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  1. VBlew

    TA Chapter 1

    Great intro to update us since the last story. Could the be encountering the same troublemakers as last time?
  2. VBlew

    Chapter 7

    So is Tomas the same as this Twn?
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    Chapter 8

    My guess is that Harry got out, and that will lead to a search for him, and possible meeting back up with someone else.
  4. VBlew

    Chapter 6

    Hopefully Tomas will come back after his work is done. He as to know what affect he has had on Henry.
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    Chapter 7

    Great chapter, getting everything out in the open between Connor and Shamus was good. We haven’t heard much about Dakota. They both seemed to have an attraction, but we’re not staying close to each other on the ranch to interact more. Hopefully they will meet again soon.
  6. Great news for Tyler connecting with his Uncle. It’s a small world, with all of those thin threads of connection. Rob, RB, was good telling Tyler about his past. He wanted to be honest starting this new relationship, and not hiding anything. That was really brave as it could mean the end of the relationship, or make them stronger. Waiting to find out.
  7. Welcome back Gary! I was just thinking about you and your stories the other day. Great first chapter introducing these two characters. Looking forward to the story.
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    Healing

    A great chapter of friendship. It’s always better to have friends caring for you than being sick by yourself. That fish in the kitchen is going to nasty when he gets back home though.
  9. VBlew

    Healing

    A great chapter of friendship. It’s always better to have friends caring for you than being sick by yourself. That fish in the kitchen is going to nasty when he gets back home though.
  10. VBlew

    Chapter 19

    Go Kenny! I think the discipline for the grounding was good for Bryan. He certainly learned his lesson. As for the adults picking on the children, it’s really good that Diego is around to defend them!
  11. The guys are so anxious to get back to sex that Ant has not recovered enough. Pete was great with Andy and Tyler, making time for other friends, he really is a good guy. Now that his voice is coming back, the band may get another big opportunity.
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    Chapter 2

    And more mysterious things afoot. First the camera on his tablet on, then the bloody book that Artemis had in the library. Adam looks like he will be a good friend. Hopefully not a plant.
  13. A new world creation. Looking forward to more.
  14. VBlew

    FINAL - Desafinado

    Lots of island exploring and fun. Now we know how Albert got hurt, saving Craig from himself. And the time to release the deceased finally came. Looking forward to some happy times ahead.
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    Chapter 17

    Some headway toward a possible friendship. Not sure about drinking though, could free up either of the bad actors in Travis.
  16. VBlew

    Thirty-Seven

    Liam needed to hear fro. Someone else that knew the truth about him being bullied. Maybe this will help him out of his depression.
  17. VBlew

    Chapter 4

    Connor has some real latent ability to communicate with these horses. Is he the wolf in his dream?
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    Chapter 29

    So one curious thing with this new knowledge that there is something up in space that these bad mages want to control. Will it be for the good of the inhabitants after these mages are dealt with? is the universal translator that Irik has magic or machine? Can it be used for our group to talk with this “oracle”?
  19. VBlew

    Decisions

    Great chapter, Corbin seems back on track. Little cliff hanger there with Pete.
  20. VBlew

    Disp Ch14

    Thanks for another great story.
  21. VBlew

    Chapter 26

    Great new idea of seeing the vision of a place someone else has been before, and translocating there. This reminds me of the ability of the dragons of Pern stories to “go between” and jump from location to location. Interesting idea that Jamie is perceiving radio frequency messaging. Now to find a decoding device or Magick.
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    Chapter 22

    It’s interesting that Jamie has wut to ask about seeing the hey closer to see if they can incorporate its “magic” ability to detect the mages and what protection it offers against the western mages. The realization about focused light energy, in a blue spectrum gives them all something to work on a solution together. they are gradually forming very strong defenses against every weapon that has been used against them so far. But they will need more than defensive options meeting these foes soon.
  23. VBlew

    Chapter 30

    Another fun jaunt with family and friends.
  24. VBlew

    Walking On A Dream

    Albert really quickly diffused that angry situation. Jedi skills at work there. The growing need for sex to happen between them is palpable….
  25. VBlew

    Chapter 17

    Valrinda at least gave Beckett some options for the potential danger they are headed to. Also seems like the time traveling Beckett is learning about this world.
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