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So AM spends her money on clothes the very idea of being seen in clothes over a month old perish the thought😱She needs a serious lifestyle adjustment .Tim thinks she need to see a psychiatrist I bet she has no idea if she has insurance or not. This is only a story so I won't harp on this too much but in California $170,000 would not get you diddily let alone a farm I suppose it could be different in other states.One thing is Donnie parents are not looking the get the max amount only enough to live comfortably.Besides Donnie set the price right?
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Tim is definitely doing the right thing but I'm curious what threshold does he have to meet to declare AM legally incapable of controlling her money ?Yes you can show what a moron she is by showing how she ran thru $10,000 but it's not illegal to be stupid I guess the judge must have a lot of discretion. I loved the line" Eva said she wants to check her luggage.”
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J.J.. and Henry seem perfect for each other but I felt that way about Shaun also so while I'm optimistic for the record I'll go with🤞 A little predicting the future in this chapter is this what you think will happen or hope will happen?I won't go into much detail but I hope parts of what Henry said turns out to be right. Are they going to look up Franklin?
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Chapter 3 - Friends and Enemies
weinerdog commented on Arch Hunter's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Friends and Enemies
It was definitely out of character for Owen to do what he did. Was that wolf really random or is there a connection to characters in the previous stories? Kevin didn't say anything to Ian about laying down naked on the top of the sheets if I was Kevin I would not have said anything either I wouldn't want to discourage him from doing it again.I wonder if Kevin is thinking the same way? -
The whispered voice Tim AND Stephen heard safe to say was Donnie by letting Stephen hear him I guess Donnie approves of him. If the money is Off shore it may be hard to get to it's a classic way for the wealthy to avoid paying taxes but I don't know how it would play out here.
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Well that was sure an interesting new development.What has to happen for some kind of action has to be taken against this gang? I can see another confrontation in the future after Kasper finds out everything between West and Neil. A fight maybe what if Neil or Kasper gets seriously hurt?How does West deal then?
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Charlie is content with his new life and the only way to get him to come back is the subdue the Whale and that might mean killing it if they can so what is the plan after that if they do .Charlie would be furious do they have some kind of deprogramming in mind?
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I don't know who's worst Ann Marie or the other heirs the love of money is indeed the root of all evil. The details of this case remind of another famous case the Anna Nicole Smith case the other heirs tried to screw her in that one also.Did that case influence your writing here? After Tim wins the case(I'm sure he will) I would make it short and sweet Ana Marie you won.NOW GET OUT!!!!!!!
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You can't ignore being told in your sleep to buy a farm for a specific amount like that. Naming their Son Donald is a given but although I don't know this for sure I think you can give your child more then one middle name so how about in no particular order after Donald you have Stephen Randall Timothy as the in between names.
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sounds good to me.
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Chapter 2 - Strangers in the Night
weinerdog commented on Arch Hunter's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Strangers in the Night
Is Owens condition making him act the way he is?And the breakup might amplify things.I wonder if Owen still has the same passion for the band can he still drum well or maybe the band will dump him. I get the feeling when Ian tells another one of his scary stories it will coincide with Owen transforming -
All the readers here had adequately pointed out Ann Marie many faults lets add being a ditz as another.What part of pre in the word prenuptial did the person with the college degree not understand?
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I'm really surprised J.J. didn't know about the less than four years apart rule many states have that.Conversely I remember reading a sex offender registry online think it was Washington State the "offender"was 19 and the "victim " was 17 I kid you not . Well it looks like things are falling into place for J.J. and Henry my first reaction ...cool
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There you go you can make Jamie be like @wildone friend ane be around awhile It looks like Jamie and Robbie are good for each other. It has become apparent that Robbie's Mom withheld a lot of information.It might be good for Robbie to speak to his Uncle and maybe his Uncle could tell Robbie what his Dad said about why he never contacted Robbie it could answer some questions he has.He also has cousins who want to meet him if they are bad people then never see them again but if they are good people it never hurts to have more family who could be your allies.I'm certain there isn't another Don in that bunch.
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What an incredible chapter.From his first time being intimate(I don't remember Kyle speaking of a previous time)from that to shooting guns and killing people I use the term people loosely to describe Kyle's victims. It's a damn good thing they found Kyle's journal now the police know that there were extenuating circumstances although I can still see Mattias maybe doing a little time. Who is this guy Copeland?Salvatore spoke of him like he's his boss.My bet is he's involved in law enforcement.
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@bottomguy has an interesting though about Ann Marie coming into play at the farm like maybe Ann Marie working there to pay off the invoice? I could just see her milking a goat. @drsawzall thought about getting a lecture from Stephen Grandfather I was thinking maybe Stephen Mom might be better to talk to her she could say I acted like you until I realized I could lose my family Happy Thanks giving to the readers and The Author
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This is difficult to read about but it is reality I almost put a tear icon as a chapter reaction.The day Belle passes(hopefully not soon) Having Felica around would be like having a piece of Belle still around.I hope Belle fights for a long long time but I get the feeling arrangement will be made for Hunter and Dale or maybe Vicky to get her kids
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Chapter 1 - Thanksgiving
weinerdog commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Thanksgiving
Perfect subject matter for Thanksgiving.I get Tristan grief but if you see said loved ones in ghost form like that then they are really still around just not the same way I would love to speak to my mom in ghost form(I don't worry about people thinking I'm nuts I already am) I hope Jamie condition is temporary he didn't seem to know yet how will he find out?When he tries to take a leak?🤔 -
I'm very happy to see this uh is there a chapter yet? I don't see it
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How clueless is she?She signed a pre-nup even if her husband's death was unexpected and he died too young she could have planned for when this happened.I'm sure you know of some similar case like this and we will find out what the loophole is my guess is it will be the legality of the prenup.If Tim does find something I hope he tells her I did this for Mom,Dad Aunt Clara and Randy NOT for you
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The part about talking to a patient who is comatose is true I was told to do with a close relative she claimed bits and pieces sounded familiar🤔 Well this was a rather appropriate ending to a story that had it's share of unusual occurrences.So Jake wants to hear more?If any of you readers were Ben would you bring the intimate stuff up? That could be a basis for another story Well done😄
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I loved how he called Camilla his sister and how he thinks of the Gonzalez's as his family. You're absolutely right about how filling authentic Chicago deep dish pizza is the first time I had it I was with two friends we heard eight slices and wondered if it would be enough we only finished a little over half of it we were all chow hounds.We don't have Giordano's where I live now there is something new for my bucket list. The author probably ticked off Chicago Cubs fans when he didn't mention Wrigley Field I know J.J. isn't a sports fan but the place is legendary
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That was beautiful. Dogs before dawn?Never heard that phrase before but it fits.
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If Ana Marie makes any kind of issue with Aunt Clara and Randy implying her need should come before theirs I would say OUT!!! DO NOT PASS GO DO NOT COLLECT $200.00 JUST GO AND HAVE A NICE LIFE.
