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Chapter 4 - Truth and Lust.
VBlew commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Truth and Lust.
Seems like Corey noticed the interaction between Nate and Max, and was direct in his wanting to confront that and express how he felt about Nate, before something happened and he lost his opportunity to be with Nate. Very well done, and it seems like they can better understand each other now.- 22 comments
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I’ve been missing this story. Great chapter. Fun part about waking up as a shadow, and learning hot get your body back. The flashback was touching. He misses his friends. It’s going to be interesting when the see each other again.
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Beautiful hopeful story. I like how you ended it with anticipation of a great future.
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Loved this chapter. Especially that Randy came back and is interested enough to ask serious questions. Next all three in bed. Woof!
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Matty got so much more than he ever imagined he could with Rusty. Jonathan was seeing what was happening with them and got the rest of the group in line with making them feel comfortable, not razing Rusty about their relationship, now that he is beginning to come to terms with himself.
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Great beginning to this new story. Lots of chaos, just for staying in the closet. And it seems like Craig is taking advantage of that. The boy in the other bed seemed nice, but nobody was visiting him. It was good of Seth to help him out.
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Great beginning, at least now both guys know how they feel. Jacob just needs to hear from Tyler….
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Fun new trips, they’re all enjoying the yachts again. Love the bit with the dolphins, they are pretty amazing to watch playing along side a boat.
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The vets keep doing good work wherever they go. Even on vacation.
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Sad chapter, parting is such sweet sorrow. Glad that Mateo has Bud to confide in.
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So it seems that Soren can change into anything he knows, but it’s a process.
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Their love is real. There is a gift exchange coming up. A sad parting of ways, and it seems some finality to the relationship, or maybe not… hopefully they stay in touch. Could there be other summers? Maybe not, but wishfully thinking. Jericho will have the loving support of his family and friends, but will Mateo?
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Loving how they turned something negative into a pleasant adventure. Love the picture of the coach. Don’t know that we could get something like that here in the US. I know my husband would love something like it.
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Great chapter, sharing their love. Hard to believe the summer is almost over.
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Chapter 24 - The Clash
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 24 - The Clash
Maybe this travesty will have them Messiahs rethink their supposed superiority and change, but it’s doubtful since they have to kill shifts to keep up their ranks. -
Pulled in a Dozen Directions
VBlew commented on Refugium's story chapter in Pulled in a Dozen Directions
Is Ike talking about Samael’s relationship with Billy? With Andy so busy, Samael May have to defend himself. -
Looks like a different character’s perspective in this Necko and werewolf verse or yours. Looking forward to it.
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Mateo seem really upset but can’t identify what the problem is, other than wanting to see all of Jericho. And Jericho for some reason has a hang up about that. But it seems there is more to it. Hopefully the guys can help him figure it out.
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I’m glad they actually spoke and corrected the misunderstanding. Now on to rebuilding their relationship.
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Great chapter, seems like a good time was had on the 4th of July.
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I’m glad that was an April Fools joke, I could not imagine you tying up everything in one chapter. Looking like things are working well for everyone
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Kalian is free again, and hopefully he can being Loren back. In the meantime find his sister and destroy a fleet of ships.
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The Problem With Cosplaying
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Problem With Cosplaying
So much in this chapter. A fun shopping trip, an intriguing visitor from Rusty’s past, which stirs up memories, opening up to Maddox a little. Matty’s crazy roommate slashing his cosplay outfit, and Matty threatens the roommate with consequences! What’s Matty going to wear to the party now? Does he have time to get a new costume? Or go to an old standby? Even though it’s not a superhero? I don’t think he’s ready to reveal his alter ego yet with all of the issues he had concerning the tight fit of the Nightwing costume. -
So much intriguing info in this chapter. Sad that Grayson would want to stay broken. is Ashton Tala’s grandfather?
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Great chapter, out on their first mission, and the one they’ve targeted created the augmentation that Zafiro had forced on him… maybe this will lead to a solution, or possibly more of a challenge for him. Especially if the guy wanted to be captured.
