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  1. Onim

    Sad News

    Me too, Joh...me too.
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    Sad News

    So very sorry to hear that Joh...hoping and praying that he gets better soon!! Air hugs and many prayers for him and family! 😢 Take care and be safe, Joh💓
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    Chapter 11

    Rossn, couldn't have expressed the majority opinion better!! Just think if we all had to write the ending to all the stories we choose to read...why read them?? Why take a chance on reading such a well written story, only to be left teetering on the brink of 'hair-pulling' frustration! People usually like getting to the end of a story, for a conclusion, a resolution...NOT a cliff-hanging mystery...just my opinion...and we all know what opinions are like, "____, and we all have one"🤭 If I could write like you, I'd gladly finish the ending...unfortunately, not my forte.😏
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    Chapter 17

    That was by far the best "put you in your place, with dignity and grace" convo I've ever read!! Jimmy 10...Mom 0!! Beautifully written💯
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    Chapter 1 The Wake

    Love the start!!! I’m really liking Boone, already, Coy...meh, he seems to be swimming in the deep end of the self delusional pool of grief and confusion, he’s got some self discovery looming in his future!! Poor Boone...😢, he loves him anyway. Looking forward to this ‘Horse of a different color’ western, Gary! 😍With you, it’ll supersede awesome as usual!!!💯
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    Quiet Acceptance

    BOTH
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    Chapter 30

    :Hmmm...we've met the character before...well, that would be Dr. Martin, and his nephew(CC's son), who were secretly running a child pornography ring together???? Heyyyy...crazy minds think alike...🤭
  8. I'm still hoping that two people that never got the opportunity to form a relationship that was thwarted even from high school (because even then Lee was a 'C-blocker', per se) will grow and get the chance to 'mature' with each other!! I for one can tell you that maturity and age are not always on the same page, not even the same book in some instances(hint the current occupancy of a certain 'house'), but I can also assure you that (being of old age and a 'kinda' sound mind) that none of us can say that we've not made mistakes or choices that were always in line with our age! Penn and Nash will fix this and move on and mature together instead of both spiraling into depression without each to help the other! Mistakes made...lessons learned...happiness acquired...hopefully love sustained! This story is awesome and I applaud you for your writing skills, look at the range of emotions you've evoked from us!🤭 And btw...Cam's story was NOT Penn's to tell, especially considering the fact that she was considering abortion, which is ALWAYS a difficult (at best) thought to contemplate!!! EAGERLY looking forward to the next chapters...💯
  9. Loved, loved, loved every tiny little thing in this chapter!!! Every little nuance of affection(LOVE), every little subtle, hint of seduction, every little occurrence of 'slight' jealousy...EVERYTHING was done superbly!!! 🔥 Nash deserves Penn...and Lee can have a 'meeting in the ladies room' with the jolly 'green' giant of jealousy! ...just a wish 🤭
  10. It'a all been said..."beautiful transition..", "expecting no less from you", etc....suffice it to say Gary, you could rewrite the 'frikin constitution' and we'd ALL read that thing from cover to cover...TWICE...and beg for "more please"!!! Another gorgeous 'shorty' from you...and we appreciate and thank you!!!! Stay safe, my friend and continue to give us brief respites from "S__t Show" surrounding us now!! (air hugs)😄
  11. My take...Alex had ulterior motives...from the start!! MONEY and ESCAPE from oppressive parents...Matty and his money were her 'out' ticket!! Beware of the friendship snake wrapped in tequila and weed!! Just sayin'...if you can rape a 'best friend'...what else are you capable of?? Great story...awesome chapter!
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    Part 3 Chapter 2

    So happy you and yours are safe and hoping you remain that way and he's feeling better! Thank you for the wonderful update...air hugs from all of us!! 🤗
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    Harmony

    Beautiful!! If only the 'string' were as strong today as the one Kyle has, we'd all be in a better, stronger society, country, universe... Stay safe and continue to work your magic!
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    Endings

    Another well written,💯 emotional piece...thanks Gary!!
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  15. Awww Gary... this was brilliantly written and beautifully constructed!! I'd say this was the perfect beginning to a perfect ending...LOVE scores a knockout over chaotic, petty, misunderstandings...welcome home Chase!!🥰 Should have gotten a hint from Rex when he entered the door...he got his welcome home kisses over, first!!🤭Great job, Gary, please stay safe...air hugs n kisses!!
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    A Silent Song

    Yesssssss...pandemic relief is here!!! Heading over to the camp, right now...😷 Stay safe everyone!!!
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    The Answer

    Let's just say...it's definitely "Wayne's World"!! Amazing short story that hit all the right spots and showcased his excellent talents...and also the bonus of sharing a beautiful poem!!! Both were brilliantly done, thanks to you both!💯
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    Chapter 54

    Definitely on the right track...and what a great right track, that we'll gladly follow you on!! This was intriguing and hot! 🔥
  19. Fabulous!!! Stuck in the house...loving these two!!! Be safe, and thank you for the chapters!
  20. First time??...you're doing excellent!!! The chemistry between these two and the experience of Theo is what made the sexual adventure so nice...now we'll have to delve into personalities and outside influences...no doubt, you'll handle just as fabulous!! Thanks for the story and please be safe!!!
  21. Thank you, Laura...for your wonderful stories and for a bit of relief for a few minutes, during such stressful times! Hope you and yours remain safe, as we navigate this crisis...and always!!! Much love to everyone...stay diligent and safe...we'll get through this, and be STRONGER!! 😷
  22. 🥂🥳 CONGRATS...MUCH DESERVED!!!!
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    Camp Refuge

    This was very nicely done...Molly said it all!!! Sorry I could only give it a 5...the other stars didn't come up 😪, but know that I'd have given it a 10!!
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    Retribution 2

    🥳👏
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    Chapter 3

    More...absolutely!!
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