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  1. Brayon
    Salt and Goat Butter... it's gross. Tried it. Granted but it does so for the next week. I wish I didn't have insomnia.
  2. Brayon
    In the section of my story of Aeris, Act 2 - Prelude to War - Part 3, I tried to give a minor horror experience. Unfortunately, my main Beta Reader promptly told me, "Stick to SciFi, love stories, and steamy smut, and leave the horror to Stephen King." So, what I sent to @BlindAmbition, who was kind enough to Beta Read, the first section, of the rewritten chapter, was completely changed. Only a minor graphic, that could be seen as more gore than horror, that was just a drop into the rest of the story. So, I'm learning too. I'm glad to be reading the comments, and the story examples shared, so I can improve myself.
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    What's this? Another chapter? Why yes it is another chapter. After Action Report of the Prometheus' first battle. I am seeking feedback on this one more than normal. I liked the chapter. My betas liked the chapter. But it felt wonky to me. Most of it was done, based on my readings of other SciFi ship battles, and countless SciFi movies. Star Wars, Battlestar Galactica for instance.
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    Prometheus After Action Report Filed by: Admiral Jules Franks Date: February 13, 2214 Report: At 18:14 hours, on February 12, 2214, we received word from the Search and Rescue team that Commander Aeris and battlefield promoted Warrant Officer William Jeffers were in contact and were about to come out with an ally. No details were given about who this ally was, at the time, but since then it turns out he was a Thorian Specialist whose name was Zirsi. Commander Aeris then proceeded
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    Thanks for reading! I'm planning on doing some short Interlude Stories, which I'll post in this storyline between this Act and the next. Got some aspects that need a quick story cover, before diving into the War. Two years are gonna pass over, with a bunch of boring stuff, so gonna post a few tidbits. Please let me know, if you have any questions, I'll be happy to address.
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    Topic. For Clueless camping. I only came in at the end.
  8. Brayon
    There be hunks here!
  9. Brayon
    Thanks. Glad you are enjoying it. A little Behind the Scenes: The alien alliance happened in a Role Playing Game, I was participating in, and was a surprise to us as well.
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    WHAT!!!! I didn't know that. Now I got another one to read. Hunks huh.... Nice.
  11. Brayon
    66 pages of forum posts on your TTP story. I'm envious, and a little scared at reading it all.
  12. Brayon
    It's all cool. Just something I noticed. It would be even Funnier, if Rob is short for Robert like Russ is short for Russell.
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    I'm already hungry for more Russ and Evan! Now, I've gonna be hungry for some Rob and Eric! Heya @Timothy M., do you have a thing about naming brothers with R's and E's?
  14. Brayon
    Granted, but only in your own mind, and those of Ward C at the Psych Hospital. I wish this WGN hadn't bought the edited 30 episodes of M*A*S*H and had the hour length ones.
  15. Brayon
    Just uploaded mine, with a delayed publish date, but can't see it. Hoping you all can. It's titled, Radiated Love.
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    I've got a lot of reading ahead then!
  17. Brayon
    I don't know who Rob, and Eric are, nor what happen previously, but I loved the interaction between them. Great story Timothy.
  18. Brayon
    A new chapter is up. Let me know what you think.
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    Chapter 10: The Stellar Naval Academy’s parade field was decorated for graduation. The graduating cadets were standing in formation, listening to the speeches from the visiting dignitaries, the Academy’s CO, and lastly the Valedictorian. Aeris was there for one of them, his Friend, Student, and, in his heart, Son, Lt. Commander J.G. John Chandler. John had just stepped up to the podium and was starting his speech when Aeris started to think back upon the last thirteen years with John and his
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    Granted, but you can not wake, until a Prince (or Princess your choice) kisses you. I wish all Circle K's had Crush Ice in their soda fountains.
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    Granted - But now you've been arrested for slavery, due to your mind control powers. I wish my friend would finish Beta Reading my latest story, so I can post it,
  22. Brayon
    Granted - now you are disappointed that they keep them. I wish Papa John's Large Pan Pizza was really a Large. #SizeMatters
  23. Brayon
    Granted - But you're are now stuck inside doing your endless paperwork. I wish I could convince my Family, I'm not as innocent as they think I am.
  24. Brayon
    I'm in the same boat. My friend is telling me, it was a bit awkward for a short scene.
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    Unwary

    Brayon commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Unwary

    One word: Powerful. Thanks for sharing with us, Tim.
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