Aviana

This was awesome.....very nicely written....to be deprived of childhood before the child could even enjoy it is really hard...!! Wonderfully written

Beautiful I have always believed that friendship could sail through everything....this poem seems to show that!!!

Hi moggy....it's been long I know one thing that words can hurt u harder than any wounds on ur body. But similarly words heal u too....believe in the words of people who care for u....N I tell u...u have value!!

Well...I think whatever I felt like saying is already said...! So again...U r a wonderful person tim so please don't think urself a waste of space. Lovely writing like always...sad but really well written

Such a lovely tribute WolfM...where ever ur frd is he must be feeling really proud of u!! Beautiful...

Gary that was wonderful esp falkor. Pets really become part of our life in no time...N then we just can't part with them!! The last stanza is so relatable!! Another great writing from u!!

Wow moggy. It seems u r in a brighter mood. The first one seemed like u r lying in a grassy land watching the sunlight trickle through trees in ur lovers arm... And second one was very reminicing...beautiful

I really enjoyed reading it. The ending two lines is wat I liked the best. U are such a talented guy AC esp ur sonnets...ur writings r such that I like reading n savouring it slowly!! Once again beautiful!!

A question that I have asked myself sometimes but always came with the answer that perhaps God has something better planned n I 'll believe so for u n ur kid too. It was a very touching poem. It has a question n theme. I love how u went about it without being dramatic. I liked the rhythm that u maintained through out the poem ...N the repeating lines had a emphatic emphasis on the unfairness! Wonderful!!!

Thank you Gary...truly I too sometimes wonder how I came to love a sport which in the beginning I didn't have any enthusiasm for I truly hope u like my journey to liking it!!

MEETING Reluctant steps, unwilling entry, Not a very thrilling activity. Five sweaty players n a bouncing ball, High level stamina, energetic n tall. Ball through the basket is the goal, Players working for it body n soul. Basics are the beginning, Main aim is entering, Nothing seems too interesting As I started with the dribbling!

These are short poems relating to my favourite sport: Basketball, which I couldn't continue because of some health issues!

'I guess it’ll have to do But I’ll not give up on you' Something I love about ur poem is that it almost always have a positive note!! Being me seemed to describe u on ur everyday life, sweet, short n so u Hero reminded me all the fairy tales that I read as a kid n thought them to be true n thought one day a prince charming would sweep me off my feet!! But as I grew, I realized this world is big bad place with lots of judgemental people n no prince in shining armor (in fact there r wolves in human skin). It felt like u too r recalling those childhood days. Only difference is I gave up on the idea long back but u still r hoping! Sometimes I wish I had some of ur spirit n positivity!! Beautiful poetry gary...

It was wonderful parker...I got the image of u n ur beloved sitting in a garden watching sunset, and the breeze blowing where u can smell the sun, the grass n ur man... It was a lovely poem...very beautiful!!

Let me describe ur poem in ur own words 'insatiable' n 'unquenchable' .... U always leave wanting 'more' The line 'equal love and mirrored madness slake the thirst n fill the soul' was the best mirroring the desire deep down which can't be satisfied!! Great poem