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I was anticipating Zack turning in the assignment to Mr.Raffe but this was good the first day with his friends after Zack's being gay was out in the open.And Adam and Sam showed that they are real friends. Zack still has a few things wrong he mentions being worried about about incriminating himself in that assignment as if he did something wrong.Zack you did nothing wrong your POS Dad did
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Hideyoshi said to James something about keeping the crime fighting to themselves is that a good idea?Also James and Casper keeping secrets I think they both proved they could trust each other so what's up with that?
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Philip's Dad knows a lot of people.What would be cool is when they raid Farmers place they find some stuff on Sturgis.Thanks for the cool video
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George already knows what's up😝Brilliant telling his mom he doesn't want to sleep with Alexandra until after marrying her.So all that time around Alex won't look suspicious
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Very complicated relationship.Somewhat like a older sibling relationship he messes with you but nobody else can.
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Well the condition that she has to get pregnant within 4 years makes this a little complicated.There has been people who has married and had kids only to later say they are gay so I guess it is possible.As long as Alex and Alexandra are OK with it.What if it was found out David wasn't capable of having kids for a medical reason what would The King do then?If they have a plan for that scenario maybe they could pretend that's the case.Sorry you're the writer here and I am trying to write it LOL.Interesting to see what happens
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The mere fact that they had to contact Davey even though it would mean that it would be in front of his classmates and his teacher tells us that this is very serious .Combine that with they have not located the Chinese time traveler is not good at all. It almost seems like Davey's Mom would rather be proven right instead of something bad not happening.
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You say the plot thickens.This sounds like to me the King and Queen might figure out David's scheme
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Jonathan writing about the stuff he writes might be influenced by what he witnessed Ethan doing for him.I'm surprised he would still use old physical copies of newspapers instead of the internet for research. Does Micheal have the same boy crush on Ethan Jonathan had?What else would explain M's reaction to Jonathan?It could be more like he's worried about losing a big brother.He seems to have a self esteem problem because of his Dad. Speaking of Dads this is the first time Ethan's was mentioned .That dream he had explains a lot. Reyna was quick to read Ethan the riot act that tells me she thinks this thing with Ethan and Jonathan could be serious
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There may be still a slight chance Farmer is using Philip but Richard seems to be on the level.The stuff about Sturgis appears to be true I heard a real life case where a corrupt judge who send kids with minor offenses to this privately run juvenile facility and then would receive a kickback.
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What was Hideyoshi doing at first? Was he pretending that he didn't know James in front of Tasha? It seems like Peter and Sarah didn't tell Hideyoshi about what happened to James.Hideyoshi knows who did it I guess Peter doesn't know. Lame prediction time.It was Father that did it
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You couldn't end on a bleak note? I don't see how you can't. But that's what the next chapter is for. Having never experienced something like this I don't know what to think
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When you think of Kings,Queens, Princes you think of Spain and England in the 1700's but they mentioned cars in this story so I assume it more modern.And being gay under normal circumstances doesn't seem to be a big deal.In this case when you're speaking about heirs it is a big deal.I wonder if something like this has happened in history.David has a interesting plan but if this country has a modern day paparazzi there is no way they would get away with it.
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The way that chapter was written it sounded like his dad had died until he actually showed up and spoke.who's funeral were they talking about? I don't get his Mom's anger she does know that Davey thought he was only staying for 20 minutes the first time he traveled.And this time well what would she had him do not come back and let the Russian and Chinese guy arrive and do god knows what?
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I was thinking the same thing what's the expression "Paying it Forward" I think it is. Great story.Thank you.
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Excellent chapter. Now the question will be is James pushed at the folks?Is he going to reveal to Tasha and Caleb that was his grandfather . His Grandfather should have recognized James voice at hello maybe he doesn't talk to him as much as his wife does
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That child services lady shouldn't have a job the judge could see how biased she was. Now that the boys are physically in school it will be interesting to see if they can make friends
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Remember when Grandma was upset when they walked into the building the loudmouths said they were going to burn in hell.A couple of things I wonder if it occurred to her she may have been hurting other people when she spouted her opinions.And also the person that shot her son most likely had similar thoughts to her I hope that makes her reconsider but I doubt it
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2. White Gold and 950 Silver
weinerdog commented on gor mu's story chapter in 2. White Gold and 950 Silver
Well Lucas changed what he wanted to do with his life because of Pascual he stopped having friends and his relationship with his sister is strained. Quite a big investment in one man. We know Pascual got jealous was it love or being possessive?If push cam to shove would Pascual end his marriage for Lucas -
A couple of weeks ago I would have picked Caleb in this battle but after some training with James grandfather I'm going with Tasha. Besides how else are we going to find out how Caleb found James house. Watch out Caleb
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As soon as it was said the lady was unhappy to see Lenny at the house I knew something was up. Good thing Jim recorded everything. I'm curious what experiences Jim had with child services.I would also like to see what proof that con man will offer up that says he's a relative of the boys
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That "joke" by Winters you totally expect to happen in middle school and high school but you would think all that nonsense stops in college but it doesn't.The old movie Revenge of the Nerds makes that point very well. You put some great reference material in this chapter on the Pansexual topic.I recently come across some stories on GA about Pansexual and Asexual people those are two topics the general public are really clueless about.
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So Philip sounds like he might be on board now with Farmer.From my readers perspective I'm not sure if what Richard has been saying about Farmer is true or not is he on the level or are they trying to con Philip.Are we going to see Sturgis?That will give us a lot of clues .
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Boy a lot of that family is ass backwards .I hope it's better for Chris in this lifeline. Davey's Dad mentioning visiting quarantine hospitals with Davey makes me think now more than ever that they'll see Brian.
