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I am in awe of your ability to tell a story!
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Any chronic condition can be quite invasive in a relationship and Tony may have encountered negative reactions or complete disinterest in the past , that said , I agree if it is controlled it is not a problem. Both handled the incident well. I’m feeling hopeful , Geoff’s mom may still surprise him.
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Hell seems more and more like any civic institution , mired in increasing levels of boredom and frustration , lets hope the institution is bordering on collapse , cos it’s not a place I’d want to visit any time soon. Hottie 3/4 of an hour behind or transfer note , what a dilemma !
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Oh those poor gluttons , there’s nothing quite like pigging out on steamed fish and broccoli or sneaking a midnight salad. Loved the references to the wall and limiting visits between G2 and undesirable departments in hell.
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All preconceptions and stereotypes are pushed just left of centre. A gentle reminder that love flows through all types of relationships and that the expressions of love take on a life and personality all of their own.
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Cruising for my Valentine
deville commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in Cruising for my Valentine
Way past Valentine’s Day , I know ! Your story brought it all back. We spent the wet evening driving around Paris in a vintage Peugeot before dining at our favorite restaurant. Thank you. -
Gosh ! If that wasn’t an entertaining reminder that as we age , what doesn’t sag , hurts.
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Excellent, I loved the balance between whimsical fantasy and hardline reality and restraint .
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A masterful and powerful vignette!
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Fantastic tale , short , nailbitingly intense , unpredictable . Relevant and real . Gold medal worthy!
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Mmmm, it’s getting quite Arthurian , with what seems to be a live triangle between King , Queen and Warrior. In the light of Ra’s telling of it , suddenly everyone around Casey becomes suspicious .
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A Fantastic Story ! Ended perfectly in time and space and just where it needed to. Go on ...... tell Michaels tale ..., after reading Seth’s diary , he deserves it.
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‘ if you love someone let them go.... ‘ and all the rest . Max seems quite capable of playing a long game , maybe having a father like his , who would send him to the arena to prove a point if he had to , has taugh Max both patience and understanding . Be that as it may , he certainly extracted the promise he sought , and a magician can do a lot with words like that. Grim remains and has become even more interesting as he is almost a century old , why would he remain a prisoner in the arena , when he clearly is capable of surviving/ living for such a long period of time . I have a feeling Prism and his return to the world may result in a world of regret for both kings .
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Well if Adam didn’t take the winds of righteous indignation straight out of Andy’s sails ! The feeling that you behaved like an .... badly ... is never comfortable. Adam seems to be well acquainted with the feel better remedy though . An enjoyable chapter.
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Roberts epiphany and the subsequent conversation are beautifully written . Believable and positive , Robert appears to embrace his newfound sexuality/ orientation with little angst or doubt .
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A beautiful chapter , Robert had a solid support base , what every child needs. Robert and Bart are fortunate in this regard.
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Yes that’s how it was , except I am 5’6” and weigh just under 50 kg’s now, I was smaller then . None of the Philosophical niceties of martial arts for me though, it was a case of , best them as publicly as possible and carry on as though nothing had happened to ensure I was left in peace . It worked . Sounds like you were a good teacher !
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No, I was a complete outsider at school and cultivated a stay away attitude . Even my sports were solitary , MMA , Show Jumping and Figure Skating. It was the 70’s and 80’s and there was never a doubt that I was Queer. I made sure everyone was unsure how I would react and that they were uncomfortable around me. Even the teachers were wary around me.
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Carter may have been where TJ is now and been left scarred and leery, his concern is definitely not simply altruistic , and he doednt feel completely trustworthy at the moment . I hope his history is not with Randy ! Time will tell , I’m sure. Randy and his parents seem very genuine .
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Lovely little story .
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The attitude of the Pricipal is archaic , what year is he living and functioning in? This sort of behavior was prevalent in the 70’s and 80’s, but is simply criminal in a educator today. Murray and Robert are both quite courageous , albeit in different ways . Great chapter.
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An interesting chapter . The school seems to be a bizarre amalgam of highs and lows for Robert. An unorthodox relationship is developing between Robert and Bart Vaselly , where the teacher seems to know where it is heading and the student is clueless .
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Your words , are probably one of the primary rays of light and recognition that will draw and anchor your friend in the light for a time.
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The old order is changing with the release and control of the demon, the capture of Styx , the connection between Maxthane and Styx and the death of Kutos. A new unknown / unpredictable order will take its place, and I’m unsure that Shalidar and the Shade are quite ready for it. I don’t trust Fasha!
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Changes are happening hard and fast in Kohens life and any change had a degree of discomfort and disconnect . On the surface he seems to be coping , his subconscious dreaming , seems to hint otherwise.
