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Giving us that image of Lucas from Stranger Things made the HJ more interesting.The Band Def Leppard has a one armed drummer I think the equipment needed would be too costly to even borrow for a short time.I'm worried that the replacement drummer(Alex?) might be better and the bandmates won't be loyal to Owen.I also wonder if that hit and run wasn't on purpose
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Andy was going to around a lot anyway but now he'll think of even more reasons to show up just to drive the ATV.Did Andy tell Cody about himself?Hey a little milestone for you last chapter I think it was the first time you had a page 2 for chapter comments.
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I don't know how to describe this story.I don't think you would believe me if I tried.But what I will say that it'a a lot of fun just work extra hard to suspend reality if I say any more than that I will be giving too much away.If you haven't read any of Aquarius Guy's other stories I urge to do so first.To this reader this story looks like it is laying the groundwork for his next story which in my humble opinion promises to be good.
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So JC ERR!!!!...Jackson.I just thought I'd be the first to do that.Grandpa Ron said"I bet; having children will do that to you."He said that like he's had personal experience is there something you're not telling us about him🤔I'm so glad none of the names are Donald(no offense to any normal people named Donald)Looking forward to the next story
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From what?Thinking up all the names?
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Let's all of us visit Alan's place he'll have enough food for us.I'm glad Andy had Alan to talk to.
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🥁da dit boom
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Seven kids???? Jeez what did JC and TJ ever do to you??I would have trouble remembering all the names.When TJ said '"Oh shit" upon hearing about JC getting triplets I think that might be the universal reaction of all parents finding out they're having triplets.Interesting times ahead.
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I sort of knew Andy was going to be hanging aroud a lot.Is he going to bring his friends?The Lodge sounds like an interesting idea but what do they know about running one
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I never had one like that but it sounds great I want to go get one now.Damn you lol
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I'm guessing Willy was aware Rick was sheltered and basically a loner maybe even asked Jerry about him he may have premeditated this before the fourth of July event.Going to find out a lot of interesting things in future chapters like who else knows or knew about this what was the fall out and most importantly where is Willy these days
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An example of Cody's character he could move in and live off of Alan but he can't bring himself to do so.Maybe he'll find something he really enjoys(besides Alan of course)
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I get the feeling Patrick C.Worthington is going to be trouble in future chapters.I guess Cam's close ties to the Judge might come in handy.Before you name any of the babies one suggestion.Make sure at least one of them has Grandpa Ron's name otherwise a certain somebody might get ticked off lol.A chapter without the word brudder?AW!!!
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Looks like they picked up a friend in Jeff.Well for me I've come across a new term I Haden't in this context before.The word Buggy was used to what I assume means shopping cart.It sounded British to me or is that a term used in Pennsylvania?I remember growing up a few years in Massachusetts they had words for things nobody else had.
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Valentin has some very good friends.I remember growing up hearing friends make comments like Joaco made when I responded"Hey don't flatter yourself" that usually shut them up.I wonder what the reception would be with Lauti friends in New Haven if he brought Valentin there with him. So far Marian is an awesome character
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So If Im reading this right will they start calling JC JT? I know lame question.Another lame question since men having babies is new territory will all these babies be gay?Jack and Tracy had threesomes in DOS some things never change.When TJ mentioned soundproofing the room I thought of "The cone of Silence" from Get Smart.
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WOW !!! 35 Companies quite a productive last trip he deserves the bonus just for that.Sounds like the timing with Cody couldn't be better
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It almost sounded like a final chapter but then I saw the "In process" After 19 chapters done? What was I thinking????Excellent chapter.
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Used diapers in gym bags and briefcases?Who are the kids and who are the adults?Good chapter.
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I like how this is starting.I imagine there are going to be a lot interesting character visiting this new place.I'm unfamiliar with Pennsylvania you mentioned hunting camps are there going to be wild animals near his place?
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Since this is your creation you can go a lot of ways with this for example will a baby given birth from a man be able to do different things than one born from a women etc. part of me doesn't want to know.One question in this universe I guess Liz isn't an partner in the law firm.
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Ok what kind of hallucinative substance did you take before you wrote this chapter.
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What's Elly short for?I liked all your stories but I'm confident I speak for everyone that your stories are getting better and better.friendly suggestion you think you can write a short epilog for'Andy"?A few of us were surprised that it was over.Thank you for a good story
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I think it's a 'I'm going to wait until more is revealed damn"But it's a 'It has my interest damn'" also. So that's a good damn right?I will say I halfway expected Neo from The Matrix to join the fight.
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This may have been on another site under a different name I'm not sure but if its the same story I only remember it up to this point.It could be what @Comicality likes to do and call it a remix
