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Thank you @raven1 for taking the time to read and comment, it really is appreciated. Not all real-life stories of people who are homeless have a happy ending, the unhappy stories need to be told as well to reflect what happens in the real world in order to raise awareness. I have tried to tell the story as sensitively as possible without taking away the brutal honesty of Mitch's fate. I decided to create a small funeral that grew to much larger proportions to emphasise that the lives of homeless people are as important as the rest of us. I hope that I have succeeded in putting that across. As you rightly say it is a sad fact that events of this nature happen on a daily basis somewhere in the world, it can happen to anyone.
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The Busker Deansgate was predictably busy, the shop and office workers, except for the occasional latecomer, were all in the warmth busy preparing for a day's work. Shoppers were increasing in number with only one thing on their minds as they pushed through the crowds. The weather was cold, dull, damp and miserable. The only thing to brighten the day was the multi-coloured lights and decorations draped high above the roads between the street lights. The young man hoped th
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The New Boot has opened and is operating in a similar fashion to its predecessor. As we would all suspect The New Boot generates new stories, some good and some not so good. This is one of those stories and takes place around The New Boot's first Christmas. This story has been revised and edited to improve the reader's experience, it has not been changed in any other way.
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A slow and calm gentle chapter compared to most in CJ's life. But then there is still the underlying hint of future intrigue when they arrive in Cuba, we know there will be some excitement, but just what will happen and how will it affect international relations. I guess I'll just have to be patient, which will be a first for me lol.
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Thank you @northie for keeping us informed, this is sad news. Although my interactions with ancientrichard were only occasional they were always cheerful and full of warmth and friendship. When I first joined GA he was welcoming, when I started posting stories he was supportive, when I have had my down times he was a friend. I will miss him, as I'm sure many will. GA has lost a valuable member who valued all that GA stands for. We have all lost a humble and valuable friend. May you rest in peace with your loved ones and those friends from GA who have gone before you.
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One of the most beautiful stories I've read, well thought out, well written and well worth reading. I challenge others to read and not reach for the tissues, a recommended read.
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This has got to be one of the most beautiful stories that I've read. Thank you for reminding us all that love is there for everyone regardless of physical or intellectual ability, Downs Syndrome people are often overlooked by society and not deemed capable, this attitude is wrong and very outdated. Many Downs Syndrome people are very capable and are as entitled to love and be loved as we all are. Thank you for a well thought out and well written story.
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A well crafted short story that is complete but leaves you wanting more. @Headstall is a skilled author worth following, read and enjoy I recommend it.
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I loved it, but I'm left wanting more. Only a skilled writer leaves readers satisfied with a story but still wanting more. Thank you.
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I've been enjoying going through the archives from the oldest building up to the newest, I've still got plenty of reading before I get to current stories. The best part of reading the archives is finding some really good older stories like this one and when I do I have leave a comment or two, they deserve it as does this one. I hope you do revisit this story and write a follow up, Blake deserves to have his story told. BTW I'm about to start reading Finding Refuge and looking forward to it.
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There is only one thing to say, this story definitely deserves a follow up, I'm hoping that there is one and I'll be looking.
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I'll bet Fanning's behaviour will be a topic brought up in many conversations over the weekend and for a long time to come, serves him right for behaving like a prat. What are they thinking, 'piracy', do they think they are auditioning for a new Pirates of The Caribbean lol. I'll bet they would be a much sexier looking crew that Johnny Depp'e crew pmsl.
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The story has only just started and already you have CJ 'mixing it up', but then what's a wedding without a bit of excitement lol. I'm already rubbing my hands with glee and loving it.
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As Time Goes By • Part V - Excerpt
Mancunian commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in As Time Goes By • Part V - Excerpt
How did I miss this on New Years Day? I must have been busy, lol. Nice start to this CJ story, now I gotta catch up! -
This has to be my favourite interview to read, @Mrsgnomie and @kbois make a great team and have produced more than a few great stories to read. The comment sections are as enjoyable as the stories and help to draw you into their stories making the experience so much more enjoyable. I think this interview proves the uniqueness and the attraction.
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I wish everyone peace, happiness, good health and good dreams that come true for the coming year, may your celebrations be full of joy and hope for the future.
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Thank you @Simon41 for the welcome comments, I really happy that you enjoyed this short story. I agree that this is a bit on the short side, but there are reasons for that. I wanted readers to know that The Boot had not been forgotten and there are stories yet to come from The Old Shoe Factory. It's also a way to tell a little of developments since The Old Shoe Factory opened it's doors and introduce a few new characters. There will be more to come at point after the new year.
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Life Comes At You Fast... but that's okay, because I won't remember it.
Mancunian commented on Libby Drew's blog entry in Libby Drew
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Thank you for the valuable comment it means a lot, there are a few stories in The Boot series and The lost Souls Series which is part of The Boot world, I hope that you enjoy more of them, more stories to both series will be coming in the new year. Merry christmas to you too and to all readers.
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Happy Holidays - Merry Christmas - Feliz Navidad - Joyeux Noël - Frohe Weihnachten
Mancunian commented on Myr's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Happy Christmas to you all, I hope it's the Christmas that you want wether it's a nice quiet and peaceful one or full of fun and action with family and friends. Mine has been busy as expected, served over sixty Christmas lunches, met people I haven't met before and made more new friends, I'm shattered but it's it's been great. -
My wish is for everyone to have a peaceful, happy and joyous time over the festive period, regardless of your faith or belief. I especially wish it for all people in war torn countries caught up in combat of any kind wherever you may be.
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December Signature Feature: Melvyn Ford by Carlos Hazday
Mancunian commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
I recently came across this short from @Carlos Hazday and thoroughly enjoyed it. I recommend that others also read this great 'feel good' offering, I'm sure it will lift anyone's spirits.- 7 comments
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A great heartwarming short story that is sure to bring a smile to your face. This is about a car that becomes more than a family heirloom, it almost becomes part of the family. You need to read it to discover the important role that the Ford Model A Tudor, Melvin Ford, plays in this families development. A recommended 'feel good' read.
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It feels like everyone is on strike here, the postmen, the nurses, train drivers and guards and god knows who's going to be next.
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Complete with the lecherous old man in the background I see, lol. 🤣
