should take it slow, even if they're only aiming for friendship. Going too fast could set them up fo a giant fight and more resentment. Since Corey still has such a hard time forgiving Jason, they have ot clea the air. Otherwise, I think they'll be stuck in limbo. Or worse. Forgiveness regardless of outcome of their relationship would be good for Corey. He's kind of locked in the past. Possibly because of his father... Noot a good place to be.

Hmm... What were they arguing about? Did Park want Kraig home? Doesn't seem possible. And for an Alpha, the self control was admirable. No jealous growling! Way to go!

So different approaches to life. Maybe they can learn from each other and meet in the middle. Although I prefer the Tomacian way. I'm not envious of the boys coming clean and telling the truth. That's quite a bomb they're about to drop.

*Snicker, snicker* Silly Doms! But it's nice to see Daniel having so many people in his life who want to protect him. Hmm... So they are both in therapy...? Interesting.

Oh no, Hezra! You can't let the stupid media drive you apart! Communication! I think someone needs to crash that press conference... And on another note: Violet and Xavier, sitting in a tree, k-i-s-s-i-n-g...

Hmm... I think they (or just Tobyn?) are resisting the inevitable. Tobyn shouldn't be so scared to be attracted to Kellar. if need be, I'm sure they can sort out the baby making without the need to resort to unnecessary actions such as a loveless marriage. I mean, it's 2016. Having kids with a friend isn't unheard of. Of course, shifters tend to be conservative, but the chance for shifter babies should allow for a bit of rule bending.

Oh yay! I'm so happy to see book two! I've missed these violent, complicated people... And now there are a few new ones! Very intriguing. I'm really curious about Carl and Alex, but I guess they'll show up more soon. And Luca! Before Marion goes too far with revenge, I hope she realises Alex has changed quite a bit. Still, she has a lot to be vengeful about.

I liked the car ad. It was clever. And Tim, those 90s clothes... LOL Here's an ad from Sweden. The guys in bed are two soccer players. One gay, one not. The ad is for an organisation for health care companies, wanting to battle a proposed law meaning the state should have much more say in how they provide care to their customers. The inspector shows up to make sure they 'do it' right. I think it's from 2014. It's Swedish, so proceed with caution... LOL

I wouldn't worry about the amount and detail of sex in your story. As long as it’s part of the story in a logical way, as others have pointed out above, it will be fine. When you read here on GA, you'll notice quite a few stories have no sex and are still popular. Why? Because the author has a story to tell and an honesty in doing so. Make your characters as real as possible emotionally (they can be vampires or aliens, so no need for total realism ) and readers will respond. Sex or no sex. As for readership, I think being active around the site and engaging with others help you get noticed. If people know a little about you, they will be curious. Don't worry if one story has few followers. You'll still learn from it. Then suddenly another of your stories get more attention for no apparent reason. Just enjoy it. And keep writing!

Hmm...I think he's right in Lawson showing his scars little by little. If him more or less killing a guy is easier to talk about, I really wonder why he's locked up now... And Sandy being a total dick... He could have at least texted Cory. Leaving money like that. No wonder Cory lost it.