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:Hmmm...we've met the character before...well, that would be Dr. Martin, and his nephew(CC's son), who were secretly running a child pornography ring together???? Heyyyy...crazy minds think alike...🤭
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Chapter 14 - Starting Over
Onim commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 14 - Starting Over
I'm still hoping that two people that never got the opportunity to form a relationship that was thwarted even from high school (because even then Lee was a 'C-blocker', per se) will grow and get the chance to 'mature' with each other!! I for one can tell you that maturity and age are not always on the same page, not even the same book in some instances(hint the current occupancy of a certain 'house'), but I can also assure you that (being of old age and a 'kinda' sound mind) that none of us can say that we've not made mistakes or choices that were always in line with our age! Penn and Nash will fix this and move on and mature together instead of both spiraling into depression without each to help the other! Mistakes made...lessons learned...happiness acquired...hopefully love sustained! This story is awesome and I applaud you for your writing skills, look at the range of emotions you've evoked from us!🤭 And btw...Cam's story was NOT Penn's to tell, especially considering the fact that she was considering abortion, which is ALWAYS a difficult (at best) thought to contemplate!!! EAGERLY looking forward to the next chapters...💯- 101 comments
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Loved, loved, loved every tiny little thing in this chapter!!! Every little nuance of affection(LOVE), every little subtle, hint of seduction, every little occurrence of 'slight' jealousy...EVERYTHING was done superbly!!! 🔥 Nash deserves Penn...and Lee can have a 'meeting in the ladies room' with the jolly 'green' giant of jealousy! ...just a wish 🤭
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It'a all been said..."beautiful transition..", "expecting no less from you", etc....suffice it to say Gary, you could rewrite the 'frikin constitution' and we'd ALL read that thing from cover to cover...TWICE...and beg for "more please"!!! Another gorgeous 'shorty' from you...and we appreciate and thank you!!!! Stay safe, my friend and continue to give us brief respites from "S__t Show" surrounding us now!! (air hugs)😄
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My take...Alex had ulterior motives...from the start!! MONEY and ESCAPE from oppressive parents...Matty and his money were her 'out' ticket!! Beware of the friendship snake wrapped in tequila and weed!! Just sayin'...if you can rape a 'best friend'...what else are you capable of?? Great story...awesome chapter!
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So happy you and yours are safe and hoping you remain that way and he's feeling better! Thank you for the wonderful update...air hugs from all of us!! 🤗
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Beautiful!! If only the 'string' were as strong today as the one Kyle has, we'd all be in a better, stronger society, country, universe... Stay safe and continue to work your magic!
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Awww Gary... this was brilliantly written and beautifully constructed!! I'd say this was the perfect beginning to a perfect ending...LOVE scores a knockout over chaotic, petty, misunderstandings...welcome home Chase!!🥰 Should have gotten a hint from Rex when he entered the door...he got his welcome home kisses over, first!!🤭Great job, Gary, please stay safe...air hugs n kisses!!
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Yesssssss...pandemic relief is here!!! Heading over to the camp, right now...😷 Stay safe everyone!!!
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Let's just say...it's definitely "Wayne's World"!! Amazing short story that hit all the right spots and showcased his excellent talents...and also the bonus of sharing a beautiful poem!!! Both were brilliantly done, thanks to you both!💯
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Definitely on the right track...and what a great right track, that we'll gladly follow you on!! This was intriguing and hot! 🔥
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Chapter 4 An early morning surprise
Onim commented on ShadowDweller's story chapter in Chapter 4 An early morning surprise
Fabulous!!! Stuck in the house...loving these two!!! Be safe, and thank you for the chapters! -
Chapter 2 Time moves on and Adrien gets braver
Onim commented on ShadowDweller's story chapter in Chapter 2 Time moves on and Adrien gets braver
First time??...you're doing excellent!!! The chemistry between these two and the experience of Theo is what made the sexual adventure so nice...now we'll have to delve into personalities and outside influences...no doubt, you'll handle just as fabulous!! Thanks for the story and please be safe!!! -
Assault With A Kitchen Weapon
Onim commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Assault With A Kitchen Weapon
Thank you, Laura...for your wonderful stories and for a bit of relief for a few minutes, during such stressful times! Hope you and yours remain safe, as we navigate this crisis...and always!!! Much love to everyone...stay diligent and safe...we'll get through this, and be STRONGER!! 😷 -
🥂🥳 CONGRATS...MUCH DESERVED!!!!
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This was very nicely done...Molly said it all!!! Sorry I could only give it a 5...the other stars didn't come up 😪, but know that I'd have given it a 10!!
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I'm soooooo late...🤭 First off...HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! Now, thank you for this one, Gary...I for one am in complete sympathy with Chase...it's hard to gauge how others deal with grief and one should never let the words "time to move on" or "get over it" be uttered in a grieving person's presence, it simple is NOT our call!! And most certainly, we will make horrible decisions when we are grieving and trying to figure out which way is up! So I would ask Hank to please hang in there with all the patience of a saint...if he can, knowing what a difficult road that could be. Anyyyyway...I'm loving this one and can't wait to see the wonderful 'fusion, or the great 'explosion' to come with these two...either way, I KNOW you will NOT disappoint!! Hugs for you...
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Niceeeeeeeee chapter!! HAPPY NEW YEAR, everyone!! 💞
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Very beautiful...thank you for the Christmas gift! 🥰
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Gary, what can I say that has not been said...you continue to amaze and astound us with the beauty and love depicted in your characters! Often times challenging us to never give in to feelings of hatred and futility that we may entertain at times...thank you for reminding us that we can be better to each other!! Hugs, kisses...and always love for ya, my friend!
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I think Jett will be getting the "IF YOU HURT MY SON..." friendly convo, with a feel free to fill in the blanks, talk!!! Great chapter...and I'm with team '3 chapters a day' would be just fabulous..
