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I stand corrected I get so confused these days I changed it

Kudos to @theschnauzerscalled it.The last chapter comment he said all 6 would be there and most of us got the year right.The only downside I see is I think of the saying "Too many cooks spoil the broth" since there is only seven or so chapter left I guess that won't happen.Brandon and Sean have to be extra careful and discreet it would be just like Mr.Rule to have them followed.Sean should think of a strategy to deal with him. I know this isn't going to happen and it would still be a big risk but theoretically could Sean with all the stuff he knew in the previous lifeline and make the AIDS cocktail or whatever it is they do these days to help Uncle Rich?He is probably too far along with the disease to be helped though.Just thinking out loud I'm not writing this thank God LOL

A French chef classy.There used to be a cooking show called The French Chef. What did one have to do to become a Trustee before? Whatever it was it was sure inadequate

I figured the Trustees would take that position. I would like for the trustees to explain in a civil suit or on 60 Minutes how caviar,whiskey,and fine wine are a school expense.

This has been recommended to me by @chris191070 and I trust his judgement after reading this first chapter I got a good feeling about this story and I have a long way to go but I think I'm going to be liking every minute of it.This was certainly true of this chapter

I'm am really surprised yet another trip back.I would have hoped there was something they could have done without having to do this again.There are only eight chapter left the author would have had to write things in a more condensed way to get it all in.I hope things get resolved by the end of this story because there "aint no more" after this. This chapter didn't reveal what year Brian is going back to maybe he could go back before all the bad shit happened before David Sr. molested Jenny before Bev got paralyzed and maybe Davey doesn't move to Nevada and of course stay the hell away from Marcie but we won't know any of that until we know what year he arrives

That's twice they messed with Mom's mind she should plot something of her own.

I think this is now the longest story I read on this site.In your estimation how far is the story along 50%? 75%? not that it matters I'm liking every bit of it.I hope this isn't it for Cody.BTW he didn't even flinch when James threw out that his Grandparent have been doing this for a couple hundred years

Ah jeez in the government again I was hoping it would be avoided this time.I had a feeling Sean would travel back again is this Sean aware of the one timeline that ended the worst or did the other Davey tell Brian enough about it?That's the main thing is to try avoid Armageddon. I'm curious how they found out not just about Davey and Brian but all 6 of them.

In the spirit of the theme of this chapter...2 chapters in one day??How do we know it's really you writing this chapter? Wait you did say a person with a crazy mind. OK it's probably you.

And ruin his day?

When you say staff I'm guessing former Board members and not teachers.When there is little over site from the Trustees they noticed and took a lot of liberties but under any circumstances that was extreme greed and very arrogant. They have to plan to do something very special for the kids with the expensive cuts of meat.I would say they would not continue to buy that meat. but if they did at least it would be for the kids

Making a report about the board of Trustees meeting is a no brainer.It's good to have a record of what you propose and what was said.I suppose Arlene and co. didn't do that because they had things to hide.A scholarship is a great idea.

Bet Jack is having flashbacks from when it happened to him. BTW We still hate you.

I would love for Daddy dearest to find a passage anywhere in the Bible where Jesus supports the position he has taken.Mr Rightous thinks bullying is OK? Part of Ricky's avoidance of Matt I think stems from the how Matt's parents are .I suspect he believes Matt's feelings mirror those of his parents and that he has crossed an unpardonable line. I sure hope I'm wrong but I see Matt ending up being with Charles under the Pastor's "guidance" to pray the gay away

Well no disaster in this timeline as far as being outed.And Davey's family came around especially Pete and Bev.It looks like Sandy only came around because she needed her business partners oh well it can't all be perfect "'I'm a bit surprised at Trevor and Todd.That stuff about Trevor having to pretend to be straight to play in the NFL isn't accurate as long as he's discreet and is good enough he could play in the NFL.There were a number of gay players that wasn't public about it and had no problems.There were a handful that said something after they retired but only one player came out while still active. There were no mention of Trevor being able t help Davey and Brian with the Russian language.We are closer to the end now then to the beginning of this do over I'm going to miss reading about these guys although I guess it had to end sometime

Somebody has to have a theory on how the spirit got here so in turn they should have a theory on how to get it back home if possible James said "Australians are weird" You wrote that line so I guess it does take one to know one.

If I read any back chapters will the name of the person who's coming back in Tristan's life appear? Because I'm drawing a blank. You said we would hate you by the end of the chapter. Hell we already hated you LOL

I like Marie a lot but I were Adam I would get room with a steel door with three deadbolts so when I wanted a place to meditate I won't get a bucket of water thrown on me.

I guess since they will probably have a roommate you could call it a Timeshare

Wow very good I doubt any readers here saw that coming.I can't make a good case for this but I have a nagging feeling G is the killer.

In spirit it is a little brother or sister but what would be the legal term be in this case? Cousin?

Excellent job building suspense part of me wanted to go AAAH!!!! and part of me loved it .I never knew of any teacher who let go what Zack did.The look on Zack's face must have really indicated to her that something was up.

I can't help thinking about comparing this to the Anna Nicole case there are a lot of differences but the basic thought is the same the family thinks the spouse is evil.I would love to see the faces of Kelly's parents when the star witness at the trial is Matt. As far as Aidan running off as soon as somebody gives him a $20 dollar bill I know a lot of people who do that and they're adults.

You will really impressed with this author's first effort of this length if you didn't know it you would think this was an experienced GA author with a number of stories under her belt. Our main character Ethan has had a couple of very harrowing incidents involving abuse when he was a teenager in the aftermath he has spent half his life worried that one day the law might catch up to him.He find a out of the way place and goes under an assumed name when one day a person who was 12 years old when he last saw him 10 years ago comes looking for him and finds him what follows is a bunch of twist and turns that will keep you riveted with characters that you come to care for.I gave this five stars not because it was a GA first time effort it is 5 stars on merit