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Chapter 39 - Reunion and Loss
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 39 - Reunion and Loss
They rescued the last remaining at a huge sacrifice. Now for the rest to go through the portal to Nextworld hopefully bringing the remaining parts of the ship and island with them. So sad. -
Wow, he had to travel back in time, and age regressed as well. Then apparently is going to have time to learn to use magic. It appears Zeke was hidden from this world for a reason. And really may not be as straight as Luke believes he is.
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Adam, being brought up in such a conservative community couldn’t come out… and knowing what he does about himself, can he have a good marriage? I know many do, but it just seems disingenuous.
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Mike certainly enjoyed that. Rick is being really dominant in this situation. Randy’s turn. Is Rick saving himself for Mike to come in him?
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[Memory, Freshman Year, November] – The Usual Letdowns
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Freshman Year, November] – The Usual Letdowns
This was certainly eye opening, you see people how they present themselves, when their reality is quite different. Great exploration of Lyn’s background. -
Chapter 21: Will Gael leave or give love a chance?
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 21: Will Gael leave or give love a chance?
It was all going so well all philosophical about love an relationships, then Wham, the evil monster is back… Gael just needs to kill him and get it over with. -
They have done what they can to save the magical beings Othri can feel. I agree with the others I hope the island and the ship can get to nextworld.
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This guy s exactly what I thought happened to Alan’s head. He freaked out about being more on the gay side of Bi than the Hetro side and had to prove something to himself… now that he has and has admitted it. Maybe he will be romantic with Cal. The kissing was something new for him during sex. And he admitted he wanted more from their relationship than just friends with benefits.
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Anxious start at the new school for Nick. He has an attractive and quiet, interesting roommate. Hopefully he makes some other friends too.
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Interesting world our hero is thrust into. Zeke is the King, even though he’s never been here before? Or was he hiding out on Earth? Then the evil Fornondag is trying to Mary Zelenskyy, and Luke is supposed to have powers… looking forward to more of this tale.
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This doesn’t seem like Alan’s second time bottoming. He was offended last time and now he’s begging for it. Something has definitely changed. Was he trying to woo Cal back or just preserve their relationship, which seems headed for a breakup, especially if Cal wants a boyfriend relationship with Jordan. And Cal needs to be open about his past, and current relationship with Alan so there are no hurt feelings.
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Pembrooke is a menace and not honorable, unlike Ryder who was nothing but honorable. Hopefully the bite does not mean anything, or there is a cure for whatever the bite did to him, and Ryder will recover with Danny’s care. We knew that something was off with Cassandra’s message to Ryder, some ulterior motive, but does it mean the elimination of Ryder’s pack? This cliffhanger leave me wanting the next chapter.
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Act III - You'll Never Walk Alone
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - You'll Never Walk Alone
Ray is going to find his mate! -
S2 E3: Take Your Time With Me
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in S2 E3: Take Your Time With Me
I’m wondering if Elliott is the photographer for Dylan’s reason for being in Paris? That could get awkward or turn into something good for all of them…. -
Another awesome chapter, with Daniel’s testimony and identification of additional victims, the prosecution will have even more to keep the perpetrators in jail. Joshua was unclear about how much he is loved and wanted. I have a suspicion he is afraid his girlfriend will want sex, and he may not be ready for that yet….
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Luke had some pretty vivid dreams about Zeke. Got a raise at work, and now has some spare change.
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Maybe the sword is testing Luther..
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What is Brother Mathias? A predecessor to the evil Cardinal?
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Interesting forplay….
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So the intriguing question is are Lanelle and Halric Vane working together? She really seemed to fuel Rory’s fears, and Halric Chas been very stoic? The question is who are they working for? Kieran will hopefully finish his trials in 2 nights and Rory will feel the strength coming from him, and maybe be able to use his magic again, as I have a feeling they are going to need it soon.
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Interesting reflection. Like they traded places.
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Jamie, what did you do? I get you’re angry, but blaming cottontail for your mess was not nice. Hearst does need to do some cleanup. What is Wencel hoping to gain from all of this. Jamie was spot on with the gossip rag comment. Jamie needs to start thinking of ways to improve his image, and just dumped his biggest fan/supporter…
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Fun chapter, this story is like a master class in writing. Noticing people’s mannerisms, similarities and differences. Also, interesting information on The holidays for those of us unfamiliar with them. Love the joyful banter between all of the guys.
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Josel doesn’t understand his jealousy, and Zdain has not told him how much he liked him. Renn certainly is a character, provoking Josel…
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So evicted and moving in with his good friend.
