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This is good...this soooo good!! Payne is a nice addition and great fit, personality-wise, for our Kentucky "snarks"....love her already!! Now to Adam...goes without saying that as soon as he and Ian realizes that they're not suffering from stomach viruses they'll move into fabulous territory!! Can't wait for that sister to see them together...that'll be the best "get back" everrrrrr!!
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This is perfect...the introductory and background info on these two is told with the perfect amount of "snarky", love, and humor!! Once again...you write it down...we fall in love!!! Thank you, thank you...now we see why Uncle Ian fit sooo nicely with his Kentucky family...
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Okkkkkkkk...so I'll be the one to buy the Kleenex for this one (not to worry Jeffrey L, I got your back)!! So, love ALL of your characters, including the furbabies!! And by the way, I'd just put in an urgent request to the Spin-off God to please give us a love for Ian...darned if he didn't deliver...big time!!!! So, to you Bndmetl (Supreme Spin-off God)
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Awww...this made me want to ship Billy and Dustin's moms off to the Island of Stupid and Denial, on the Titanic...I'll buy their tickets!!! Hopefully Billy's dad will be around long enough to stop his mom and her "Jim Jones" minister from doing any emotional or physical harm to him!! This was an awesome chapter, with Billy's father garnering the Oscar and my heart!! Hope Dustin pulls through...
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WOW...I'm speechless...trying to hold in the rage that is consuming me right now and even though it's your story.. .I assure you that NO one reading it could hold back the tears!! I wish I could understand the mentality of the type of person that can wake up in the morning after causing another human being such pain and agony, and not want to kill themselves!!! It scares me that beasts like these walk among us incognito! This was such a well written, descriptive chapter...too much so...we felt the pain!!
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Very exciting chapter...a bit of a nail-biter!!
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Finding it very hard to find anything that Rob could like about these two losers, Ava and Bryan!! Two drunks...one abusive, one submissive...both useless!! Rob should look for better friends! And Bryan sure doesn't appear to be boyfriend material that you want to write home about!!!
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This is very nicely done..."all religion does is to teach people to discriminate against other people"...LOVE IT!! That is sooooo true!! If this is your first story...then I greatly look forward to reading all others...thanks for sharing the talent!!
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Will is selfish and irresponsible...wants what he wants, when he wants it!! Claire the control freak...loves to control more than she loves the friend...now unfortunately poor Troy has run into two future "America's Most Wanted" candidates...HOPEFULLY, he's literally fallen into an angel's arms and they'll rescue each other from hell's doorway!! Just my take on an extraordinary, developing story!!! Loving this!!
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Hmmm...personally, the first time Derek insulted Will, I gave him a slight (very) pass, but for some reason he's got this thing up his butt about Will's good intentions...and now it's irritating, even for Theo, I think! He'd better get a reality check, before he starts alienating all of his friends!! Right about now, he needs to apologize to Will and they both need to realize that they each want what's best for the kids!! Excellent chapter...CC's better, she'll straighten all this petty crap out..!! Right now...I'm team Will, who put's his money, energy, time, and love...where his mouth is!!
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I must say that I for one am so disappointed in Derrick's reaction to Will's suggestions...instead of berating him like some unknown kid off the street with hair-brained ideas, he should have shown him the respect that Will has always shown him...after all this time, he should know that Will is not some irresponsible looney tune!! I fear he and his shelter have lost a great benefactor and he owes Will an "on the knees" apology... Poor CC, I hope she gets better, so Will can snatch she and Cash up and go to Liam....they all need a vacation! Awesome chapter...still covering my eyes, because parents don't have sex!!!
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Hmmm...let's see, whom could they possibly pull out of the "Racist, Homophobic Cesspool of Religion" to run for mayor???? Can't wait to see what moron falls out of that sewer... In any case, love this chapter, mixing equal parts of love, business, and surprises...
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Hmmm...sorry to say that I might be the only one NOT looking at Ava as "friendship" material...more like bully/control freak/bad attitude!! Certainly not my idea of a good friend that gets me drunk to the point of oblivion...a beard would probably keep them safe, but at what cost with such a volatile lil bully...I see not good times ahead!! Good story, just questionable personalities as friends...
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We're hooked....very nice start and hope that his family of misfits aren't allowed to get their hands on him...he's seen enough of their filth and ignorance!! Can't wait...more please!
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You make things soooooooo difficult, Bndmetl...just when I thought this story couldn't get any better than the best...you go and write this stunningly beautiful chapter!! Now I've got to write a review through tears and snot... To imagine that two brilliant, lovable kids would be able to teach the world how to love without borders, prejudices, and all other "man-made" complications is amazing and to have them do it so selflessly...Thank you for Will and Liam...through them, we can only hope for a world as seen through their beautiful eyes!!!
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I think I'll go with the crowd favorite...a beautiful, sensuous pic of Will!!
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Awww...happy to get the scoop on Seb and Beau!!! So nicely done, so far, really liking the POV style of story!! Great job!!
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As I was reading about their "misunderstanding" I was reminded of an old saying..."common sense...ain't always common!!" Hoping "maturity" steps in and handles things soon!!! Nice chapter...
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Amazing chapter and your characters are adorable...so far, I'm in agreement about Chandler being the fave!! I think that Landon is in as much pain from abuse and abandonment as Chandler, and they will sort each other out, hopefully without too much pain and heartache involved! Very nice job, KD!!
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Fantastic cliffy!!!! Love the suspense and drama of this chapter! The love you portray between all of your characters is just wonderful...Will and Liam could teach the world how to actually "love, unconditionally"!!! Thanks for sharing...
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Once again...an amazing story, done with a different vibe, but beautiful none the less!!! So happy that all of your characters have come full circle with very nice results..except for the diabolical Michael, who got exactly what he deserved!! Thank you, Wolf for this one and sooo looking forward to the next one!!
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AWESOME!!! Definitely team Raymond/Lawman here!! Thank goodness Daniel is finally accepting his place as a member of "The Adams Family"...snap, snap...
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Sooo glad you're back with this story!!!!! Very niceeeeeee character interactions, especially Jacob...and loving the vampire-wolf romance!! Great job!
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Hmmmm...I personally thought that the "fugly" incident gave a beautiful sense of fun and levity to lighten their mood after the "fugly mom" scene!! I love their sense of humor and how they're able to enjoy interacting with their whole family crew...body guards, friends, housekeepers, etc..NEVER A DULL MOMENT with these folk!!! More, more, more, please!!
