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The Beach Episode (Because Apparently That’s Required)
Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in The Beach Episode (Because Apparently That’s Required)
Please don't encourage them @Jeff Burton😂😂- 48 comments
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The Beach Episode (Because Apparently That’s Required)
Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in The Beach Episode (Because Apparently That’s Required)
This chapter is a case study of what happens when horny and angst riddled teens are left to their devices😂😂...Bad decisions all around .😂- 48 comments
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Next Monday cannot come soon enough. I must admit at first I found your style of writing a bit non-continuous .I mean where chapters do not feed into the other organically. An example is the previous chapter with the cliff hanger ...usually being resolved immediately in the next chapter.. You don't do that and I used to feel it gives the story a serial vibe....but over the weekend ,I re-read the story from chapter 1 and got to realise it actually works better that way since Alarik is our main character and we are getting his perspective in form of a journal. Thank you Sir...this story resonates a great deal with me because in a few years I will be like Alarik...Am 36 this year and what Alarik shows us in this story is what happens when you hit the wrong side of 30 in our community😂😂
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Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Whom were you talking about?...Personally I haven't read KBois in a long while . Not since COVID time -
Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Yes...that one.. thank you @Cane23. -
Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Well...it's GA @drpaladin...stranger things have happened...opposites attract is a running theme in all her works.. plus Clairvoyance can come in handy when you are an Alpha and have your pack members' lives at stake . There is an author here, have forgotten the name, who specialises in fantasy especially shifter romance and I can tell you, all most all the main pack members are mated to males😂 -
Mother’s questions & queers dancing
Seraph28 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Mother’s questions & queers dancing
Oh Matt and Gray have come a long way. ..the personal growth these two lads are showing is just marvelous to say the least!. Made me envious ..of having to dance with a bloke you like in public like that.. -
Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Well..how sure are you?..Besides @Laura S. Fox has not explicitly outlined the rules and customs of the supernatural community in this universe...besides I like to believe that she did not just include this for fun. It is the classic Chekhov 's gun! -
The wait will be worth it...they are after all in a precarious situation...what with that evil entity trying to possess Huxley .Romance tends to take a back seat when you are busy trying to survive death or a possession in this case😂
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Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Seems we are still not in the know...you will probably be back from the Mediterranean when we get to know😂😂😂- 58 comments
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Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Pinemoor, Here We Come?
I am counting seconds till next Sunday pops around..😂- 58 comments
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Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Pinemoor, Here We Come?
I have my theory that Jack is Theo's fated mate.....I have read enough shifter stories on this forum to recognise the pattern .. two characters who are fated mates getting on each others' nerves without much effort.. You notice how they seem to wind up each other....that right there is typical sexual tension😂😂😂....I could be wrong though!- 58 comments
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That statement right up there just flared up my hormones😂😂😂... God! GA tends to evoke the inner horniness in most of us Thank you!....Can't wait when the chapters start dropping ..whoa
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Basing on the way he killed Marcus ...a robbery stage up would definitely raise immediate scrutiny .
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[Memory, Freshman Year, Winter Break] – Two Types of Friends
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Freshman Year, Winter Break] – Two Types of Friends
At the rate you are going ...you are going to send us into a GIF induced delirium @Calvin😂😂😂😂 -
Oh Enrico...you badass😂...There must be something wrong with me if am rooting for a duplicitous and ruthless character like Enrico, right? You really had fun writing this chapter 😂 😂.It must have brought out your inner boy worship of action figures Thank you!
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Eh..in your mind they are Nick and Schmidt😂😂
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Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
Not unless you want me to literally become Pop😂 -
Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
Finally someone says it out loud 😂😂..There is something a little loose with you @vanalas..you can't keep doing this over and over again..unless there is some deep rooted issue that makes you churn out such work...tale after tale 😂😂😂...I know some really good therapists...could recommend you....if you ask ...Nicely of course 😂 -
Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
Did you expect anything different?,..This is @vanalas's MO...the characters are happy and then pop...a shady ex or obsessed best friend of one of the characters shows up to create upheaval...we have seen this chorus play out many times😂😂 -
Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
You ever watched Chicago the musical?..There is that song ..Cell block tango...especially the chorus...you know...I think it applies to you here😂😂 'You had it coming, You had it coming',.'You only have yourself to blame'😂😂😂 -
And here I thought Rook and Huxley had started eating each other's faces already😂😂😂 If you don't mind me asking...would it possible to have a multi-perspective chapter.?I mean like having both Huxley and Rook's perspectives in the same chapter? Thank you!
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Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
me thinks you doth protest too much😉😂.....I wish could make a bet with you😂...I would definitely win of course -
Just take your time...we the 'faithful'😂😉..will wait for whenever you are ready to indulge us with your imagination..
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Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
Go and read the synopsis @VBlew....it's scary ...It felt like someone had dropped a pail of ice water on me ...I suspect it's before Noah...I feel like I become too attached to stories here..it's almost scary. I didn't want Elijah to be proven right but somehow I know he will be if the synopsis is any indication
