weinerdog
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Wow all those twist and turns .CIA? Kellan and Jordan taking out the POS's? I didn't need heart medicine like you suggested but a close by friend gave me CPR. I'm glad Jeff found somebody.He is the one character in the other story that I was feeling bad for. I made a comment after one of the chapters of Dancing where I wondered was that whole group of friends gay or bi.So I had to laugh when T.J. said in his narrative"Was anyone at mom's school straight besides her and Kelly?"I might be unusual but at a given school with a random group of people something like that could happen I think. Are we supposed to know what set T.J. off to run out of the restaurant? Or will that be revealed next chapter?
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Yep a lot better Thanks.
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I'm also going to re-read right now I have to admit I had trouble following also.But then again I'm easy to confuse
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The one thing Carlo said in his narrative that he should have said to Anthony is he thought he loved someone before.He went on to say but they were using him.He could leave out that part because it doesn't apply to Anthony but if he told him the first part I think Anthony would understand about Carlo wanting to take it slow.Good chapter
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When they were talking about investing they could of had Sean join the conversation.
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I have to admit my head hurts with all the possibilities.Maybe Carmine is on the right side. It's sad to see how TJ thinks of himself at the moment.Tracy's proposal is awesome I would have jumped at it .But I get it think about it and visit first.No more Sebashats right.I'm so glad Trace came up to talk to him. Maybe because all that's happened to him but after Grayson and TJ talked TJ thought he's Crushing on Kellan and Jordan?It's right in front him.TRACE!!!!
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Hear them?Or steal them?Kidding lol. I know you definitely don't need too.
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good chapter.In a way Carlo was never really fired or hired for that matter
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What do they call this when it's a TV show?A crossover episode.As soon as you mentioned Mexico and marina I was wondering and sure enough.Good surprise.Now to find out what crew they are meeting .If it's from when Nicky was steering the boat or later.
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Great chapter.So it will be interesting to see where they hid The POS's I think she was justified hitting the "cockwomble" but it's still assault on an officer how will Jack handle that? Just to clarify at the end you had the guys being referred to by their first initial.Are all of them calling each other that? My bad for not knowing this but what song was J.C. singing?
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Yeah I just edited it before you responded
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T.J's mom called the two rapists shits stains?I didn't know she was related to @Wesley8890
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Man these parents don't mess around.Were they like this with other guys when it came to Anthony?Also I must say this is the first time I've come across someone named Anthony being called Ants.Anybody else see that?
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Disney must have been a shock to the guys system a good one.Just so I have a better idea what was life like for them on their island?Did they have computers and TV etc.?Or it was it more like poverty?
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I'm thinking the kidnapping is phony to somehow protect Dylandouce and Sebashat(BTW good one @tesao)if that's true then there's someone close to the situation is working against TJ.(DR.CC?) Don't they have to tell Dr. Martin right away that TJ is his nephew?Isn't there some rule about a Doctor working on a relative .I would think Jack would what thought of that after he found out.
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Sounds like your using the rule in gay male fiction that all law enforcement officers are idiots
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Small world those are the ones my mom watched.
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Wow I last chapter I referred To Dylan and Sebastian as POS's but that and @Wesley8890 shitweasels don't do it justice anybody got a better term? I used to record my elderly mother's (rest her soul) soaps and got familiar with all their tropes .People who are missing watching their soaps should read this story you're filling the void quite nicely except you execute it a lot better.I can't wait for what you'll do in Chap.13.The only question I have is didn't Jack find out the info rather fast?His firm must really be kick ass. This chapter @Wesley8890 was right on top of it after you posted.So at what time will you post the next one 3:36 A.M.?lol
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Is there a double entendre there?Just asking
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Anthony sure got to point fast.The first thing he said to Carlo was massage.Rita sure knew what she was doing
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Human trafficking was one of the things I though about.What's wrong with people?
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Excellent chapter.Some random thoughts It's Great to see Jeff in this role.Its sounds like his life experiences brought him to this place.I hope there's a scene where Jeff and TJ talk. While Dylan is a POS along with Sebastian he's also incredibly stupid.You don't send that by text that is so reckless he really didn't consider that could put him in deep doo-doo?And the images might be of people underage.What morons. I'm curious why TJ doesn't remember JC from before is it connected to his condition? But Lucas was in the picture also and he didn't seem to remember either.
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Tell you what if she wants to Rita can plan my life anytime.I did get the sense she was a mover and shaker.
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Very good chapter.The only thing you might have missed is Billy could have privately asked the doctor how Malo got those injuries.Also if was Billy I would be worried the doctor might get suspicious and report it to the authorities.Then again on the island they may not have that kind of system.
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My guess about the picture was Partially right which proves the saying"Even a blind squirrel can find nuts sometimes".TJ blacking out I hope its not part of something more serious.It great to see that all the guys from Dancing remained friends.Ok now let's cut to the chase and kick Dylan's and Sebastian's ass.
