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Ash had been hinting about wanting children so at some point one of them has to get pregnant… and in this world is seem only special male Fae and women can do that…. But that could be years in the future. I really loved the strategy session. That shadow magic of invisibility will be coming in handy, I’m sure. Great advice by both Rory and Kieran. Looking forward to more.
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Chapter 2: HR Wouldn't Like This
VBlew commented on BrokenBoundariesGayErotica's story chapter in Chapter 2: HR Wouldn't Like This
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They could have had something for him to snack on knowing he was going to be hungry after turning… hopefully a human doesn’t get in the way.
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Beautiful short story. It took a caring mother’s intervention to get these guys together, and it led to a happy ending.
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Chapter 15 - The Human
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 15 - The Human
Now a possible human rebel to join them? -
They really seem meant for each other.
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This chapter had a beautiful coronation, a battle royal, a rescue, games, sex and a speech of hope. This old Fae Zareth needs to be called out for his treason and executed or stripped of magic? Desmond and Ash are hilarious. They will be good spies.
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Maybe the relaxing time will help Leo. I still don’t get why he won’t get his tongue fixed… but as a plot device it’s working.
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Not sure how much power the witches have with the King gone, that this is even worth the trade of a potential heir. The vampires will come but how soon, and with the return of many shifters the may be able to hold them back. I’m thinking this is a very bad thing and Ray is going to be very upset, maybe not at Gabriel but this seeming betrayal of his mate is going to have consequences…
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I was surprised at Alan’s reaction, and his feeling he was violated. The discussion afterwards was good. And I agree he needs to do some more soul searching. He doesn’t want to be labeled gay for some reason…. The upcoming date should be interesting. Was Alan’s “keep your distance”something other than health reasons?
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This was an unexpected twist. Maybe it will bring them closer together. Jim needs to learn some mental health skills and quit spiraling thing out of proportion. Some meditation practice for example. Will he bring Jon to meet the boys, outside of Alex’s training? That could be a big step forward.
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Jasper is taking notice of Ryan and encouraging him. After initially misjudging him. Hopefully the relationship grows to help each be better.
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@Lee Wilson I was just thinking the same thing. Jake’s date went bad and he walks in on this scene with his brother and best friend in a very compromising position… seems like it will be Dylan pounding Troy very soon, his comment about not knowing guys could give blowjobs that good seems like this may be his first time with a guy. If that’s the case, hopefully he goes easy on the entry…
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The Dark Side of Jamie Vayne
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Dark Side of Jamie Vayne
Just about to hit that google search for Jamie’s last name, and Laura leaves us hanging till next week. I’m surprised that Hearst gave that promise to his brother. He has no intention of keeping it. -
Love the giving nature, led to help those in need. They are both doing that in their own way. And they will love this child.
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The market was fun, the healers and Fae counsel not so much. It all seemed so one sided. The subtle hints of Kieran seeing the bald bitch, and Helmsfirth agents, was nice foreshadowing. It does seem that Rory’s small use of magic being so draining is a problem. Hopefully this ancient bonding ritual will be a good thing for them, and not a problem. Seems like more of a hero’s journey for Kieran. And will he be able to get it done in time. Seem unusually convenient that the majority of the soldiers are away from the castle for the coronation… with the threat of attack coming. I think the counsel is going to be thrown into disarray with the attack. Hopefully they are crowned beforehand.
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The Night With Mr. Maddox (Finale)
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in The Night With Mr. Maddox (Finale)
Great conclusion to an interesting story. Two very satisfied men with a great beginning to what could be a long term relationship. -
This was a great thanksgiving dinner with their chosen family. Will’s grateful speech brought a lot of emotional energy, he does seem to be in a better place. The lack of any clues on the murder mystery front have some of them down.
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Seth has changed, being more dominant. And seems to have remembered personal hygiene.
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Is it medication the Ryan should be taking, that caused the fainting. That was a lot of stress for a seeming introvert.
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With Henry being in the same area as Teyshawn and Devon, when police arrive they will likely find him. Maybe he’ll make his way to Liberty Academy? Devon is going to need medical attention for his wounded shoulder. Will the gang let them get away?
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Awesome reunion for the brothers. They will now be able to stay in touch. Excellent news that the police acted in a coordinated effort and arrested a lot of people.
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Liam is hooked now.
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Loved this quiet inquiry path, finding out more about the housemates. Found a Way to what? Great cliffhanger.
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First Touch, First Hunger
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in First Touch, First Hunger
Anticipation is what the end of this chapter is. Delicious.
