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I'm going to say this often I know it, but, I. Love. Harley. His enthusiasm is just so catching. You manage to capture that in a way it just flies off the page. Good stuff. I am in total agreement with CJ. There's no way you should have to tell your orientation at a GSA meeting. I am also proud of the way he handled himself for maybe coming off a little harsh with Autumn. What's up with Kenton tho? There's always one. It felt like we went along with the guys on their ride to the park, which was great. This was a really fun, feel good chapter....Thank you!
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Week One Friday, September 5, 2014: Sexual Assault?
Defiance19 commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Week One Friday, September 5, 2014: Sexual Assault?
Aww, Twoey tried to get a feel. I kinda feel for him though, obsessing over David. There may be a diversion for him on the horizon, so yay. David continues to be confused by his feelings for Twoey and now he wants to add Lanni to the mix? Oh boy... Lol. It will be interesting to see what his feelings are if Twoey asks Derrich out. Teenaged angst is no joke, to them at least, and you show it well here.. -
Chapter 5 Cyber Friends
Defiance19 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 5 Cyber Friends
Beautifully said, Gary, and perfectly true! -
Chapter 37 A Pair of Kings
Defiance19 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 37 A Pair of Kings
Aww shucks.... The guys really did need that. They value each other, they allow themselves to be vulnerable with each other, and when they express their love emotionally and physically, it's like a breath of fresh air. It's impossible not to feel their connection. A really lovely chapter Gary! Thank you... (ps: I have to come back with the like) :-) -
48 hrs. That's a long time to just wait. Your brain goes into overdrive, thinking of all the possible worst case scenarios. Bryan is already doing that and I feel his panic, poor guy. Now he's got Sarah to lean on at least. Hopefully the kids who remember seeing Wyatt at the park will still be there to serve up Darrin, and so the hunt will begin.
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Story Review Featured Story: Metaorigins
Defiance19 commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
This series is everything Puppilull describes. Definitely the most engaging Werewolf series I've read. It's thrilling and captivating, it will keep you guessing and on your toes. You absolutely will not be disappointed, so yes, join us in the Metaverse and give it a read! -
Week One Thursday, September 4, 2014: The Proposition
Defiance19 commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Week One Thursday, September 4, 2014: The Proposition
Sam likes Kathy...I think, and Danny. Touches. David. A lot! Twoey's POV is awesome. I love this story. (will come back with the likes) I just read all 4 chapters. It's wonderfully fun and very well written. Waiting for these to to be on the same page, or not is going to be an interesting time. I look forward to more. Well done SkinnyD -
I just knew Carol accepted Wyatt too quickly.. And lying to Bryan, oh he is going to have some eye opener. Of course it's going to get worse before it gets better. This ends badly for everyone, hopefully not for Wyatt and Bryan. Maybe Bryan's friend Sarah, will help him piece it together, or in a very twisted turn Darrin is forced to prove his innocence and ends up helping solve the mystery.... Can't wait for the next chapter....
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I like Neil's attitude toward his mother. Seems to me if she is going to come around, it's no use tiptoeing around the fact that her son is gay. No matter how many times you don't say it, Neil is still going to be gay. So, having Jim's parents stay with Mary and Phil. Could be really eye opening for Mary, or it could be an awkward weekend... Love the build up to the finals. Leopards have the best fans. A win would be the best way to repay them for their loyalty....I think ;-) Great chapter as always...
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Happy Happy Birthday Caz! Have a fabulous day!!!
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Like the other reviewers, the great detail and intensity, kept me on the edge of my seat. I was so anxious for Mike to make it to Nick on time, that I had to read it again to make sure I didn't misread the ending. I was so relieved though. Reall good story...Well done.
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Chapter 2 - Just Like High School
Defiance19 commented on Cynus's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Just Like High School
It seems that I have strong opinions formed about those four boys already. I think I'll wait until the story unfolds further, to be fair to them. I truly want to understand their POV without dismissing their beliefs out of hand. Jason so far has made himself stand out, but I'm tempted to believe he has a lot to be anxious about. It's going to be interesting for sure, as we see them struggle to reconcile their faith with who they truly are. Looking forward to more! -
Chip. Chip. Chip.....That's all. SMDH Adriano's final words....so moving! Glad you didn't draw out the funeral. It makes sense that CJ and Bradley hit it off. Bradley will have some one to relate and ask any questions he might have about being with two dads. When the younger set are all in town together, these guys will get a run for their money I'm betting. The cops got what was coming. They probably won't be able to work in Law Enforcement, but oh well, lesson learnt. Harley is going to be a fun friend! It's going to be good to see CJ involved in the school environment and clubs.. It does feel like we are turning the page on Summer, and Autumn is just beginning. Everyone is more relaxed and life is settling into their normal again.. Good chapter, Carlos.
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Nice, Josh is a gentleman..rare, especially when the girls are this forward. Nathan was taken aback that Josh went out with Kate, maybe ok that Josh stopped her, but he was really upset about the cliffs. Is he feeling like it's "our place" kinda deal. Oh I so want to know more!
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When I little, my dad used to say: Work while you work; Play while you play One thing each time; That is the way All that you do; Do with you might Things done in halves; Are never done right. Then my mum would chime in with the old: 'In other words, anything worth doing is worth doing well.' I never forgot it though, and it's morphed into a good work ethic for me...
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Chapter 36 Claiming the Pot
Defiance19 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 36 Claiming the Pot
Kendall is brilliant, that is a fact I agree with Michael on. Doing the right thing has its rewards. Even Kendall managed to show Candy he was above her pettiness.He cleaned her house for goodness sake. I don't know how you've managed to make us see something in Candy worth redeeming. Sure, she has to recognise it herself, and one good deed will not erase all the bad, but it just might be there. Great chapter as usual, Gary... -
Oh dear, I guess mom meant it when she said she'd do anything to protect her son. But really? Poor Wyatt can't catch a break between this and Darrin. Bryan will probably think it's Darrin....good stuff!
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The past couple chapters have been a lot of build up and excitement for the semi finals and finals. This chapter was great in its delivery of the semi's. You've managed to make me feel almost like I do when watching live matches, (for me though it's Premier League) jittery like Liam. Lol I loved using Neil to showcase Ty I loved Deon and Clarissa sorting themselves out. I want to do a happy dance for Jim, but don't want to be premature.. Let's just go to finals! Thanks Graeme..
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Oh no, no more Tooper Tales.. I guess even he could be tamed, so that's good. Hopefully, one of theses days he'll come up for air and let us know how it's going! This was good fun!
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Chapter 1 - Make Us Proud
Defiance19 commented on Cynus's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Make Us Proud
Love this first chapter Cynus.. Interesting characters, and having only the barest knowledge of the Mormon culture and their Missionary work, I look forward to seeing how this piece unfolds. -
CJ is so excited for kids his own age, he's bubbling. It's so cool that Chip's kids want to spend time with Doc. Chip's gonna realise how big a fool he really was even more.. And, did I read right? Sean could make an appearance soon? Yay! I love that Tommy's ex gave the kids the choice and Bradley stepped up. It means so much more knowing they want to get to know their dad. With all that's been going on, I'm glad they have those trips to look forward to. I'm betting there's still all kinds of 'trouble' to be had Down Under! Enjoyed the easy, good feel of this chapter!
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Poetry prompt 12 - Rondo
Defiance19 commented on Puppilull's story chapter in Poetry prompt 12 - Rondo
Puppilull, I don't think you need to worry about the free fall at all. This is really meaningful, and wonderfully expressed. Good job! I agree with Gary, the formatting would only make it easier to read... And, maybe you're a poet yet! -
HAPPY BIRTHDAY BUCKET!! my best wishes for many, many more... Hope you have a fantastic day.
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Ok so Nathan lacks the appropriate social skills, which is not surprising. He also seems aware of Josh's discomfort at being seen with him, why he suggested the shortcut. Makes it sadder that he doesn't realise it was a dangerous prank, to pull on a maybe friend, just to get a laugh or a few YouTube views. At the same time, it's his weird way at a grab for the gold ring, because he does talk about a successful future. maybe the file will hint at what made him turn the corner.
