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Willy's comment"I don't know how he got into the liquor dad" has lie written all over it I guess it was convenient for Mr.Kohler to believe his good boy.I wonder if we will find out if Willy went on to do this to other people could that be the reason why the Kohler house is empty?Heinrich Sr didn't want to know the truth all he was concerned about was how it affected business.When you are wronged these things linger I hope Rick somehow manages to find peace.Will Rita get more aggressive in pursuit of Rick?I'm just guessing here but I'm thinking Rita is going to end up being a supportive friend.
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The boys calling them Dad and Pop almost immediately how cool is that.
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I have read many stories on GA and a conservative estimate would a least half most likely more have had typo and grammar errors in it.I can honestly say that in every case I caught the error but still understood what the author meant.For me the biggest issue would be is the story enjoyable. Even if I paid for a e-book or a hardback book if its a good story I really don't care about typos.Lets put it this way if we get a new Ronyx story and it's a typically good enjoyable Ronyx story it could have a thousands typos for all I care and I believe many of his readers would agree
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That's what a smartphone for.Yeesh🥰😅
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TJ andJackson are going to have to come up with something to control their thoughts otherwise I see no end to this. Seriously put the two brothers in separate bedrooms made out of lead?Invoking Superman stuff are we. Well it seemed to work. Question about a previous chapter what did Helen mean about Jeff mooching?That seemed harsh. Now that she's coming around will she stop disliking him?
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Two chapters in a row????Man he just doesn't care anymore😪
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Nothing was mentioned in the dialog but maybe the parents are dead and haven't been found?On the surface who would abandon what seems to be nice kids like that and they had to be raised well.Andy is going to be a good friend.I bet Andy could have been one of the reasons why Mrs. Brown gave a good report
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Sorry my bad I wasn't clear there.In that part of the comment I was referring to Alan wondering if they foster a kid they won't have a guest room.And I was thinking they might not be able to do that with the existing house so another structure for a guest room
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Speaking to your point and few made by other readers here did family services really think it was better for a kid to remain an orphan rather then being adopted by decent people who happen to be a same-sex couple?If I understand it right the house is built in the mountain so they would have to build a separate structure as a guest houseI imagine.
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The upcoming conversation between Owen and Alex will be interesting .The unintentional wrong word might trigger Owen it sounds like he ready to vent.We know now that there won't a Ryan or Alex choice since Ryan is straight.I wish I had friends who weren't gay like Ryan isn't gay.Naming his dog Kobe?Obviously an NBA fan.
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Alan and Cody would be great Foster parents. Sadly you hear about awful Foster parents who are only in it for the money
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Excuses, excuses
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Tinkle????That's a new one.Of course Jamie will get as big as Ja-wack-sin you've heard of The tinkle down theory Oh wait that's something else. Never mind
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I live in Socal and we have places here called Giant N.Y. Pizza and also some called The Bronx Pizza s if it was a big deal.I've heard it said New Yorker and Chicagoans will get in huge arguments about who's pizza is better.I'm a deep dish Chicago man myself
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Hunter sure has some colorful words to describe his town. Wayyyy back when I was a freshman I didn't speak like that but I had plenty of friends who did.I could could definitely picture @Wesley8890 speaking like that as a freshman did he write the opening part of this chapter by any chance? My first reaction is Hunter with his working on the ranch and Jaime with his tragic family history haven't made all that many friends in their life outside of being in school.They sure clicked pretty quick.Love the start of the story a lot.
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Really happy Andy found a BF.
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My Step dad would have told Jeff and his friends 'Aren't you a little old to be trick or treatin?"Kiddingly of course.I love that Andy's there a lot but doesn't he have friends?A Or are they in a secluded area.The trip to New York sounds like fun.Sadly this year they may not have the Time Square event.
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What are they going to do with that bedroom?If they make it Jeff's then Jeff and Nancy Jean and Alan and Cody will probably hear each other hope the walls are thick.
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Sorry for taking so long to reply I had to clean my monitor after the mannish comment.Note to self don't drink coffee while reading these chapters.Almost did it again with Helen Waite. I remember Jack and Tracy telling the story about how Helen caught them.I don't remember but I guess Jackson wasn't here for that because Helen told him the same story. Helen is coming around and that'a awesome but make sure she's not drinking coffee when they tell her how her great grandkid were conceived
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Very good chapter.I don't want to be a dark cloud here but I wonder how Andy's Dad will find out about his son .There is no indication that it will be a problem.Does Jeff know?
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Helen sure knows how to brighten a room. She should be a guest on Dr Phil.I would love to hear ask her after she tell him how she approaches the situation "Well how's that working for you?".Otherwise very good start.
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Gee Thanks a lot @Wesley8890
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Awesome gift although I will say Alan should have spoke to Andy's folks beforehand I can imagine some parents being worried.Although Andy seems like a smart enough kid to have it.
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Just found you and this story love what I'm reading so far.I'm wondering how Zeke and his partner knew the killer was at Tyler's house apparently too late to stop the killing.
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If they buy the Lodge and Cody runs it I think I know who their first hire will be
