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As soon as that dirty political trick with the picture of Davey and Brian appeared I figured Jeremy would be brought up.Doing it During a Barbara Walters interview was brilliant. The business venture that Sean and Brandon started that has been heavily invested in by Davey, Brian and his Mom sounds good but sometimes the timings bad.This is just me speculating but what if the business fails through dirty dealing or they steal Sean's technology etc.I don't know enough about this to know how the bad guys would do it but I guess it could be done.My long winded point is it would ruin everybody involved financially. Could this be the reason why they would do the time machine yet again?I haven't read ahead so this is a wild guess on my part. If they did decide to do this then they could come back before davey throw's the no-hitter in college.That way Sean is already adopted and is still his brother and Davey can make sure the damning picture never happens and he can try baseball again and the off to stop the bad guys who ripped them off.Of course some or all of this may never happen so take it with a grain of salt but them being so invested in this project has me worried If Davey makes it to this present year he'll be doubly pissed off because The Raiders(Traitors) will have come back to Oakland only to leave again to Las Vegas
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This chapter made think.I don't remember the last time I saw a jukebox.Do you actually know of a place that still has one?
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Hideyoshi actually thought he succeeded but he didn't so James had to come to make them aware.I hope after this Hideyoshi and Tsuru won't be so what's the word condescending toward James
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When you started the chapter with something shadowy and formless grazed my leg I was thinking WTH is the author changing genres on us in mid story is this now a horror story?LOL If I had been Jonathan my mind would have been racing first a mysterious note and then 5 unanswered calls I wouldn't have known what to think and I guess it was the same way with him calling at 2 AM. Fortunately Jonathan was able to understand and they ended up having what seems to be a pretty nice date. I'm worried some incident might happen at the restaurant but that's me. The job might be a good distraction for Ethan and The Gordons house would be a good place to be at the moment. I have to admit I never thought of if asking for a copy of your birth certificate a would automatically come with a background check.I can't imagine any fugitives asking for a copy.I remember having to order a copy of my birth certificate about 5-10 years ago.I hardly remember the state I was born in but the certificate arrived and no law enforcement knock. at my door so I guess I'm OK LOL
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What kind of "coaching" did the coach do anyway?" After doing that all that running on the sand Billy will return being that much better.Won't his teammates be surprised. Nice gesture to spend some time with Scotty
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Everything is great and I'm happy for everybody, Davey finally got to stay at the same high school and graduate with only a little bit of drama(compared to the times before)which they handled well.They had a nice party with their family and later with their friends. snd finally Davey and Brian were able to give themselves totally to each other it's all perfect. But...... I really hate belaboring this but we know there is a other book coming and another reason to build the machine AGAIN.Maybe this was written to be the one to wrap things up and then DK had an inspiration so he wrote another book but I think we all know there's going to be another ordeal. When(if?) they go back next time I hope they go back to a time when Sean was already adopted I like them two being brothers and I hope it stays that way.
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"Freaking fine"?WOW James really is pissed off.LOL 23 is getting a car don't leave her behind. Can the car go through the portal? Another reader wrote last chapter that he doesn't think the Boss is dead I'm thinking the same thing
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Billy not only ran a great race but he was very gracious and classy in his speech he learned that from Adam and Bill also. Adam's parents are just now finding out about him getting his doctorate?I thought he would have phoned them with the news.Maybe he thought face to face was better
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That teacher had a lot of nerve questioning Adam's integrity. It also seems like that school has other problems for those thugs to give Bret such a severe beating Bret might be better being home schooled if the school can't keep him safe
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Wow this chapter started with Jeremy dying.That part was written very well It's incredibly sad what happened to Jeremy but they sure packed a lot of living in that short time Disneyland,dirt biking etc.But most of all he knew he was loved. Sounds like Davey's TV appearance really did change the tide .They were able to adopt Sean I guess Mr. Rule felt he had no support for his bigotry and Davey and Brian are not outed so it did have an effect. Bravo to Papa for coming around for being nice to Jeremy and Brian.No mention if they reconciled with their daughter who married a black man I would think so maybe they will make an appearance. Do you get the feeling things are going too good? The mere fact Davey said in passing what if we build another time machine foreshadows that.How many lifetimes can you live? Yes he's going back in his teenage or even younger body but can the mind take only so much?I'm not qualified to speak of that but can he become senile one of these times? Just wondering
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AHHH!!!!!! You put Algebra in this chapter It brought flashbacks LOL.Actually if it was taught like this I think I would have gotten it sooner.
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Really liked James conversation with his inner self it could be a comedy act. Do 12 and 13 year olds still know the song Teen Spirt? Where did Charlie get the phone from?This is getting good
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The case the defense tries should be interesting.Why should Mayson attorney give Hunter a hateful look?He was the victim.I wonder if the attorney got a convoluted version of what happened.
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During the conversation Adam had with Jim's father Adam said classes were too short I can tell you 80% of my classmates would have disagreed with that.But I think classes seemed longer because of the cookie cutter way all the classes were taught
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Davey wondered if his TV appearance changed the tide I have a feeling it did.He countered every thing that so-called Dr. said plus proved him to be a liar.(He was first introduced as Dr. Darner then it changed to Darnell so editing error I guess)I think the key thing Davey said was the surgery Jeremy had to have and the blood they used was contaminated it seems like The Baptist church gang withheld that information I believe when most of the school students understand that part there would be far less hostility toward Jeremy.The one possible consequence might be Reagan might see this and realize Davey remembers more then he's letting on. Davey mentioned after the police and social services left their house that Dad talked to Sean alone for an hour.I wonder if that was enough for Dad to notice that this is a different Sean
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Can't wait to see Billy out lap his classmates. You have to think up a line for him to say like "Come on wimps can't keep up"Well your main characters aren't that arrogant but they would deserve it
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Well I knew something was going to happen but boy I didn't think it would be that.Mark may be educated and a Doctor but he's a ignoramus's.I would love to see TMZ report that Mark threw Kayden out and then lose patients because of that. Mrs. F---in Dee why the hell did she feel the need to do that?Was she afraid Mark was going to sue the school if the permission slip was forged.Sadly so many people who work in school offices feel the need to be busybody like that. I don't think the rest of Kayden's family will shun him.After this chapter I know any predictions I make will fall short but I can see when the Grandparents visit they will enquire about Kayden maybe even ask Ian what's been happening.I could see them being more angry at their Son rather then their Grandson.
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Was the source of Billy's bullying being teased for cramping up?I would think there would be more to it then that. Any coach that doesn't tell them to warm up and stretch isn't worth their salt.Sounds like he's incompetent
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I'm sure this has happened in other ways the kid likes the Dad better then Mom or he/she likes the visiting Uncle best etc. Someone I'm sure would know what to do this sounds like a great idea though .There is one thing everyone so far has been been missing they are brother's don't you know big and little brothers NEVER get along it's in their DNA lol. The way to Kase heart is...Loe?
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You have a good theory I was thinking along the lines of a local blowhard preacher who organizes something with his congregation and the local TV news covers it.
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In all the timelines Sean has been a good guy I don't see how when you have THAT as a father"You've been putting him in danger for the last week with that...thing you are harboring here." OMG It's a good thing Davey remembered Mary Lou's number. His memory must have had a gap because he seemed to have forgotten Mrs. Flores from Do Over until he saw her.Remember that bigoted foster family Mrs. Flores tried to place Davey in then?Davey should try to remember the name of the family and pass that on to his Dad who then should pass that on to Mary Lou.
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Any good idea or policy in the past be it in the workplace,research lab, law making what or wherever has always had plenty of opposition.We need people like Adam.
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Adam implied that someone being tutored might be considered by students to be a shameful thing .I never came across that in fact I respected people who sought tutoring help.The dumb things people snicker at.
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I loved Casper saying "You were speaking Japanese." Son of a flip???? I never heard that one before😆 James being Japanese the word flip might be interpreted by somebody as something else.I'm sure that's not what he meant though.
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Well the guys talked about what we discussed in the previous chapter comment and they didn't seem to be concerned how Freckles would have reacted if he found this out.They did say "you don't know what he would have done" well that goes for them also.And in the end the other Sean agreed with them and convinced Davey he was wrong. Freckles was going to die regardless I still think it was better to let him die in peace. If Papa and Nanny disowned their daughter because she married a Black guy well you know what the reaction will be with Davey and Brian I wonder if the conversation Papa and Davey had will make Papa reconsider I'm thinking not.
