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This was done soooooooooooo nicely...thought provoking, suspenseful, anxiety-laden, tears of joy...and pain for Jenn...but she'll love to see Noah happy and after all, it wasn't like she and Jordan were a long standing couple! How many dates did they actually go on (counting on my ONE hand...😜 )...she'll be just fine!! So happy you didn't make Noah go through a long drawn out "I don't really know" drama ...EXCELLENT CHAPTER!!
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Very sorry about your illness and hope that you are much better! You were missed...glad to have you healthy again! This was an awesome chapter...
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Very nicely done...the first 'alone' talk!! Rory seems so calm, contained, relaxed...just waiting to get outside to roar with happiness! 😍 Hope Kiyo takes a chill pill while he's out,😏 so that he'll not want to escort Rory out with his foot!
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Wonderful chapter!!! Hope all is well with you and yours...thank you so much for the update...but for you, your health, your family...we'll happily wait, with all the patience in the world!!🤗 And for the record, I'm gonna choose Hellshield's (B)..F'ing Kill Bill!!😉
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Yesssssssss...excitement building!!! Can't wait to Rory's next move...but the grocery store move was smoooooooooth!! 😉 Awesome chapter!
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This is fantastic...I'll take a front row seat to the scene of his having to face the Alpha!!! 😧 Can hardly wait for the next chapter...Let the school year begin!!! 🤤
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Very nice to get the real story behind Brady and the high school bullies!! Now Ember has GOT to make this right..eat a lot of crow, swallow some pride...the usual suspects that go with a huge apology!! Three thumbs up!!!😍🤗
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Psst...you didn't hear it from me, but we ALWAYS look forward to your next chapters!! This was an awesome chapter, and I'm waiting for Rory to get to Milan...and 'heal' him..😉 Just wishing out loud....😍
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OHHH...I hope I know where this story is going...with the smells, the quick healing... Loving this!! My favorite other beings!! Rory's all in, just from a small wiff of Milan's mummy..
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Excellent start...loving the family dynamics...so much love and dedication to each other! 🤗 💓
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Have no fear...you guys handled this extremely sensitive subject...BEAUTIFULLY!!💕 Though, I would have loved to have rearranged Sean's facial bones into something unrecognizable, I'm happy that you and John handled it without prison sentences being involved...KUDOS!!! Abuse of any type, physical, mental, emotional, etc., is something most of us abhor!! Congrats on the new job!!🤗 Hope you're enjoying it!
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Interesting and intriguing...very nice!!
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Very nice job...I'm hoping they'll eventually head back to the island to live beautifully and simple...live, love, and laugh!!
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My condolences to you and family...our hearts are with you and hope that your smiles will return as time heals! Hugs n Kisses from all of us...and always love!! BTW...fantastic, suspenseful chapter,
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Thanks for a beautifully written story...but most for a journey worth reading about and an ending worth the happy face!!!
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Fabulous chapter...LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT!!!!
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Great to know that you're feeling better and hope you continue being well!! Thanks for this longed for update...it was full of everything we needed...laughter, love, granny antics, kid pranks...and the inevitable gut-punch cliffy that now has us all on "DaMetl" pins and needles...waiting, hoping and surmising that "it's all good"! This was a definite "drop the damn mic" chapter!!!
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Very niceeeeeeee...but like everyone else, I'm gonna need a manicure from hanging on this cliff you left us on!! OUCH!! Great story!
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I, also backtracked and read The Island of Poa...it was awesome...So will this be a weekly fix, bi-weekly(fingers crossed), or when ever we sneak up on your computer??? Great story....we'll be here...WAITING...patiently??
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THREE thumbs up!! ....oops...hold on let me borrow another thumb....Bndmetl??? Anyone???..Ok.. really, really liked this!!
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AWESOME!!!!!...WOW...first time, a taste of Ember to remember!!
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Fabulous story from start to finish!!!! Thank you for sharing!!!
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Onim commented on FSELL's story chapter in I'm not really sure about this...
Normally, I'm not a 'teary' person....but geezzzzz, this story, this chapter in particular just punched me in the eye, I know that's the only reason I'm sitting here crying at a laptop!!! Awesome story, kick azz chapter!!!!! -
Try the "on bended knee thingy"...you know..psssttt(commonly known as extreme begging), I'll even loan you my knees!!
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Gotta love it!!! I like Ember's thinking...hehehe, let lil Mikey know that "what's not mine yet, will NEVER be yours"!! Work it Em!! Niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeee chapter!!!! So...how about another chapter for the holiday...ahhhmmm..."Happy Addicted Reader's Day"..maybe?? "Ok you have a good nite then"..
