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    And we are patiently waiting in the stands ..with whatever you concoction you brew😂😂
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    You forgetting these are teenagers?haha ...Angst and not being logical are the default settings...Just harken back to your teenage years!...the hormones are in control during that phase.😂
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    Careful there @vanalas....you are drifting😂😂...Besides through your 'proxy' Alma you sowed the seed😂😂.. What is that tot of wisdom...oh yeah..'The road to hell is paved with good intentions'.. Am an ardent reader of yours... When a character starts out like Elijah in your stories...there is never a change of heart, some sort of introspection to become better.No..they instead double down on their insidiousness. Besides ,a villain doesn't have to be as ghoulish as Ian Sandoval...even emotional abuse and casual cruelty like the one Elijah subjected Noah and Jace to respectively illustrates the moral compass of a person .
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    Chapter 9

    Seraph28 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 9

    That's why I earlier lamented about Enrico's insidiousness...Whoever he answers to is in the dark....however if he serves himself, then the Intellegentsia will not what he hit them...From Faslane, Petrovic and now the stealing of the Humboldt project...Enrico is just so thorough.
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    This was such a bitter sweet chapter...Elijah seems like dust that cannot go away..eh. I only have one wish when it comes to this story...that JaNoah is the end game...no matter what will happen in between...I am so going to petition the Literary Diety so that he can 'persuade' you😂😂😂😂. Thank you!
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    And we the readers are all the more grateful for it since it's something you do on the side ...That's pretty impressive..Juggling work and your passion ..that is
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    That Interaction between Ryan and Skylar ... the private tutoring request is so CW cliche 😂😂...Am inclined to start a GoFundMe in case the bigwigs at CW consider sueing for 'copyright infringement'' . All of a sudden you just evoked in me the urge to rewatch Gossip Girl,Mean girls,90210 and most of the High school/college themed rooms that were the staple of the Late 90s and the 2000s😂😂 Thank you Sir!
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    You must have been giddy while typing that reply😂😂
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    Welcome to the club .haha
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    I pegged the satirical format from the very first sentence of the tale ...Anything that has Hollywood in it is a harbinger of the beautiful chaos that is bound to be happen😂... Someone previously commented that they like what you have done with this story ....like it's taking a vacation to recover from intensity especially from the Just,Maybe story .
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    Chapter 8

    Seraph28 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 8

    When I read the previous chapter .I was thinking Enrico is another despicable,cunning and soulless ghoul..but after this chapter.I somewhat have a different perspective of him...Sure he is ruthless(one has to be if you are in National intelligence Service)..but his interaction with Ezra Reed somewhat makes him a little humane!. it reminds me of Kendrick Leighton from your other story.. He makes really bad decisions but in the end you get to understand that he was just human albeit a broken one. I don't know what your plan for Enrico is but with this chapter am excited to see how how it pans out. Thank you!
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    Oh Lucian is so messed up....he needs serious therapy!..I cannot help but feel sorry for Daniel...he is really living in a bauble of delusion when it comes to his father
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    I understand ...but don't you think Skylar was being a little biased here....For all we know Ryan could just be putting an act...I believe you have watched enough CW productions to know...the 'dumb jock has more depth than he seems' trope is prevalent. The dumb act is always to mask the pressure they feel from the expectations heaped upon on them. Not to mention that @Jeff Burton warned us he is going to pen a story that is an amalgamation of all the genre tropes of stories here.😂😂.
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    Just don't burn out in the process😂
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    This chapter was like those trashy 90s High school movies/tv series ..and it's just so good
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    Ryan being dumb is subjective bias on Skylar's part. If Ryan was dumb...he would not be in AP English classes....those require some level of aptitude .
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    You really went there...I thought you were mucking around when you mentioned you would write a story with that title.😂😂 You have attacked everything from CW....Instagram....it's like you are writing satire this time round....You are so crazily imaginative this time..Am all for it😂😂 The way you have described the resident himbo(Ryan) and bimbo(Madison) as having cumulative emotional range of a paper plate ..that was comically brutal😂😂....The Gossip girl vibe is something else..
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    Chapter 7

    Seraph28 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 7

    Damn if Insidious was a person he would be Enrico .eh . He is playing 3-D chess with the Intelligentsia and they have no idea they are in his game....this is just so marvelous
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    I stopped trying to predict the character projectories of your stories @vanalas..hihi... Ian started out bad and got worse as the story progressed ....We don't know much about Elijah so far...since we have not got Noah's perspective of him....but dragging away a new born child from his father ...is just plain cruelty . So I am inclined to guess that Elijah will be another nasty vermin that will have to be squashed down the road!
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    Powerful

    Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Powerful

    Two chapters updates that you deliver and more...No words this time...at least Theodore is not all bad..he is an acquired taste😂😂.. Ryder is the hot headed one while Danny is the calm and collected one. Thank you!
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    Seraph28 commented on chris191070's story chapter in 1

    For some reason most of our community is caught in a perpetual loop of fighting .First it was the discrimination, which was largely successful....but then there is the frivolousness that seems to be a default setting of most of the community😂
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    Seraph28 commented on chris191070's story chapter in 1

    This tale is sadly a reflection of our community ..Happiness is fleeting when it comes to our community.Most folks are never satisfied . I have read stories on Nifty Archives in the Relationship section ...it's really sad ..stories written there..eh I like that Brad never loses hope in love. He is always positive that someone special is out there waiting for him to find .
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    In the Dark

    Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in In the Dark

    The domesticity of it...was so beautiful...I loved it too... You always bring a new perspective when it comes to the chapters
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    well...regardless of it being your Sci-fi/thriller debut, it's really beautifully complex and riveting .
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    In the Dark

    Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in In the Dark

    This is by far among the best chapter analyses of a work you have ever done @Cane23...I do not even have anything to supplement it...it's that superb!
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