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Nice ending. This was a good story if two people coming to love each other.
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Uncle George is a very caring and understanding parent in all of this. Pete blaming himself for all of these other people’s issues is disheartening. That he thinks he would be better off dead, needs some attention, which Farley and George jumped right on. Farley seems like an ally if not “family” himself. Mitch seems to need some maturing. Hopefully Jimmy is ok, and he and Pete can build on their friendship.
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The are getting a lot of work in with this mustering. He’s also keeping in touch with his other friends.
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Chapter 45 - Young Quigley, Part 2
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 45 - Young Quigley, Part 2
Help come from the most unlikely places. Pickle was very up front and business like. And she didn’t like the people that are Quigley’s bounty targets. This will be the start of his career. -
Wow, what a confession of what Otis went through with his mother and her depression. It was fortunate that his grandmother took him and loved him. What an amazing man. They are good for each other. Looking forward to more.
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"The Articles Of Faith" (Part 2)
VBlew commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Articles Of Faith" (Part 2)
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So Rovnar moves all of Xavier’s group to the swamp area to deal with these red Dragons. The silver dragon’s history does not seem to go back to a time with living sand dragons. The group finds the red’s lair and is now approaching to fight the, it’s a test of the young ones skill. Nice cliffhanger.
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Chapter 2: Foundations and First Impressions
VBlew commented on Alan2's story chapter in Chapter 2: Foundations and First Impressions
Daniel is making Liam feel comfortable and leading him around introducing him to others. I’m wondering about Daniel’s mention of the Covenant in the prior chapter, if he is already a member and getting a feel for Liam joining, or if they are the source of the scholarship and had him targeted before.?. -
Emmet was using his magic to help Finley be calm during the discussion. There are growing feelings between them.
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M said mother told him he could get pregnant, and it really seemed like he was having morning sickness. He could be. That would make the agent want to inspect him even more!!! Hopefully with the tracker out Connor will be a little better with the headache situation. Back to SD. Maybe Hannah really can be of some help.
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What happened to Calvin. Something about his dress an appearance is foo from when he was last visiting the boys with his “ wife”… the testimony is weak and he does not really seem motivated for his won case…
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Off for a working summer. I bet the boys will be glad they both came on this journey.
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These guys really are taking their time to work together on their relationship, likes and dislikes, past failures, and supporting each other.
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Awesome chapter. School is going well. Pete is learning more from seeing the game from a coach’s perspective. He was being aware of his surroundings, even with the guys walking him home, and avoided some goons. The shooting range is teaching him about gun safety and use. The dinner sounds terrific.
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Another great story in the series. It looks like it’s a continuation of a family of detectives… looking forward to the next story
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The Meeting and A Huge Surprise
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Meeting and A Huge Surprise
I’m guessing the partially right part has to do with where they will be living, and it’s not at Manny’s place. Less disruption to Rocky’s life that way. It looks to be an interesting story. -
Glad to see these guys again. On to a new adventure. They have the skills to do the soldiering, just need to complete this mission and get fast tracked.
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Chapter 10: Will it all come to an end with them being happy?
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 10: Will it all come to an end with them being happy?
Thanks for this story, that was a tragic ending. Leaves me wanting to know what happens in their future. Hopefully Henry is a good father and Mateo finds a love that is not built on deception. -
Loved the trial, so much drama and suspense… with the real intent on having these 3 youth, who took care of the youngsters while they were on the streets, be able to live fulfilling lives. Now they will, thanks to Barron Greg. so much compassion. They may even take advantage of the school that’s being built.
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Canada Holiday & Graduation
VBlew commented on quokka's story chapter in Canada Holiday & Graduation
This is an intense underground structure. And still top secret. It’s nice knowing he has a fantastic retreat, that he will be able to share with his friends. Just seems a little excessive…. -
It seems they both are attracted to the other and still don’t know what each other are. It’s going to be explosive when they get together.
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There is still some sense of self in Simon. Maybe his friends will be able to come to his aid. Connor was embarrassed by his actions of being rejected, but he still wants to be with Simon. So, maybe there is hope yet.
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Julie seems nice enough. She took them in, and is helping Connor get a job. Entry level may not even do a background check with the former employer. The encounter with the MIB, was not so bad, but was the warning about M or Greg or Nathan?? There are 3 hims currently in the house, we could just assume it’s M. And after being beaten with a baseball bat, who would not be suspicious. M’s comment about sentient AI makes you wonder if he’s encountered them before.
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Love the retreat and the reserve that the grands have set up for him and his friends. Interesting that there is no mention of him having children there…
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So, is this the same Man in Black, or a clone? Was it a dream or did M rescue him, just to have the MIB appear at their room? M is definitely getting into the sex. And Connor is releasing his past.
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