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I knew Davey would think of something for me the surprise was he set it up before he left for the base he didn't know about any changes but I guess the experience of the last timeline got him trained to think that way.And say what you want about the Dad's shortcomings Davey knew if he was missing Dad would search his room looking for clues and it worked like he thought. Speaking of the Dad he's a lot different in this timeline what changed?
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Bonus Chapter: Ray Sullivan.
weinerdog commented on Rhythminthemind's story chapter in Bonus Chapter: Ray Sullivan.
So Ray and Peter know each other and Peter was aware of Casper. Didn't Peter consider that there might be a supernatural reason why his son is hanging around Casper sure he doesn't have any details but in the back of his mind he knows that both of them could have powers and are keeping it secret unless we find out different it looks like Peter though James and Casper just randomly became friends. I think we can say based on what we know Peter might have dropped the ball here. So did Ray of course but in a different way -
All train trips should be something like that LOL. A Shawarma that's the first I've heard of that.You said the meat was lamb so I guess it's Greek.Is that the same meat they use in a Gyro?
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Chuckles would be pretty arrogant to leave some evidence on social media but arrogant is the least of what he did. Maybe there is what looks to be innocent photo but in the picture is one of the 16 missing boys.We maybe talking serial killer here.He must own some land or something maybe that's where the bodies are
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Maple, cherry, walnut, hickory, oak...
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Maple, cherry, walnut, hickory, oak...
It sounds like Brad doesn't know the extent of Matt and Seamus relationship otherwise he would not have brought up staying for the summer.If Matt was smart and let's face it he hasn't up to this point been smart about what to do in this relationship he would say to Seamus what plans he and his dad had before he moved in Seamus place.But knowing Matt he will just blurt out'I'm staying there for the summer"I hope maybe he'll mentioned this to one of his friends and they can at least ask Matt"How does Seamus feel about this"? Having said that I don't think a lengthy visit is inappropriate say maybe a month would be Ok.But talk to Seamus about it PLEASE!!!- 34 comments
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How far away is Cincinnati from where they are ? Depending on where it is they would be separated during the football season five or so months.They are mature enough to handle it.Scott investing the money is a great idea.
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As we know from the first Do Over Davey is very resourceful these guys are seriously underestimating him combine that with Grimes arrogance and Davey will know what to do and when to do it. I had forgotten that Davey lived there in a previous timeline so he would remember friends from then this would lessen the impact of no Brian and company. Since you can come up with so many scenarios with time travel I could see people he knew from both timelines crossing paths depending on the situation
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The sex scene was beautiful. Glad for the most part things went well with his Dad.The Grandparents?I'll be charitable they were....interesting Both Lauti and Valentin said it well they both want to be better for each other
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My first thought is Dr. McDermis has news of Scott qualifying for an advanced program maybe on a scholarship or something along those lines. When will they go to Italy?After they graduate?This Angelina thing is quite mysterious
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That is a lot to take in first you seem to to be bodyless then to see it outside of yourself and it seems like it's 100 ft long how do you wrap around that?The best my limited mind can figure is he was in another dimension when he went through that wall. Thankfully I don't use drugs but If I took an hallucinogenic and then I looked up and saw James flying naked my first thought would be "Wow I want to take more of this stuff"
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Well college is working out for both of them.Scott does have a point didn't the high school have a clue on how advanced he was in math?
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One reader said it was James Father. and another said it was his Grandfather I think it was the Grandfather.I don't think Tasha will have to put 2+2 together I think Grandpa was there because he knew James had been there I bet Grandma passed on the info about the birds.I see no reason why he would not reveal himself as James Grandfather. I admire Tasha's determination but she was taking some knocks also if some bad ass flame man comes by to offer help geez take it what good are you if you're all broken up
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It may have different back then but Brad's football practices would start a week or so earlier then regular classes. I wonder some diners offer polenta for breakfast I don't think I ever had that
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Philip didn't act like he was damaged he seemed well adjusted. It does explain why he cares for the kids
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I didn't think that would happen so quick maybe there are some feelings from when they knew each other in the past despite the age difference which really wasn't all that much.Ethan mentioned Michael had a look of distrust I wonder why that is. What's with all the birds in the place?It's a costume shop so maybe they rent them to people who want to dress up as pirates.Sorry about that🙄
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Can't wait for the big bust.Dirty Harriet?Maybe you should copyright that name I could see somebody making a movie out of that
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They both didn't want to be with anybody based on bad previous experiences but they found each other and took a major step they are right for each other
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Based on the story tags there's nothing in this chapter that gives any clues.West is established as a good guy liked by his friends and teammates the parents seem OK the sibs seem to get along good naturedly kidding each other so what in the world will go wrong.I guess this is the calm before the storm
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Well they are living in Nevada because the government is concerned about the Brian issue but to me that thought is hanging by a thread.Surely the Chinese traveler and Shevardnadze will eventually figure out they will able to get to Davey by being a threat to his extended family like his Aunt and cousins not to mention Grandparents I think they would eventually acquire the necessary info to put 2+2 together this would be a couple of years down the line needless to say and who's to say they won't figure out his friends anyway.Maybe I worry too much but I think there is too much to account for without missing something important whatever that might be to help the bad guys.
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I'm guessing they were at the drive-in again at the beginning of the chapter.There not too many around any more we still have one in San Diego and it gets good business.The fact that Scott can sit in Brad's lap at a drive-in should make the concept popular again some day.You can't do that in a theater well you can but.....
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I guess I interpreted it wrong.Tasha seemed to be able to withstand the lightning so that's why I thought there was something new there
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This is an ability Tasha hasn't shown yet my first thought is when Tasha had that confrontation with one of the birds and it stressed her out and as a result a new power made itself known.I'm probably way off I can't think of anything else
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Looks like the sting operation is going to work out well.
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Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
The previous night should have told Matt for sure Seamus was into him.If Seamus hadn't gone to Iron Works would he have ever have gotten it?Matt might be lamer then me in that department. Jase was cool for going to the place for Matt but I bet he won't ever do that foe anybody else ever again. That story Seamus told about getting fired made me think just once I would like to see a Karen get decked.If somebody got in legal trouble because of it I would start a Go Fund Me page for him or her- 50 comments
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Where Have You Been?
weinerdog commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Where Have You Been?
I think I know what you're implying that would be interesting
