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Just waiting for the other shoe to drop. It all seems too slick. Bryce always seems to methodical and careful. This whole wedding doesn't seem like him.
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Didn't see this coming. It is a bit odd that Miranda and her family waited four years to let Bryce know about his son. It seems very manipulative. I am curious to see how this affects Bryce. And what about Daniel?
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I enjoyed reading about Olek's vacation. Wish I could join them. A sunny island sounds great! Eric being in charge of making the uranium extraction safe is in keeping with his plan to make things green. Olek was smart to realize it!
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You covered quite a bit of ground in this chapter! It went from post birthday party reactions to first year at university Christmas reunion. I feel you did a great job covering a bigger span of time than usual. You gave enough details to let us know what the guys were doing and feeling without getting bogged down in a lot of details. Very well done! And I loved the train station reunion! Thanks. Wishing you a big jackpot in Vegas!
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This first chapter of "part 2" was intriguing. I may need to go back and skim read a bit to help myself remember. I liked Jake's journal entries, so I intend to stick with this story. Thanks.
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1/2Elf - Chapter 3: House Anfalas
JeffreyL commented on Brayon's story chapter in 1/2Elf - Chapter 3: House Anfalas
I have been meaning to start reading this story and finally got to it. I have enjoyed everything I've read so far! I can't wait to see what is next for Devin. -
I need to go back and re-read the beginning, but Oscar seems all about sex for power and control, not so much pleasure and certainly not romance. Hmmm. It kind of makes me feel sad for him. He is a most interesting character. You certainly know how to write a sex scene. Every one has been hot and steamy! I am a little behind and reading to catch up. Thanks for this story.
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Pause, then onto "Discovery"
JeffreyL commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Pause, then onto "Discovery"
How sad. And how confusing. I will be doing some rereading to sort out my thoughts. I have enjoyed this story, and am curious where it goes from here. -
Chapter 5 Ace in the Hole
JeffreyL commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 5 Ace in the Hole
Don't know how I missed this story, but I just binged chapters one through five. I really liked the set up. I know I will enjoy getting caught up! I hope it doesn't take all sixty some chapters for Michael and Kendall to get back together, assuming they do. Anyway, your writing is always first rate, so I know I'll enjoy reading this. Thanks. -
Finally things are sorted, and these three can move forward together. Have I said lately how much I am enjoying this story? Your characters are so well written! With a good combination of strengths and weaknesses they read as very human and real. Thank you.
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Bryce has a lot on his plate. He continues to expand the business, it seems to me, without much thought to the time and effort it takes. He may not realize it, but he does need some time for himself. I'm not certain I understand his extreme dislike for publicity. I agree with others that this latest move is a "run away from problems." That being said, I do like Bryce, and I look forward to whatever is next! Thanks.
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More positive steps for Allen and Joey, but poor Gene is a mess. Can't guess what's next, so I'll just wait patiently. Thanks.
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I know when trust is broken it is hard to rebuild. Cody is having a tough time convincing Trick that he has changed. Doesn't anyone remember that Cody stopped being one of the bullies before Trick changed schools? Trick keeps feeling that Cody is sincere. Maybe it's time for Brad and Zoe to give Cody the third degree and find out how sincere he is. Great characters; good writing. Thank you.
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Calamari Codependency may be a bit more accurate, but Save the Squid is more direct, if a little less clever. I wasn't certain what to expect, but I enjoyed this story. It made me think fondly of a visit to S.A. about 40 years ago. Thanks.
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Looking forward to visiting Makarovia with Eric and Peter. I enjoyed Grandma's visit, and her reunion with Carla. Things are going smoothly, which must mean some drama is lurking in the wings! Thanks for more of this good story!
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I am happy that missing each other outweighed the anger enough for them to talk. I knew they were going to work it out, but the waiting for it to happen still made me nervous. Now to solve the baby and Anna problem and get on with their life together.
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This story just got even better! This "kick-ass" Danni is a real change. I wish he wouldn't be so hard on Duke. Can't wait to see what the alien city reveals. Thanks.
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More characters to grow fond of, I can tell already. I think it's time to make a family tree or some other diagram to keep all the characters in these stories straight. 😄 And of course, a visit from Benny makes lots of folks happy. Thanks for this new story.
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I'm glad Ian is mending and much closer to being in his own home. If this story is close to ending 😞 I figure you have three story lines you could write about in the future: Cam, Ian, and Eli, Vic & Hayden, and Charlie & Jacob! You have created some great characters that I've grown to care about. Thanks.
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I was a bit surprised at Mike's and Blake's behavior at the party, especially Blake's. It's amazing how a few drinks can loosen the tongue and inhibitions and bring out hidden feelings. I was glad that Teddy finally stood up for his guy. I wonder what will happen to the "four musketeers" now? Thanks for more or this good story.
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I am fascinated by this station life. I am a small town guy with farming in my family, but this station life is all new to me. The size of these places is hard for me to imagine! I appreciate all the details you include, although I think I need a diagram to really understand all the shifting of personnel among the homesteads! 😉 I am really enjoying Bryce and his story. Thank you.
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My Baby Just Wrote Me a Letter
JeffreyL commented on ObicanDecko's story chapter in My Baby Just Wrote Me a Letter
It certainly seems Trick is not going to make this easy on anyone including himself. More good story. Thank you. -
I am so glad Joey and Allen are actually talking and listening to each other. This seems like a big step forward for both of them. Thank you for this really good story.
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I am enjoying watching the relationship grow and change! Thank you.
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Jeez Kaiden, over think things much? I am glad the party went well. Everyone seemed to be mostly OK with "the announcement." It was great the way Sarah, Jake, and his family were so supportive. I enjoyed the post-party sex! I am curious to know how people will be when they get back to school. As usual your writing really captured Kaiden's anxiety. I also like your dialogue. To me it really feels natural and not at all forced. Thanks.
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