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Fantastic cliffy!!!! Love the suspense and drama of this chapter! The love you portray between all of your characters is just wonderful...Will and Liam could teach the world how to actually "love, unconditionally"!!! Thanks for sharing...

Once again...an amazing story, done with a different vibe, but beautiful none the less!!! So happy that all of your characters have come full circle with very nice results..except for the diabolical Michael, who got exactly what he deserved!! Thank you, Wolf for this one and sooo looking forward to the next one!!

AWESOME!!! Definitely team Raymond/Lawman here!! Thank goodness Daniel is finally accepting his place as a member of "The Adams Family"...snap, snap...

Sooo glad you're back with this story!!!!! Very niceeeeeee character interactions, especially Jacob...and loving the vampire-wolf romance!! Great job!

Hmmmm...I personally thought that the "fugly" incident gave a beautiful sense of fun and levity to lighten their mood after the "fugly mom" scene!! I love their sense of humor and how they're able to enjoy interacting with their whole family crew...body guards, friends, housekeepers, etc..NEVER A DULL MOMENT with these folk!!! More, more, more, please!!

Yessssssssssss!!! Thank you for not leaving us hanging on the side of that cliff!!!! Whewwwww...and I knew it wasn't a woman!!! Happy that Ray is real family...but the verbal beat-down that he gave that excuse of a mother was...CLASSIC!!! Very well done! Although I really think that deputy should have been on his knees retrieving all the stuff he tossed in the dirt...with his face!! Great chapter, Jim...love the "no-waiting" time..

Very impressive cliffhanger!!! Found myself looking like one of those old cartoon characters burning the soles of my shoes, trying to put the brakes on to keep from falling off said "cliff" in search of the indentity of the mysterious "relative" of Jeff!!! I'm not sure it's a woman though, because a woman would have rearranged those hateful lips, the minute she would have tried to spit on her brother!!! ...just saying!! Awesome chapter including the beautiful description of the long awaited heat between Ray and Daniel... Ok, going to await the next nail-biting chapter

Fan-frickin-tastic!!! This story is addictive, and it would be great if you'd cover all the holidays !! Just a thought...but this IS one of those "can't wait for the next chapter" stories...hoping to see the mayor and chief's trials and how wonderful they've "adapted" to their cellmates... Also, sooo liking the development of Raymond and Daniels' storyline!!!

Loved the ending....loved the characters...loved the plots, the action and adventure...just love your stories, especially this one!! Thanks for sharing, eagerly looking forward to more!!

I thought that your stories, the ones I'd read so far, were beautiful and so well written....and then I came to the stunning, brilliantly written stories of Kim Jaehan and Suk Dan...WOW...I'm blown away and so grateful that you've chosen to share your talent with us!!! Thank you, Sui...very much!!

Fabulous story...beginning to end!! Thank you for sharing and looking forward to whatever is next from you!!!! BTW...loved the epilogue, it covered all the bases..

So very happy...(more like over the moon), to be treated to Chris's storyline and the origin of Michael's crazy!!! Bravo on this excellent, intro chapter!

A very difficult chapter for you, I'm sure...yet you still find a way to share your beautiful stories with us! Just know that we are grateful and appreciative of your dedication to your readers and this lovely community of GayAuthors.org Hugs n love for you from all of us...ALWAYS!!

Very nice chapter...a few typo errors, but even in your grief, you are able to produce and show your loyal readers some love! For that...we thank you...from the heart!

Awww..fabulous chapter, of course...but I too, would have loved to have seen the "good" sheriff suffer a "tiny" bit...like being neutered by his rape victim and being thrown in with a few 'Bubbas' to receive the same 'lovemaking' he so generously handed out!!! But...I also love your quick and efficient manner of disposing of garbage.. I know you don't like leaving us teetering on the cliff's edge, however...making us wait on dealing with his partner in crime, "the ever lovable Mayor", is a bit like nudging us over to look over the cliff's edge, don't cha think?? ...Anywhoooo...LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!

Loving this story, the characters are so lively and fun...they actually draw us in, as if not wanting us to be left out of any scene!!! I wouldn't call you the President of cliffhangers...more like the CEO...

Just as we've felt and shared the love and joy you shared with your Daniel, through your beautiful descriptive stories, we now share the pain of your loss through your lovely, amazing tribute to him...may he rest and await his forever love...you, Richard, and know that this community loves and respects you!!

Once again, you've hooked us from the very beginning, and....we're LOVING it!!! Excellent job, so far!!!

I agree with Ash, about the 'proof-reading' aspect, but make no mistake, it in no way lessens the interest in what is proving to be an excellent storyline!!! Your description of the characters could be a tiny bit more detailed, giving us a bit more incite into their actions and reactions...nevertheless, I'm loving the story so far!! I'm sure you will make us love these characters, you have the potential, the ability, and the imagination!!!!

Excellent!! Love the storyline, and can't wait to see how Richard and Nicolas will fare, after all the mayhem, death and destruction! Hoping to see more loving moments for some of the characters...a little, at least...

What a beautiful story...you've done a magnificent job of discussing this subject in a time where it is desperately needed!!! You've left us with a feeling that we all have a voice, and if we all raise them together...we can some day defeat all of the bigotry, racism, hatred and violence that permeates our world today!!! Thank you so much for this wonderful story of encouragement and the hope that we can be better to each other!!

While I respect your opinion and agree with certain aspects...I must agree with CJ, police departments and law enforcement are not innocents and certainly, every recording should be scrutinized, analyzed to come up with an excuse for why murders continue be done by the "thin blue line"...it's just another opinion of how respect should be shown to those who have no respect for innocent lives...be they the thin blue line lives or the frustrated black lives...both are on the line every single day we walk out the door!! Respect is not earned because you CHOOSE to take a dangerous job...it's earned when you do that job with integrity, honesty and respect for the job!! Racism is alive and well in this country...sweeping it under the rug with platitudes and hiding our heads in the sand and pretending that a problem is "really not a problem at all" does nothing but create more divisions and hatred! Hopefully we can at least agree to disagree...without bullets flying for no good reason...except to take another human life!! Just another 'opinion' here...

Geeezzzzz Wolf... trying to come to grips with not looking forward to your Monday updates of love, suspense, and adventure...what shall we do??? The story was absolutely amazing, with your depictions of all the guys have gone through...was like a wonderful "breathe of imagination" for us...we were constantly trying to imagine what new revelations the next chapter would entail and kept enthralled with every character, from Ethan and Aiden to even the little pups!!! Thank you, Wolf ...the journey has been fabulous.. Thank you for sharing your amazing writing skills and imagination!!!!!!

Fabulous chapter...as your usual!!! Have a great cruise, stay safe...we'll miss you!!

Great chapter...now we not only have Denise and the Mom that never quits, to worry about, but you've now thrown the unforgiving, axe to grind Thomas into the mix!! And I'll stake all of my last $2 on the Senator being behind Shane's "accident"!!! In any case, happy that Shane's going to stay with Jason...so they can continue to work on their "reunion", he just needs to establish some "stay the hell away" boundaries with deluded Denise and demanding Mom!! Awesome job, Mitchell!!!