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You said the word was looking for was raw...You were right @CasualWanderer82...this is going to be raw and none of us like ,Nora and Daniel, will be the same at the end... The last part of this chapter was brutal....Daniel realises that he might have crossed the Rubicon so to speak.

Fore warned is fore armed indeed🤣...you are safe though

That sounds 'ominous'🤣

Join the queue mate...🤣🤣....the ones that want to slap Zayn a little...but @Cane23 mentioned...Zayn needs to discover who Harry is ...that way he will know who really holds his heart.

What made it more poignant for me is that last line...River didn't look back...He is hurting in that scene and yet he strides forward with his head held high...that for me was just strength of will embodied.. One can only hope Harry's facade falls fast..but this is @vanalas....milking drama and despair is his forte🤣

Haha...one can only hope so.

Yes..another political thriller on our hands...Though I like to consider this as sort of Activist themed thriller ..Enrico Alvarez is this time wearing the white gloves🤣

What a chapter!...the first part of the chapter was magic... The scene between Aunt Vee and River was exceptional..two cats fighting culminating with one cat beaten and bruised 🤣 That final part of the chapter however was so heart wrenching ...River being so selfless and not standing in the way of 'love'.. I couldn't decide whether to be sad for or be proud of River . Then there is that Harry twat using that child as a prop..just to garner Zayn's attention...hmm..I can't even. Zayn Monroe...I don't even know where to start with this wuss of a guy!...River tells you that your paramour put his life at risk just to prove a point and what does Zayn do about it...Nothing!... Those two imbeciles indeed deserve each other . Next... Thank you!

You have become 'mean' lately @Hadrianarcher.🤣🤣🤣...You leave us with such a cliff hanger after being quiet for so long...at the rate you are going am going to get into a depression of sorts🤣🤣 Thank you for the update!

No way!😂😂...that right there is the biggest irony of ever....Malik's name in your mother tongue meaning little when himself is big in all ways..eh😂

Oh God....my heart broke for Tad. Basically he is a hustler only he gets his payment in form of a roof over his head!. It is stories like these that make me feel fortunate that even if my country is hell hole for queer folks, you will never find underage folks doing sex work..Sex work is outlawed to begin with... I don't know if am alone....but this chapter has just suddenly put Razi in a shady group for me..

Thank God to hear there is possibility of him..I was worried ..he is in a very precarious position in that damn compound at the moment..

Oh it was supposed to be a punishment of sorts...Lyn botched that....but not before letting that leather belt dance on Alexander's butt...just once😂😂.. On a more meta level...I think the punishment is sort of abstract...I think ,Like @LeeSA mentioned is alluding the years long hidden feelings Alexander has harboured for Lyn and even though they have reached an intimacy level still cannot bring to light...I like to believe that is the punishment...more like an emotional wringing of sorts

It is good to see our Ukrainian Dmytro is still with us...He had gone and ghosted us for a while there ....That young man has certainly been through a wringer....eh

Hopefully the coffee order was not bungled..😂😂

When I read that part about the dimensions ...I was shocked @Cane23...I was like that bloke has got a bright future below his waist😂😂...and then it got to me to thinking . How on earth do folks even handle that?..left me in awe of some folks' 'take up' talents😂

Gerra outta here Sir😂😂😂

You are not alone @FanLit..😂😂..Many times after reading his works am left feeling ' mentally and emotionally adrift'...Good thing I have a buddy of mine who I call Decipher,in my head of course, who helps me not get lost in the mire😂😂

Doc...you are a meanie😂😂...you drive a hard bargain ..let me have this win already😂

Thank you!..Had never read a Bi-themed story before...so basically this is my 'cherry popping' moment when it comes to that😂

That's the beauty of it all .Our Esteemed author's works challenge us to look at things from a grey perspective ...there is almost never a black and white ..our job is to embrace the characters and their distinctive truths😂😂..

Haven't forgotten that Doc...but he had a devil on his shoulder in Jean

For some reason, I seem to be the only one who doesn't think that PM is that dastardly..Sure he is a victim of circumstances he cannot control ..but I don't think he is as bad as others seem to judge him ..I could be wrong though

That the thing about infidelity....it's an addiction that is hard to beat....if ever.

Oh Jake...that is a terrible situation you find yourself in mate...that is one hell of an inextricable dilemma ...I almost feel sad for him.