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When Farmer talked about his time in Gulf war one you detect some extremism but it sounds like for the most part he did his duty well.What the hell happened to him?

Would the adoption be in Italy or the US? At that point in time it might still be an issue for a same-sex couple to adopt in the US but if it happens in Italy the US would have to accept it am I right?Grandmother could probably make it happen

Wow that was exhausting you had me thinking it was actually going to happen for a moment.I guess since you mentioned therapy Matthews Mom and Jonah must have found out how close he came.Luckily Jonah was a good guy who struggled with trying to be a loyal friend to Dallas and doing the right thing sadly there are other kids who in the same situation as Jonah was would want to do the same thing he did but cannot bring themself to.Thank you for this story I don't know how many kids read on this site but I hope this helps some adults here who may a son/daughter or nephew/niece etc. to recognize the signs

It's would be difficult for anybody to move away from their high school when they are fairly close to graduation leaving friends and a long time crush would be tough enough if he was moving somewhere else in the United States in this case our main character Lautaro had to move to another country where another language is spoken where his new classmate could sense he is a bit of an outsider even he didn't say where he was from and while his parents are not bad people it is far from a good situation which made this move happen.This author does a great job to make the reader feel his anxiety while adjusts and wouldn't you know it he meets another crush .So do yourself a favor and explore with Lautaro his exciting and scary journey

Great chapter the only thing missing was details of Dr. Grimes being humiliated LOL. If I understood this right George H W Bush was responsible for what happened to Davey.I wonder if that would be a big enough rift between him and Reagan for Bush to be taken off the ticket. This is a different lifeline after all. Smart idea making his Dad be a Chaplin less complication in the future(past?)well you know what I mean

Thank you for a beautiful story.And I can appreciate how difficult it was for you to finish.I have a musician friend he's not famous but I think he's very good.He once told me when he has a heartbreaking split some of his best work comes out in song but I imagine it didn't work out for you that way. BTW maybe I have been reading too many stories but I sort of knew when the epilog started they were talking about Noah Whenever you have an idea in the future and you decide to post it here we will be anxiously waiting. Take care

My thick skull just thought of something .When Rick crossed paths with his former classmate who's a lawyer most readers understandably figured Rick was going to be her client somewhere down the line.Well we found out that Zoltan has a condescending view of Gus intelligence and that got me thinking what kind of work agreement or contract does Gus have with Zoltan? I bet there is something illegal or some violation there and THAT is where Rick's lawyer friend comes in.I'm probably wrong again but I like to speculate

So we have an idea of where some conflict will come from. I guess I have some limited knowledge but Neil's comment "Flower boy" I take it that it's a gay slur

I love Tasha's priorities "Pie first" I knew I loved that girl.With Hideyoshi training her she would almost be as invisible as she thinks he is. This would just like the Government not even child prostitution would make them do the right thing

So Angelina is not a blood relative she's an orphan, or is she both?At any rate she sounds like a sweetheart.

Farmer was deemed not fit to command but somehow got a job in charge of kids?There is some other corruption going on here.

Happy Easter to you also. Hunter has a great support system but it looks like he needs the professional help really bad.I fear they might be rushing him back to play. BTW I'm glad you posted early but in the future you may not want to post the same day Parker Owens posts a new chapter LOL other new chapters from other authors might get overlooked when that happens

I didn't think it was possible but there's a character that I and I suspect most of the readers hate more than Heinrich and Rita.I had a sense Zoltan was very controlling but I didn't imagine to this degree.Rick in his thought process after Zoltan left felt he had no way to fight Zoltan he even thought that he didn't have a lawyer.Well he then gets a emergency call from and old classmate who's...A LAWYER!!! Coincidence? I think not but I can't speak for Parker so we'll see.I have to think Zoltan said some illegal things to Rick I'm no lawyer but maybe Debbie can strike first for Rick by having a restraining order against Zoltan or something like that.A corporate lawyer from New York would be a good match for anyone Zoltan has The chapter did end on a silver lining IMHO.The master of great timing Heinrich decided to call just then and finally Rick speaks to him the way he should have spoken to him a long time ago Just thought of something it would involve Rick revealing himself a little.He can ask Jared to speak to Marta about what Zoltan said maybe it will get back to Gus.Yeah risky

Ending the chapter while the story in progress that's mean😄.Seriously I'm willing to bet this story might explain the Angelina mystery

I knew Davey would think of something for me the surprise was he set it up before he left for the base he didn't know about any changes but I guess the experience of the last timeline got him trained to think that way.And say what you want about the Dad's shortcomings Davey knew if he was missing Dad would search his room looking for clues and it worked like he thought. Speaking of the Dad he's a lot different in this timeline what changed?

So Ray and Peter know each other and Peter was aware of Casper. Didn't Peter consider that there might be a supernatural reason why his son is hanging around Casper sure he doesn't have any details but in the back of his mind he knows that both of them could have powers and are keeping it secret unless we find out different it looks like Peter though James and Casper just randomly became friends. I think we can say based on what we know Peter might have dropped the ball here. So did Ray of course but in a different way

All train trips should be something like that LOL. A Shawarma that's the first I've heard of that.You said the meat was lamb so I guess it's Greek.Is that the same meat they use in a Gyro?

Chuckles would be pretty arrogant to leave some evidence on social media but arrogant is the least of what he did. Maybe there is what looks to be innocent photo but in the picture is one of the 16 missing boys.We maybe talking serial killer here.He must own some land or something maybe that's where the bodies are

It sounds like Brad doesn't know the extent of Matt and Seamus relationship otherwise he would not have brought up staying for the summer.If Matt was smart and let's face it he hasn't up to this point been smart about what to do in this relationship he would say to Seamus what plans he and his dad had before he moved in Seamus place.But knowing Matt he will just blurt out'I'm staying there for the summer"I hope maybe he'll mentioned this to one of his friends and they can at least ask Matt"How does Seamus feel about this"? Having said that I don't think a lengthy visit is inappropriate say maybe a month would be Ok.But talk to Seamus about it PLEASE!!!

How far away is Cincinnati from where they are ? Depending on where it is they would be separated during the football season five or so months.They are mature enough to handle it.Scott investing the money is a great idea.

As we know from the first Do Over Davey is very resourceful these guys are seriously underestimating him combine that with Grimes arrogance and Davey will know what to do and when to do it. I had forgotten that Davey lived there in a previous timeline so he would remember friends from then this would lessen the impact of no Brian and company. Since you can come up with so many scenarios with time travel I could see people he knew from both timelines crossing paths depending on the situation

The sex scene was beautiful. Glad for the most part things went well with his Dad.The Grandparents?I'll be charitable they were....interesting Both Lauti and Valentin said it well they both want to be better for each other

My first thought is Dr. McDermis has news of Scott qualifying for an advanced program maybe on a scholarship or something along those lines. When will they go to Italy?After they graduate?This Angelina thing is quite mysterious

That is a lot to take in first you seem to to be bodyless then to see it outside of yourself and it seems like it's 100 ft long how do you wrap around that?The best my limited mind can figure is he was in another dimension when he went through that wall. Thankfully I don't use drugs but If I took an hallucinogenic and then I looked up and saw James flying naked my first thought would be "Wow I want to take more of this stuff"

Well college is working out for both of them.Scott does have a point didn't the high school have a clue on how advanced he was in math?