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A bleak reminder that in this world of instant communication it becomes so easy to fob someone off , with a foreshortened chat or a quick text . We never know the consequences that will follow . Powerful story with a complimentary darkness to the light in, “ Can’t a guy visit a friend”.
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Prompt #640 – Creative – Alien
deville commented on Brayon's story chapter in Prompt #640 – Creative – Alien
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The past moulds us, the present defines us and the future whispers of what we will move to become. Of course we’re tangled , none can stand alone , a little like Siamese Triplets , bound , dependent but distinct. I loved the thoughts this piece provoked.
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“ To give away yourself, keeps yourself still” - Shakespeare , Sonnet XVI.
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The effort you take to make each piece perfect in itself, is much appreciated , as is your sharing of them with us. Being left bleak and hollow are my own , I own them , but introspection is always good.
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I really like the form , weighty , measured and definite. Perfect for the continuity of imagery flowing through all three of the works . They have however left me feeling a little bleak and hollow , and a lot introspective.
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What an original way of settling into a new city/ friendship , literally just fall into it. Fantastic story, I’m pleased you’ve beaten the block.
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“ Herbivore- an animal that only eats plants. “ ( Cambridge English Dictionary) At first I had a great deal of difficulty with reconciling the title and the content. Are we so bound by our nature and physical / mental composition , that despite what we want to believe there is no possible hope of change? Is choice rendered superfluous, by our inability to “ eat” anything but plants/ change our composition? “ Perhaps not,” we are omnivores and as hard as it is to have belief , it is possible to hang on to the choices that opens up. A thought provoking piece. Thank you.
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Prompt 367 - Emotion Challenge
deville commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in Prompt 367 - Emotion Challenge
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I like Nicky’s idea , a parade with a caravan . Bloody marvelous ! Not Joey’s style though.
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For dughlas and Thief of Words
deville commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in For dughlas and Thief of Words
Two powerful and emotive poems. The first like sunshine warm and bright , a timeless tribute to a friend . The second , like a storm dark , damning and potent. -
Inspiring , celebratory words . Especially following hard on the heels of the Blue Moon celebrations.
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Introspective words , a thought provoking work. It’s 00h56 here and since reading your words , I’ve sat ( with my drugged dogs) and watched the neighbours pour small fortunes of fiery aspirations into the heavens and wondered , will they last the night ? Will they make shit happen ? Happy New Year , wishing you happiness , health and prosperity .
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A beautiful sentiment, we can’t erase what is written in the book of life , we can turn the page, and sketch out a whole new story filled with possibilities. Wishing you Health , Wealth and Happiness for 2018.
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Happy New Year .
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We Feign Nothing - A look at the BDSM lifestyle.
deville commented on MichaelS36's blog entry in Michael's Playroom
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I empathize with Tina, but at least a lengthy deception has ended and both parties can now pursue happiness.... maybe ? The feeling is there , that Tina wasn’t completely clueless, her comment on waiting patiently for him, seems to speak volumes.
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Fantastic..... hot elves seem to be the plat de jour, where do I go to get a serving? Save for G.A. that is? Merry Christmas.
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Goodness , don’t I just want an elf for Christmas .... be an elf for Christmas .... for an elf to squeeze my bobble and then to clean up the dust . Such fun , an unusually different tale. Merry Christmas!
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Crackers are a must at Christmas , especially personalized ones , they bring such pleasure. I loved that you brought your originality in, mixing cultures , naughty and nice and that the boys unwrapping began with a snap and a ... bang. Merry Christmas.
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Wonderful ......dark , mysterious and hinting at the older mystery traditions surrounding this time of the year, not all of them warm and fluffy .
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Lovely story, though I couldn’t imagine future Christmasses tied in with anniversaries , would completely topple my control freak equanimity .
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What a fantastic feel good Christmas story. Felt real to with the random acts of kindness by strangers getting into the spirit of the season and adventure. Merry Christmas .
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I’ve always loved the concepts of absolution, exoneration and clemency. So powerful , and in this story ... just fantastic!
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A great deal of strength in this chapter , in Gene , Star , Joey and especially Nicky. Pleased to see Gene has realized the bridge to yesterday is just a pale illusion of what the bridge to tomorrow promises.
