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Chapter 69 - Epilogue - Golvinte
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 69 - Epilogue - Golvinte
Interesting place to end book 2. Leaving us wanting to know so much more. Glad to hear book 3 is coming. -
Amazing chapter with two battles, both ending in dead dragons an this last one a true so they should all be healed now. But aren’t there still Two warrior red dragons? What is behind the magically sealed wall? Xavier seems to know.
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Connor needs to listen to M when he says he feels danger and to get out of somewhere… it was like at the party the MIB attacked and one is in a coma.
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So what’s going on with Grayson and Lindsey that he can’t break up with her, and won’t say why??
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So what’s going on with Grayson and Lindsey that he can’t break up with her, and won’t say why??
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Chapter 67 - The Computer
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 67 - The Computer
Even with the new scanning computer, which is cataloging much more than just star systems. This was like the proverbial needle in a haystack. And that in just a few days, they are getting a transmission from the ship they are searching for. I’m with the others about being wary of what they will find. -
Great chapter with the required diversion. Why didn’t Oscar tell Marcus the will have another guest?
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Very interesting chapter with a rather large collection, Francis wants Vaughn’s help with placement around his house while removing all of his father’s works. Then the continued rumors of financial floundering. Dante still has a good position for the time being. And if it all goes bad should be able to parlay this experience into something else.
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The trial is over, and they get to move on with their lives. Ollie seems really happy to be back in his former home area and with his best friend again.
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So glad Nathan woke up… but 5 months, and then the Daemon says the bite is slow and has many stages…. That seems like it may not be over… Would the witch help, even if she knows how to open a portal? Maybe they can get the goblins to go with the daemon…? The didn’t seem that intelligent though. Cormac keeps showing up, learning more about their past and he has the burden of killing somebody too.
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Another crime solved. Looking forward to the next mystery.
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Backpackers go their own way
VBlew commented on quokka's story chapter in Backpackers go their own way
It’s interesting that the guys they helped out seemingly just abandoned the trip, but maybe sitting in the back cramped up for the long rough trip was not what they wanted to do any longer. -
Wow, that was unexpected. So becoming a werewolf isn’t as easy as just having sex once…. Now neither of Connor’s parents want him around. Soren is trying his best to be supportive. Connor needs to accept this, even if he doesn’t feel like it. It can improve their relationship. And maybe they can talk more…
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It’s good they have asked about the living arrangements for Thomas to move to the compound. And the are so good at having discussions around their feelings, and not having uncommunicated expectations. The conversation about what seems annoying to the other, was brilliant.
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I loved this story the first time, and it’s clear you’re starting out with more detail. Setting up this teenage angst right in the first chapter. Looking forward to seeing what happens this time.
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So much happened in this chapter. But it seem Zain’s act of goin into the portal of the painting, triggered an alert to his home dimension… great cliffhanger.
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Wow, that was brutal, but seems it was necessary. Baron Evans was a nasty piece of work, and apparently had been violating children for sometime. Greg is now the Baron of Pittsburg. Are we off to see the prince next or it seems like more to come before that? He has a new household to get acquainted with.
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Great chapter. Roger and Phil are talking nightly, but there is still some fear on both their parts, it’s new and Phil is concerned about their socioeconomic differences. Colin is good for both of them. Colin does regret the way he handled breaking up with his wife. We still have to learn about Roger. This story draws you in and makes you really feel for the characters.
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Now a formed board of directors for the retreat. Looks like it will turn onto something special, and serve to help people.
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Awesome ending to this book, so glad there is a sequel coming as there are still a lot of unanswered questions. It’s good he did not get hurt more than he did fighting off three larger aggressors. Reluctant hero will have to deal with the accolades. And it’s good the Jeremy will be charged as an adult.
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That continuing pain that Nathan was hiding is now coming into something. Hopefully there is some idea of a cure. They do protect one another. It’s interesting that Cormac is talking of telling the truth, then Ollie, who always tells the truth, arrives.
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Wow, Kenji gets totally blissed out. But he wants more… will it work out? interesting mix with Alex too. It seems like he’s missing his “former” boyfriend, even though it has been a while.
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Lots going on in this chapter. Dad comes around and does apologize, but not very well received. The boys get all moved into Matt’s, their flat. Matt’s parents invited them to dinner. The family from Sydney descended and are staying till Christmas. Fortunately Matt and Luke both have to work the rest of the week, so won’t have to have too much time wasting. Luke’s darker thoughts are a concern. Is Tony gay too, just not out either?
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Sounds like they need to commandeer the prisoners ship with the godstrolls and get out of there.
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At least Emmet was aware enough to get away from Dex before he was raped. I’m still thinking Finley will do something to Dex after he finds out what happened. His desire to protect Emmet is strong. We still have yet to know what Emmet truly is. He wouldn’t shift in that area. He must be something extremely rare.
