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Loved the chapter, on to a new adventure, treasure hunting as wolves. Good on him for researching about the red wolves, that could have had very bad consequences. They’re still in possible danger as grey wolves, but less so. I’m thinking they will find some treasure, just maybe not what they were expecting. The sexual play with their friends is interesting. I don’t remember them having a conversation about playing outside there, what seemed, monogamous relationship. They definitely haven’t done anything writhing anyone while at school.
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Pete learns from Jimmy’s mother that Turner wanted her and her husband to force Jimmy into reparative therapy or Micca would lose his job. Turner really has something messed up in his past to make this something required of an employee… and 5he fact that Uncle George is so open and accepting of Pete. They are polar opposites. Love this story, is going to be sad when it’s over. Maybe a sequel?
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Another awesome chapter. The ribbing Beau about wanting a shower with his brother was cute…. They still need to get around to telling Andre about how Beau got so friendly. They are all going to be neighbors and Ollie is getting his best friend back. The foster system is working well in this situation. Looking forward to them moving to their new space.
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So this one body theory is interesting. Way back when M bashed the MIB and Connor threw the dead body in the swamp. He must have regenerated somehow. If the kill him now, will M be able to access his ship? That could have the tech to help with the birth process.
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Oscar now has his housing situated. Wondering how much his grandparents set this up for him, is seems really convenient that it all happened like this. He’ll be working on Jake’s farm in exchange for rent. The hand rail car is confident for moving along that boundary.
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The trip is interesting, Connor and Bradley’s conversation about her past was insightful. Connor could have had the twerp who bumped into him replace the ramen, but he’s too hard headed for that. As to the agent following them, did he chip Hannah when he abducted her? That’s how he found Conor and M in FL the first time…. I hope he was lying about Mother, but maybe not. Did she have some foreknowledge of this and that’s why she told Connor he was going to have to take care of M?
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Damn, Luke was being so self centered and not even appreciative about Matt’s feelings, then goes to the known toilets and lets a total stranger play with him… then getting caught in the act. He must have been subconsciously wanting to come out, but this was not a good way to do it. Matt didn’t even do anything and was accused by people who saw him in the area, this is going to be way worse. And is Matt going to be sympathetic after this?
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Awesome chapter. Hopefully Zain can get to the boys quickly to rescue them.
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The vacation, day 2 and already a murder to solve. Shame that a nice boy working his way through school is killed.
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Sounds like an interesting trip. At least he didn’t have a panic attack seeing Giles naked, and after explaining Giles remembered the incident and apologized.
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They need to find a way to get a Godstroll without having it loose so much blood. Maybe with the new sword Lyoth can make cleaner kills?
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Finley is more confused after speaking with his brother, hopefully there is an explanation for what has triggered this emotional response in him. He has some kind of feelings for Emmet, just not sure what it is.
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Now with Chapter 2 in there it makes some of what is in the tru chapter 3 make more sense. Loving their adventure. Looking forward to the conversation with DJ and Hoss….
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Nice start to this story. Their relationship is interesting, Grayson seems really into Corey, but it’s not reciprocated. And Grayson has a girlfriend… but is oblivious to his effect on the girl in the cafe. It seems there may be a stalker. Looking forward to see where this goes.
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Another great adventure for the boys, the places they went kayaking sounded really nice.
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River is glad that their lists mostly overlap. The kissing item is interesting. Could it b cultural or just something that Kenji thinks would bring more entanglement than he thinks he wants. They are both clearly liking each other at this point, but I can see River getting more emotionally involved. He doesn’t really have anyone else in his life besides his friends, and running off with strangers from a bar. And I’m betting he stops doing that.
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Great ending to this case. You all know this is a detective series, so something has to happen while they are on vacation… 😉
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Brandon has some serious issues with his belief in himself, and after being in love with Billy for so long, to chicken out like he did is rough.
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Mother did tell Connor he was going to have to take care of M for a while. Maybe she went for backup?
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This story has so much heart. I love how Pete is just his awesome self. Heading right to things, not ignoring and hiding, playing games. He is open and honest, doing what he thinks is right, like letting the guy he’s been coaching take that position on the team. Facing Mitch, after he cooled off some. Curious about this special dinner…
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What an ending, wow. Love of Thomas and Adam endures. Daniel gets his Aziel back and they make a life together.
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Good on Oscar for wanting to defend his friend, especially after Al the early trauma he went through.
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Calvin is a perpetual liar, and doesn’t even understand about perjury…. That’s going to come back and bit him. I bet after the next day in court, his “wife” is going to be asking for divorce, unless she is part of the scheme to get custody of Bryan and Caleb for some yet unknown financial reason…
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What happened to Mother? Hannah got abducted, and M thinks her memories were accessed. If Bradley was fired by “ higher ups” are there more agents out there, or just one with a lot of connections? the baby is growing faster than a normal human would…
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All the speculation about what could happen when Wanda was let into the circle of trust was unfounded. She’s now ordering things around taking care of her new grandson.
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