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Great ending to this entertaining story.
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Interesting start to this story. Looking forward to where this goes. It seems they are all looking out for each other.
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Chapter Eighteen + Epilogue
VBlew commented on Mike Carss's story chapter in Chapter Eighteen + Epilogue
This was a beautiful, even if sad, ending. Nathan did finally reason he was dying, and let himself be the sacrifice for the Daemon to return home. A beautiful description of what was through the portal. Not the typical underworld picture of a desolate place. Brohm is grieving the loss of his love, and does have good memories to remember. Cormac’s advice on the daily task is a good one. Very well done story. -
I think the foil packet falls into the “or whatever “ category Justin remarked on with his showing up out of sorts, that his parents are used to. There is something there between these guys, even if just a friendship. Justin's comments about gays don’t let on anything about his own sexuality…
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Big Plans for Country Retreat
VBlew commented on quokka's story chapter in Big Plans for Country Retreat
This seems like a great use of this secret facility. It is a surprise that so many friends are working for intelligence agencies. -
Beautiful letter, literally, from Adam to Kai “Commander” what’s up with that? Something for them to explore. Nice beginning to their relationship. Also the condolences on the loss of his relationship with his boyfriend should portent to his openness. The fact that Kai is so worked up about a reply say there are feelings there….
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Wow, I hope the jerk who did the damage is in jail. What kind of “jealous boyfriend” would resort to something like that. It seems like Simon really likes Jim, but Jim is so down on himself that he doesn’t get it. Looking forward to this story.
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Love the great family dynamics. Robert is an excellent father looking out for his possibly naive son. Helping to take care of him in case something happens at the meeting with Mr Black. And Andy was good to open up about what he is doing. Even if evading his mother’s inquiry. looking forward to Saturday
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Lovely, intriguing, a writer appreciating another writer. Both single. Looking forward to this story.
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Looking forward to this story. The pride of saving someone from drowning, and the wondering of what their life becomes.
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Good thing for Hunter that he has Oscar to help him through the death of his Mother.
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Curious dream, then finding and rescuing the strange creature. What will it become? Where did it come from?
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Awesome ending to this section of the chronicles. Great time camping and getting closer to nature. Matt is ever the optimist, and his belief held out for them going to where they really wanted to go! The send off had me in happy tears. Looking forward to the rip.
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Ross and finding his diary out is a question, it may not have even been opened. He does have an active imagination. Mam may just be observing what is happening and letting him know it’s ok.
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Awesome ending of the agent and his team. The baby was safely born in the pool.
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"There Is A Light That Never Goes Out"
VBlew commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "There Is A Light That Never Goes Out"
Wow. What an incredible chapter from the passionate lovemaking to the revelation of the rare blue bird and the heart opening love embraced. -
Nathan should tell her about his bite…. She may know something the daemon did not, possibly?
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Thomas is now all moved in. And some more background and a deeper understanding of his time I’m Africa is shared, so some more bonding. Love IKEA, and as the survive the shopping and putting together the furniture, the seem to do that well, and compromise on things. Love the testing the bed. Wondering how often they will actually sleep apart now?
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Chapter Twenty-Three: Breach
VBlew commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Twenty-Three: Breach
Mark is back! Yes, but this power unleashed on Chronos, why? What did Mark learn. Seems like Sebastian was the key to him coming back to this timeline. I was just thinking about this story today and wondering when it was coming back. Looking forward to more with these guys. -
What a great short story. Dogs sure know who is good and who isn’t.
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So much going on here. Getting back to Jake ASAP. Finding him possibly blind. Hopefully the neck will heal and he will get his vision back. Then the will and finding out he inherited massive wealth, personally. Including some buried treasure.
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So with this flashback, it appears that the father was a sexual abuser of his boys. And Blue really didn’t understand what had happened at that point. Seems like he has a crush on Emmerson, but is struggling with even accepting being friends.
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Awesome ending, a wedding and honeymoon. Thanks for a very great story.
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Oscar still seems a little self centered with the discussion about the succession planning. With his psychology degree it would seem he could work through things, but apparently being a long standing family issue, he is not as objective. Good on the new job. Another property near the school, just another wealth transfer?
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Great story of two guys falling in love even one getting over societal labels of sexuality. That intuition with the animals is helpful for both their businesses.
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