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Matt now has Jakob, who wants to have a relationship with him…. Oscar doesn’t even know what he missed out on. More revealed about the new students, Ralph is put in his place.
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Chapter 9 - Balancing Act
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 9 - Balancing Act
It’s nice to see these guys growing together, discussing their issues, and working things out. Manny will at some point need to introduce Robby into the conversation with his parents. The deception with Cindy is just prolonging this, they already accepted him… -
Amazing chapter, so much just in a couple of days. The messages, then communications with Earth. Surprised they spoke with Brazil before communication with Ark V. But there was a threat that they possibly needed to know about. Hopefully it was just dementia… It’s good to see the animals responding nicely to the humans.
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Interesting ending, the murderer got away with the prize. Looking forward to more with these characters, especially Sampson and Troy.
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This is interesting, Ben finally has the courage to tell Justin what he wants. And they both have some feelings. But it would not be good for either of their relationships to have an affair.
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Beautiful ending, even if sad about Gil, in the PostScript. It is a testament to friends helping friends heal from a broken heart.
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Maybe the firm could open an office in Wyoming for Michael? Love that they both realized their affection for each other. Then spent the day in pleasure your partner mode.
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Interesting cruise, and many ideas on what to do better with the artificial reefs they will be making. Lovely way to ask to get married.
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Hopefully he won’t have to wait too long for an emissary to get his return notice to Rym. In the meantime it looks like he has a welcoming place to reside in Brookside.
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Great ending to this mystery story. It was a rough ride. An example of what abuse in a family can lead to. Brilliant writing. Looking forward to more of your writing.
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The parents are being great supporters for both guys.
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Chapter 6 - Close Encounters
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Close Encounters
An olive branch for peace between Cindy and “Manny”. Baby steps. -
The Family That Plays Together
VBlew commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in The Family That Plays Together
Funny times waking up. What a happy, loving group. -
Oh the plot thickens. The uncle was not just a pedophile messing with his nephew, the police have lots of other evidence now, and he was working for the mob…. Although having him silenced in custody wouldn’t be a bad ending, it wouldn’t help them keep other boys safe….
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Chapter 5 - Fixing Stupid
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Fixing Stupid
Finally a slap strong enough to get him out of his funk. Both Robby and Mason are a little at fault in their relationship. Innuendo is not good enough in a relationship, that has uncommunicated expectations all over it and only leads to hurt, which is what we see in this chapter. Finally they are able to have frank discussions and are healing their relationship. Hopefully Mason did not do too badly that he will lose his scholarship…. -
Great chapter, Troy and Sampson’s tryst was revealed, but led people to believe it was part of the story and not reality… I’m still no closer to sticking a suspect. I’m sure the clues are all there, just not grasping it yet. There are multiple people who could have motive.
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I like how Marc is able to negotiate, treat people fairly, and use his knowledge to help improve the results in his mining, and it looks like i5 will pay off in more improvements to his ship. The fun he is having with Sasha seems good for just a friend with benefits. Looking forward to the sparks flying when he meets his true mate…
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It seems like Bunny boy is going to drop his masks and see how Jamie reacts to him as his “ normal” self. Here’s to hoping that Jamie will recognize him, and get to know him better.
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Chapter 3 - New Beginnings
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 3 - New Beginnings
Mason gets to college ok, settling in, and has what seems like a great roommate. Is Robby just putting on an act because it’s what he thinks is expected with the talk of Cindy liking Mason? Then the walk home conversation insinuating something else. And the quick undressing and smirk. Seems like he is questioning himself too. -
Callum's journey to the Patricids was fraught with drama and humor, guard peeing right next to him. He should have had the pass out and ready to show. It’s a good thing the leader let him show it and the letter from Rym. Excellent chapter.
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Interesting story. The question many have asked, what happens when we die? Well presented. And one of a myriad of possibilities.
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And the mystery deepens. Several people with motive, who had the opportunity and took advantage? Looking forward to finding out who the detective will be and the part they play in uncovering the murderer.
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Great chapter, unloading their past, well mostly. Doug had more to disclose, and went to bed worrying about what Michael would do with his coming out to him…. Michael’s decision to comfort Doug is a good sign.
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Great chapter. Temporary interruption for info on the probe coming to them from earth. Now out of their final stasis and ready to inhabit Gaea. They will need to respond to the probe when it finally arrives. Although they could now, I’m thinking they should wait. Earth seems like it has degraded after the nuclear winter… dictators and bossy military leaders… Mars seemed better, but it too has its own problems. Seems like this could be a problem, but a long way off. This Ark seems to have had the best people on it and they are all working together to create a better world. I’m also thinking they will not be sharing their technology breakthroughs with the other people… looking forward to whatever is coming.
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Interesting little twist there, loosing the ability to see Auras. Wonder what the children’s abilities are? Hopefully will find out soon. Great ending.
