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    Chapter 50

    Happy Labor Day as I see you've been laboring over a hot keyboard.BTW did you have any trouble with the flooding over there? So it sounds like Rory has gone off the deep end.It also seems like he found out about S.F. How? here's my guess a bug has been planted on Jackson and they overheard T.J and Jackson's conversation. T.J. and Jackson couldn't finish lunch?How big are their Calzones(that sorta sounded dirty)
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    Chapter 18

    Well despite the Puritans advanced technology and their Vulcan like logical approach to things they are just as weaseley backstabbers as the worst con man on Earth.Well with this developement I still see Relshan making the cure but I think he will come up with a plan to send Adam back to earth before they can turn him over to the Silga's I wonder if that piece of medal or whatever it is Brandon has on earth when it glowed purple did it send a signal to God knows where?
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    Arrival

    Interesting first impression Troy makes.Corbin says he speaks with an American accent but I notice Troy uses some subtle British colloquiums.I wonder what his back story is? Leah makes a good point being close to the sea the place will be cooler I live next to a beach so I know there's a big difference.Other than that jeez the nearest supermarket is eight miles away? And there is no KFC? But as @Canuk said Troy might fill the boredom
  4. If Corbin's Dad really did have a coronary I wonder what his reaction would be sadly I bet it would be at best indifference. Don't misunderstand this as defending the Dad he's a-hole regardless but he is different with Zoe so it's a fair question did Corbin contribute to the bad situation
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    Chapter 17

    You know I just thought of something when Adam described how much Castro ejaculated it's a good thing he didn't give him a BJ
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    Chapter 17

    My first reaction is Sage is coming back to Earth.Sage and Brandon will cross paths I'm thinking. Sage will forget about Purity but perhaps the Puritans might underestimate something in their procedure .Maybe Sages memories and feelings for Adam are so strong that memory might come back.Then if Brandon figured it out perhaps Sam and Uni connections might have a plan.I don't blame anybody if you think I'm nuts but does someone have another thought? So imagine having someone you designed and is perfect looking and wants to please you sounds like heaven.Can Castro act human enough that Adam doesn't notice any difference maybe if Adam wants to go back to Earth he may want to take Castro with him. So Puritans only eat once every two decades that means no Pizza or taco shops are there.That sounds like Hell to me
  7. Wow you didn't mess around with the family confrontation. Trent maybe shouldn't have shown up but Mark is far more responsible for what happened afterward.You could also argue Mark shouldn't have put on that charade in the first place.So the grand father has a beard down to his waist? ZZTop fan?
  8. Why couldn't the down pour happen just before Alex dad was starting his rant? But it's better to know now that he's hopeless. Will Owen ever have to use that whistle? They didn't get Ian to delete the video did he also record them naked?I think I know what's going to happen.
  9. Part of me is screaming for Corbin to ask Jean if he can move in with her but I know that can't happen because of the title of the story. Leah has identified the problem perfectly between her and Corbin yet they are still together.The one thing is no matter how flawed their relationship is it might still be better for her to go with them instead of staying with her drunk Mother. Corbin hasn't express any gay feelings but we've had hints that they are there did he possibly feel that way about Danny?
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    Chapter 4

    Well that sucks but statistically it makes perfect sense but you know something I would feel fortunate to have a friend like Karl.
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    Chapter 5

    This story holds up well. Glad I found it and you.
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    Chapter 16

    Did the Puritans program Castro to be attracted to Adam?If Castro is suppose to be copying human traits as Relshek said then fooling around with Sage isn't out of the question.
  13. I thought for sure Dr. Singh was going to say who does that snot-nosed kid think he is?But later he supported J.J with his discussion with Daniel Weinstien. There was a lot of description on Shaun's appearance sometimes I read too much into things but that tells me he's going to play some kind of significant part in upcoming chapters just a hunch.
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    Day 42

    Oh man drugs that's totally bad news. I have no idea what Kyle can do.Two awful things come to mind killing Salvatore or selling your body and as terrible as those options are it may be better then keeping things as they are.What a mess
  15. Does Corbin even know why he's been with Leah?She was making a very valid statement about Corbin's dad hurting him when Corbin abruptly cut her off I have to say he is doing her a disservice by continuing this relation. And his Dad with him in the picture it sounds like a tragedy waiting to happen. 5 chins? Are you serious?
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    Chapter 3

    Karl makes a good impression.So he's going to Marco's University please tell me you're going to write a scene where Karl decks Vinny😆 Kidding.
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    Part 2

    Very well done for a moment there when Jack had a noticeable pause before saying "I do" you had me thinking Jack was recalling what happened with Roman . It's all good. I understand there is a story centered around Roman if so I hope that is next.
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    Chapter 37

    There's still time before the end of the school year to do a prank on Cindzilla.And she won't be able to blame Luke because he's grounded
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    Part 1

    I'm so happy it got to this point ❤️.No mention of course of the unresolved issues of the previous story.Was this Jack's plan? Instead of telling Joey what happened he proposed marriage instead?
  20. Robby can be really naive sometimes no way in hell do I trust that pastor and I don't believe for a minute Don is unaware of their conversation the last sentence of the chapter confirmed that for me.Jo might want to keep seeing Joey after all.Please somebody tell Joey he's F-ing up with the Pastor. So Alex is a kick ass pitcher?Of course he deserves a second chance then🙄
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    Chapter 15

    If Fred was in the secret service what the hell is he doing in a s--thole of a town like Heidgate?You would think he had a pension or something.The fact that he even knew how to identify Vanadium was a signal there is a lot more to Fred than first thought he must have an interesting back story. It's a very disturbing thought that Verelan wasn't entitled to a trial. This implies Purity is a very authoritarian and planet this tells me despite what Relshek said they are NOT going to let Adam go back to Earth in a year should he want to.
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    Chapter 2

    Living in a Navy town and growing up in Navy family we all had a number of friends move out of our area and in number of cases the families moved back 2 or 3 years later.The majority of the time things weren't the same as the time before.Of course these were all just friends it could be a different dynamic with Marco and Karl
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    ABFTD

    So Mrs.Travers is a possible roadblock from Jake spending the next weekend. Maybe Jake and Ben will put 2+2 together and e-mail George about changing her thinking .
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    Chapter 14

    Deja vu all over again .Hey it happens see you tomorrow
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    Chapter 13

    Well that was a key piece of information The Puritans neglected to mention to Adam.It would seem the only way to keep Adam safe is with a real deep bunker.Perhaps make about 100 Adam replicas to confuse this enemy.What else haven't they told Adam?
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