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  1. OK I over reacted (again) but I like Brandon looking like he did on the story page.Oh BTW thanks @Jason Rimbaud.For what you ask? Well there was something I wasn't aware of. Lets just I'm now going to be calling friends to see if any of them have a copy of The Dreamers I can borrow
  2. I just started reading this and Brandon is changing his look for his date? My reaction? STUPID!!!!!! Brandon hasn't been stupid up to this point. If he doesn't look as good as he does in that image on the story page then this was a waste. OK I'm going to continue the chapter now to see if my reaction was valid
  3. weinerdog

    Chapter 41

    I was anticipating the women offered as a bride this chapter. Sounds like David wouldn't be to keen on that. Could that cause friction with the Indians if he refused?
  4. I mean, I think that was a pretty sucky thing to do to your new bed the first night. Any gay boy if he has a partner will do the sucky thing on their first night Perhaps Tall boy can get lucky maybe the boy will some time have to quickly hide a used condom in his drawer. So when did you put this story to bed?....Er what I mean is...never mind
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    Chapter 21

    Excellent idea by Tony getting The Hill now the only possible problem now is Aaron's possible reaction. So did you introduce a new regular character in Adam? I looked them over. Kicked their tyres. ‘It’s diesel, of course, so you’ll have to just glow the plugs before you can start it.’ He must have thought me a right chump when he took a look at the expression on my face. The reason why he may have though Tony was a chump is Tony kicked the tires (I'm American I can spell that way) that signals to the Car salesman or mechanic that the customer who does that doesn't know Diddley about car.But here it looks like Tony was setting him up
  6. I'm so glad he had you as an owner
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    Chapter 4 S3

    So now that Mom and Dad know about Devin and Mac abilities why are they not saying anything about the Skin Walker or what happened with the boys? “We might have, if we hadn’t been making your father eat healthier,” Yeesh even when dad is being good Mom has to make a snarky comment
  8. OH! So that's why you wanted to borrow my picture
  9. “Wait. Isn’t 300 a perfect game?” That reminds me of a dumb joke it works better if you hear it instead of seeing it in print so that is why I'm telling this awkward way.Since it's a dumb joke I'll use Leon and Jeff. Jeff: Did you just say you bowled and three-hundred and one? Leon: Yes I did Jeff: I bet you $20 you didn't Leon: You're on Jeff: OK prove it. Leon:You can't bowl three hundred and lose......🥁 Da-dit-boom
  10. Next Up - Pool, a Fool, and Home/Away School . Only one fool ?I figured it would be both Leon and Jeff but for now I'm going with Jeff the communal showers would have been horrible. From what I understand only about a quarter of kids take showers after P.E. these days. It makes sense in California because we are always rationing water but I wonder why that happened in other parts of the country.I had a sweat problem as a kid so I NEEDED to take a shower. “I promise not to stare at your wang.” Noticed he didn't promise not to do anything else with his wang🤔 'Steve, Steve, he makes me want to heave' I confess I never heard that one..I have an older brother named Steve but if I had heard that I would have NEVER said that to him
  11. Curious as to why you had to jump through so many hoops. But alls well that ends well well.Heartfelt congratulations👌
  12. I missed comment so mine is a little redundant. It does bring up an interesting story I heard. In the later sixties the Canadian rock band The Guess Who drove across the border into the U.S. to do a gig (This was before they hit it big) Shortly after entering the border they were stopped by a police officer on some made up traffic violation.The officer told them to follow him .Before they went to start the car someone close by told them not follow the officer for this police department was known taking young people to draft board office and getting them enlisted in the Army. They turned in the other direction and crossed back into Canada. Out of the number of Canadian that fought in the war I wonder how many got in that way?
  13. Finally getting around to reading one of your completed stories I wasn't a member of GA when this was posted. As far as what time and city this takes place in I do remember reading it was estimated 20-40 Canadian enlisted in the U.S. army during the Vietnam war so Canada is in the mix as to what city. I'm surprised by that number.What was the economy like in Canada in 70's could that be a factor?
  14. @Flip-Flop reminded me of something when he mentioned today's date.Did you know it's also Star Wars day? No? May the 4th be with you.....I hope @Mikiesboy doesn't ban me for that
  15. You probably know this but I believe Dodger's story The Cockney Canuk has passed it in chapters and I think is less then 500 away in word count.If these guys talk the way they write I would be afraid of starting a conversation with them 😄
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    More than Maybe

    I figured you would like The Cure since they have a song called Lovecats (my favorite bass part BTW) come to think of it a few lyrics of that song could apply to Jamie and Luca
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    Chapter 20

    ‘And what’s your pen name going to be?’ ‘No fucking idea,’ I answered. ‘But I’m sure you can come up with something, can’t you?’ ‘Okay then. Just let me sleep on it.’ Might I suggest he use @Mark Ponyboy Peters
  18. weinerdog

    A Fresh Start

    "Fine. He's a fag. He might use his blindness to accidentally on purpose grope you." This might get said later in the story but what nobody is saying now is Micheal doesn't like Stephen based on his appearance that right there tells me he is less likely to do something like that
  19. I think Comsie could have written it as well. This is the fourth Comicality tribute story I read while all of them are very good this one comes the closest to feeling like it's a story by him
  20. You captured the feeling of spring perfectly
  21. weinerdog

    Chapter 1 SO

    JMHO but I think readers would want you to continue this. Some weird observations from my muddled mind “Yes. I have a large room with a smart TV with lots of apps, such as Netflix, Hulu, and Paramount+, and I’ve also got an Xbox with a lot of games. We can spend the night watching movies or playing games, I liking Cooper more all the time but you’ll have to share a bed with me too, because we don’t have a guest room. SOLD!!!😄 With a last name Thrasher shouldn't Paul be a skateboarder?“ “We wanted a dog that would be on the smaller side and would be good with the children.” So why didn't he get a Dachshund?....Kidding😄
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    Prologue SO

    I grew up in a military family both Army and Navy. Which is how I ended up in San Diego Navy town. I was younger so it wasn't a big deal for me but my older brother acted a lot like Cooper did. One huge difference will be when Copper told his friends he is gay they knew knew and liked him for years .It could be different with people you don't know
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    A Fresh Start

    Leon is a classic big brother. Nobody can be an a-hole to my brother.....except me
  24. weinerdog

    A Fresh Start

    Don't worry about that Michael can help you
  25. Hey I watch soaps ..That NEVER!!!! happens
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