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Now we see why Ryan was so aggressive in getting with Michael. I have a feeling he is not done defying his Mother. She may not get what she wants…
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Great chapter, some good family bonding time. Do wonder if Devin really needs some more healing time to be able to drive further.
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This chapter and the prologue seem to be the same.
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Lovely tickle wrestling, with awesome commentary. It was a fun day.
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That ending… truly could have been just the blackness. So glad it ended with Tommy calling Evan back to their present.
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Peter did a great job, forecasting the location the storm would make landfall and then got to report on it. Hopefully it helped save lives.
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Beautiful beginning. Looking forward to where these guy’s story goes, they seem like a great match.
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Oh, this seems like a setup for them to accidentally kill some of Jacob’s other brothers…..
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It seems like Ryan felt the same attraction as Michael did, however he thinks Michael is Gay and just denying that. Maybe Michael is more pansexual, if it needs a label. But that has been confusing to him. The problem will be to be honest about this or it’s going to be a big problem with Sarah and Nathan.
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Drew definitely needs medical attention. At least he woke up, and is now in bed with his watchdog. Casey is seeing how attentive Mickey is, especially knowing all of Drew’s favorite foods. Then she gently gets him to change places so he is not hiding his scars, and he is silently grateful. Hope there is a discussion with Casey about finances, maybe she wants to keep the rural property too, and isn’t cut off from her trust fund?..
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The necklace was the key, why was Tom so compliant in this, was it guilt or just a game? Did Brandon have that much control? Ledger freed himself, to join Marcus. Very dark… Is Brandon just pretending with the girlfriend? Very sick puppy. It just brings up, what happened to send him to this kind of darkness?
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Wow, did not see that coming. The 4 guys seemed to be getting along really well. If the Escalade belonged to Tom, nobody so far has seen the face inside. The fact that it seems to be stalking both Marcus and Nicholas is very suspicious. This is a crazy twist.
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So much love and tenderness. Then some fun wake up tickles. And a surprise is revealed.
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So much ticklish fun in this chapter. And an awesome surprise for the guys. Hope the cottage is exactly what they want to move closer to family.
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Fun playtime, then a coincidence of meeting at the same place to pick up pies… that near miss on the highway was a wake up call to stay alert.
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These guys are so in love. The presents are amazing, a teddy bear necklace, and a unicorn. Each crafted just for the receiver. Looking forward to more with these guys.
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This ties the two stories together, but the time jump is huge. Glad to know Thomas and Brandon are still together and doing good work in the community. And Roger was not killed by the mob. Family is really the one we make.
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Amazing writing. We get a glimpse into his relationship with his father, and his growth into possible understanding of his father’s tortured life.
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From this inner dialogue of Carlos, he wasn’t the killer, but may have supplied the drugs that killed him?
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Have Fun, Jacques… But Use Protection
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Have Fun, Jacques… But Use Protection
The mystery continues, at least Solomon put the friends off thinking anything more than this was just something Jacques had arranged. -
Fun short story, perfect for this holiday.
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Chapter 18 - Wedding Vows and Speeches
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 18 - Wedding Vows and Speeches
The vows, and then the toasts are simply amazing, the reflection of the lives well lived. Beautiful. -
Sometimes the flashback help get people to just hang on to the hope for a better future. Great chapter.
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Friends rally around for support, Mickey’s mother is awesome, At least Drew has his sister on his side, and the reply about the financial manipulation was dead on. They can make their own way in the world as needed. Hopefully the paparazzi will back off soon. It was like someone “Dave” tipped them off about Mickey.
